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Date Posted: 21:47:47 04/07/02 Sun
Author: Mr Chao
Author Host/IP: acheron.uwa.edu.au / 130.95.128.50
Subject: Re: Once a Dream, Still Ever a Sweetness (fiction story)
In reply to: Jim 's message, "Re: Once a Dream, Still Ever a Sweetness (fiction story)" on 11:53:23 04/05/02 Fri

Jim,

thanks for your comment, you're right, I am just learning, hopefully I can write better later on.

Thanks to you again

Mr Chao


> Mr. Chao,
> And I'm not trying to be a prick, it's an honest
>question, I ask because of your handle and your use of
>the language: is english your native language?
> Why use "amidst" and "amongst" when "amid" and
>"among" will do? Also, you tend to light all over the
>place, rarely finishing a thought or description
>before leaping to the next. You mustn't be so darned
>impatient. Slow, down, have fun, take pleasure in the
>language, I promise, it won't let you down, and you
>will eventually get to the end.
> Two books worth read, bibles actually, "The
>Elements of Style" by William Strunk and E.B. White,
>and "The Associated Press Guide To Newswriting" by
>Rene Cappon. The latter was intended for aspiring
>journalists, as you gleaned from the title, but is
>just as inspiring and informative to creative writers.
> English was not Rene Cappon's native language,
>yet he had a deep and abiding love for it. He said,
>"Writing is the art of the second thought."
> Jim

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