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Date Posted: 23:29:00 11/06/02 Wed
Author: Dare
Author Host/IP: NoHost / 203.116.61.131
Subject: Re: Some somewhat exciting news (for me, anyways)
In reply to: D1 's message, "Some somewhat exciting news (for me, anyways)" on 03:54:59 11/06/02 Wed

2nd pg: CW on the branch looks mighty odd. The butt and legs don't quite sit right.

Last pic on page: It's an OK shot, but it spoils the next shocker on the following page coz it'sthe same pose and it's already got the spidey-sense alert thing going.I think a different pose might be better, eg CW getting off her branch, pulling back some leaves for a clearer look etc. Something that says "I know there's something there but I'm not showing ya to build the anticipation".

3rd pg: Is that Dino jumping down from a tree onto CW in a tree, or are they both on groundlevel? I think you need to establish things like that. Dino looks a bit friendly, IMO. CW's body language is OK, but her hand is a little weak. It looks flaccid in contrast to what's happening.

Well, it ain't no Quietly, but hey, I've seen Tick and Flaming Carrot stuff that's uglier than this. :-)

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