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Date Posted: 12:20:22 05/09/02 Thu
Author: J.P. Ragan
Subject: J.P.'s Thoughts II
In reply to: J.P. Ragan 's message, "J.P.'s Thoughts I" on 11:57:25 05/09/02 Thu

Rabbit - Ahhhh, what's up doc? Maybe, just edit it down a
bit.

Earthquake - Good idea.

Aspirin - Whoa. That was scary. Maybe if it was made
clear that they were pushing some kind of psychotic drug
or something it could be made funny.

Casablanca - I don't know if that's SNL style of skit.
It might actually work on some other skit show as a
non-sequitor style skit.

ABC - The idea and format is good. Would be nice if it
was more than just naming stuff.

Mentos - It's good.

(aside)
Why do most of the skits have African Americans either
as criminals or saying things like "Put a cap in your
a**.". C'mon people!

Meat Packing Plant - The idea is brilliant. I agree with Patrick that the last line should be cut. I would have
liked to see more focus on using bugs and stuff. Mmmm
crunchy carapace burgers...

Wake of the Dolls - argh. The writing is good but I do
not like the skits that rely on a parade of characters to
drive it along. And Amy Poehler is supposed to be barbie!
She has shapely legs. Heh.

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