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Subject: Re: 唔該幫我睇下,我eng合唔合格呀

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ipl

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Date Posted: 04:20:42 04/28/03 Mon
In reply to: cherry kam 's message, "唔該幫我睇下,我eng合唔合格呀" on 01:51:00 04/28/03 Mon

The first //graph is off topic. As you know, some of the markers are very lazy, they only look at the first and last //graph to judge whether you are off topic.If this compo. is marked by that kind of marker, you will probably get fail. If you want to use some facts to act as your introduction, you can simply say,'Many females want to lose weight in order to keep themselves slim. Some of them......, some of them ....... However I think the most effective way is to......'
For the content, it is OK if you just want to pass, but you should minimize your spelling mistakes such as image,modals,there are, not there have.
If you match the title closely in your first and last //graph,you will certainly pass.

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Subject	Author	Date
Re: 唔該幫我睇下,我eng合唔合格呀	ipl	04:25:48 04/28/03 Mon
Re: 唔該幫我睇下,我eng合唔合格呀 -- eric, 00:51:39 05/02/03 Fri