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Date Posted: 14:22:10 11/01/03 Sat
Author: deepblueeos
Subject: Super!
In reply to: nightangel 's message, "Der Schutzengel! (eine etwas längere Geschichte)" on 11:11:21 10/31/03 Fri

Ich finds auch eine wunderschöne Geschichte !*heuteMorgensoetwasbrauchte* :)

Hm ich würd auch absolut nichts ändern.. das einzige Wort, was man eventuell weglassen könnte, wäre das allerletzte: "mein Leben!" Ich denke, es ist gut genug ersichtlich, was gemeint ist, und wenn dus weglässt gibt das einen etwas geheimnisvolleren nachdenklicheren Effekt, als wenn es so sinnbildich einem gleich in den Mund gelegt wird ;)

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  • Der Schutzengel! (ein klein wenig überarbeitet) -- nightangel, 14:44:31 11/05/03 Wed
  • wow -- deepblueeos, 20:56:10 11/06/03 Thu
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