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Date Posted: 00:44:43 09/07/01 Fri
Author: Shelly
Author Host/IP: 1Cust61.tnt2.stockton-da.ca.da.uu.net / 65.227.73.61
Subject: This one
In reply to: Commissioner Shelly English 's message, "A couple pointers." on 00:36:24 09/07/01 Fri

You are a half way decent RPer. I see alot of potential in your style. If you want to succeed in the GWA, you need to know a couple things.

1. I'm not very fond of centered RP lines. I think it looks tacky. Though we don't take points away for that, I find it very hard to read. Try using left aligned, or justified.

2. You should not use Edge and Christian as a full character basis. Picture base is fine. But using the personalities, or gimmick isn't very readable appealing. Try to come up with a unique gimmick.

3. Overall the Rp sort of bland. Try using more descriptive terms, and settings.

It's not a RP, just not the style we are looking for. If you can improve upon those suggestions I have offered then you could make it far. Don't hesistate to apply again.

Thanks for your time, Commissioner Shelly English

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