Subject:  Pippin: The Life o' a tiny mouse. |
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Date Posted: 21:56:00 03/06/05 Sun
Okay, this going to be pretty well corrected.
Pippin, son of a great warrior father, and lovely cook mother, was strangely the smallest mouse known in existence. He is small and black, and is quite exxelent at fighting wiff a wooden swo'd.
We lived in this twee, and had some freinds there. But me daddy wanted to leave to a gweat castle known as "Redwall."
On the day we left, vermin piled through this place. My dad told me how to use a bow 'n' arrow amd sword. So i shot one in the head wiff my blunt arrow tip. He was stunned, and i was alone. He chased me and grabed me. I thwacked 'im a good 'un on his head, and he dwopped me. Then i saw an arrow stuck in his head. It was kinda scawwey. My dad was there, aiming his bow at another vermin. He shot in staright through the stomach. The vermin, dagger out, toppled over, dead, but his dagger thrust into another vermins heart. The vermin leader, CLunky jood, was mad at my dad. BUt Clunky Jood kept still. Some goodbeasts came and drew their daggers, and fended off the vermin from the hole in the ground where we kept supplies. 10 mice guarding the hole pulled back their bowstrings and let fly a fleet of arrows into the Rats fighting my dad. Dad was out of arrows, but picked up more from a dead rat on his foot. He kicked the rat into an approaching rat, tripping him. He then grabbed an arrow and stabbed in in the tripped rats heart. All the time i was watching my dad fight theese rats from up in a tree wiff mommy, once i escaped. I tripped rats with my sword to get there. When they were tripped, Sword mice stabbed them. Meanwhile dad used on arrow to kill a rat on a hill, sending him flailing into the river nearby. His last arrow was aimed at the vermin leader. He fired. The vermin deputys head was grazed, squirting blood in the air like a minature fountain for 1 second. And then the arrow landed in Clunky jood's spine. He cried, "CLunka joad, clunky joad!" And then dropped to his knees, and fell to one side. Dad screamed in victory, but he was wrong. The two rats jood calle dout beat his head until he was what looked like dead in the grass. I up in the trees, knocked out one of dem wif my blunt arrow. 5 bowmice slaughterd the Rats, their bodys fallling by dads. The sword mice then killed the vermin, all but the deputy. Mommy was by dad, mourning. But dad woke up. He chaesd the deputy, and beheaded the rat with his sword.
See, I's was walklin to's Redwall abbeys, but we'z had to walk cwoss a big mountain, called sawamandystwon or sumpin.
Hares fwom da Long patwol congratulated dad and taught me how to fight good.
So's we left. It was a good trip, untill one night.
Dad told Mom to get some fish fer supper. We slept. And waited. But mom was gone. So we sadly continued to redwall, and now, I's be's happy here.
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