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Date Posted: 04:43:49 09/18/02 Wed
Author: Leatrix
Author Host/IP: netcache2-acld.auckland.clix.net.nz / 203.97.2.243
Subject: Not bad...
In reply to: KatLurkin 's message, "DISCUSSION: Anywhere But Here by Sarah T" on 23:00:45 09/17/02 Tue

This one is probably the hardest to grade, as neither Dawn or Ethan Rayne have had a lot of screen time in terms of character development. Dawn has been perceived as whiny and Ethan seems to be an ambivilent individual.

Sarah T has done a good job developing these two characters into believeable individuals. I rate it 7 out of 10.

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[> Re: DISCUSSION: Anywhere But Here by Sarah T -- Kaylorin, 10:09:46 09/18/02 Wed (pcp632159pcs.newhvn01.in.comcast.net/68.53.200.184)

Anywhere But Here: Stays in the Buffyverse. Clear characterazation. Original, yes. I dunno if I buy what
The author is selling. A few points felt... wrong. But its just me feeling, nothing I could find in the
story was incorect. Found no mistakes. Moved smoothly, if not quickly. Not confusing, and if anyone wanted
to read a story with Ethan, I would recomend it.

Overall score: Very good / 89


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