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Date Posted: 22:44:44 09/22/02 Sun
Author: Girl Guide jones
Author Host/IP: dhcp024-210-034-173.columbus.rr.com / 24.210.34.173
Subject: Re: DISCUSSION: Stormy Night by eretria
In reply to: KatLurkin 's message, "DISCUSSION: Stormy Night by eretria" on 22:54:34 09/17/02 Tue

I have to be honest and say that I didn't even finish this story, so maybe my rating shouldn't count. I was thrown off by the poor characterizations. I practically didn't recognize them.

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[> Re: DISCUSSION: Stormy Night by eretria -- Tarasgirl, 00:56:50 09/23/02 Mon (ppp-208-15-96-30.dialup.ltrkar.swbell.net/208.15.96.30)

i guess i am totally different because i did like this one. it was sweet and endearing for a little short, mini-fic. ok i suppose it was a bit of fantasy nothing that would really happen on the show and the dialouge didn't exactly pop but i did love the premise and the romance of the story. the timing was a bit off, that could easily be revised if the author so chose. the starting of the story is the best and the end shifts a bit away from the beginning theme, but other than some revisions i think it is a cute, quick moving, romance.
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