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Subject: Re: Are You Lonesome?


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klang wizard
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Date Posted: 19:45:20 08/24/10 Tue
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In reply to: klang wizard 's message, "Re: Are You Lonesome?" on 19:21:12 08/24/10 Tue

>On Hurt: a Reply
>
>I am hurt
>Because I care
>Persistent asking send me into despair.
>
>I am hurt
>Because my needs are not met;
>Yet you think I am mad.
>
>I am hurt
>Because my efforts end in pain;
>Yet you insist I reap gain.
>
>I am hurt
>Because of many frustration;
>And you lack proper reciprocation.
>
>Endless time, the oolong tea, you meditatively sipped;
>Unaware that our distance slurred and slipped.
>Now, at the end of living;
>We all regret the sad beginning.


LG,
Will you permit me to publish your poem "on Hurt" in my Forum. I shall delete the word Ray in the third stanza, or Ray has to appear on the beginning of the line?

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Ray our Dear Friend from '64, where are you?Little Grasshopper06:09:51 08/25/10 Wed


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