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Date Posted: 10:03:38 09/28/02 Sat
Author: 捕手
Subject: 提問

「陽光在地球的另一端／靜候著山坡上的羊群／其中一隻突然停止了吃草／抬起了頭」——〈地下詩人〉（贈黃粱），《與我無關的東西》，鴻鴻。

剛剛在中大的詩社網頁見到以上幾句，不得不提出以下疑問：
既然「突然」又怎會「停止了」、「抬起了」？「了」字表示動作已經完成，事情早已發生，與「突然」表示的是兩種時態，自相矛盾，所以我認為「了」字根本多餘，而且混淆了意思，作者犯了小學生常犯的毛病，濫用「了」字。不知各位有何意見？

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Replies:

希望這裡的老師及各位不吝賜教 -- 蝸牛, 23:25:59 10/01/02 Tue
- 問題在那邊發現，怎麼過海來問? (NT) -- 老陳, 00:12:58 10/02/02 Wed
- 詩的語法篇 -- 方綺, 00:37:52 10/02/02 Wed
  - 也不能假設人地有心捉蟲 -- 老陳, 03:38:15 10/02/02 Wed
    - 略有啟發 -- 捕手, 09:56:58 10/02/02 Wed
      - 語言是大眾的工具，免不了有時要從俗 (NT) -- 老陳, 18:35:10 10/02/02 Wed
        小小回應 -- 某某, 19:06:41 10/02/02 Wed
        我點知。見到就當有，唔見就當無啦。 -- 老陳, 20:11:53 10/02/02 Wed
        再回應多次 -- 某某(嘿嘿...你問老符我係邊個喇), 20:50:42 10/02/02 Wed
  - 用不著這樣說話吧 -- 捕手, 09:34:58 10/02/02 Wed
    - 哈哈..開開玩笑..並非惡意指你捉虫, 所指係一種普遍的現象 -- 方綺, 09:40:17 10/02/02 Wed

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