Re: I showed you mind, let's see yours -- West Coast Angler

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Date Posted: 17:49:42 01/22/00 Sat
Author: Moby
Subject: Re: I showed you mind, let's see yours
In reply to: hd 's message, "I showed you mind, let's see yours" on 09:42:20 01/22/00 Sat

>Bruce...
Back off. You asked for opnions and you got them. I think that what you write is creative. and very entertaining. But don"t go after the guy that just gave you what you asked for.. Take it all and expound on what you hear. Not going to get into Slaming and Flameing on WCA. Keep going Bruce. It's good. Catch Ya ...
Moby See, what I was fishing for was constructive
> criticism. (Example: needs character development,
> these characters are two dimensional, etc.) rather
> than "Stop writing, you don't have it. If I am to
> improve I must be open to constructive
> critism...that's not what you posted. After a quick
> tuck & roll...the flames are out.
>
> You wrote: "I have done quite a bit of writing in my
> time and may not be very talented but I know the
> basics."
>
> I would like to see an example of your writing. Since
> you've done quite a bit, that shouldn't be too much of
> a burden on you right? Perhaps if I read a correctly
> written piece, I'll learn something. IMHO, creativity
> is rare and you've either got it or you don't. You
> cannot learn creativity but you can "learn the
> basics". For this reason I suppose I'll continue to
> try to write. If only for my personal enjoyment.
>
> So000...I showed you mine, let's see yours Cortez.

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Replies:

Re: I showed you mind, let's see yours -- Moby, 17:50:29 01/22/00 Sat

Back Off? -- hd, 20:09:44 01/22/00 Sat

Re: Back Off? -- Moby, 04:02:45 01/23/00 Sun
- Good stuff!!! -- posydon, 09:09:37 01/23/00 Sun
Whatever... -- tcortez, 10:54:02 01/23/00 Sun
- Try Fatbrain.com -- tcortez, 16:24:46 02/04/00 Fri