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Date Posted: 15:07:25 02/17/04 Tue
Author: Highlander
Author Host/IP: pD9037883.dip.t-dialin.net / 217.3.120.131
Subject: Re: The Sliver Of Glass
In reply to: AGS 's message, "The Sliver Of Glass" on 21:55:35 02/16/04 Mon

That my friend, is utter class poetry and crafted writing.....perhaps the best you�ve written, this was mind blowing....I bow before thee

Highlander

>That pail of gold beneath your crown
>so cherished, of ivory white
>though sifted parts enamored round
>does flow the miseries nights
>
>Or tossed said he around you be
>very blessedness of the stare
>in woven times submit the rhymes
>and glass of windows clear
>
>Sought there to see those chimes of thee
>sweet hallowed in the ring
>a tender gold cannot be sold
>shall usher in that tree
>
>And longest drop from up the top
>her leaves that flow the ground
>and please there feel that broken seal
>ignites the flowers sound
>
>Soft inner bell, it wails it tells
>the glories ring and where
>and up on skies the birds to fly
>the soundings to resound
>
>A shattered moon of earth and gloom
>and clouds all bunched in circles
>the rain to fall and time on all
>still sounded glass as symbols

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Replies:

Re: The Sliver Of Glass -- Raphaela, 15:13:36 02/17/04 Tue

Re: The Sliver Of Glass -- AGS, 06:24:28 02/18/04 Wed

Re: The Sliver Of Glass -- Raphaela, 09:14:00 02/18/04 Wed