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Date Posted: 13:16:06 06/08/02 Sat
Author: SuSanne
Author Host/IP: pool-63.53.141.234.nwrk.grid.net / 63.53.141.234
Subject: An Answer


AN ANSWER


Why I'm so hung up
Is the teaching of myself.
Attempting to learn
Trim and svelte.

Not only of poetry
Also a slow computer burn
Into my memory banks
For learning, I so yearn.

To understand my faults
I trust on feedback
Teaching me more
Of which sometimes, I so lack.

From one board to another
My attempts are placed
Wanting gentle honestly
To perhaps help me, save my face.

Of not writing, if not needed
Since who if any, has time to waste?
With lack of comments, haven't been able to heed
That my poems need more, than just copy and paste.

I am not angry or even upset,
Just grateful I finally got an honest answer
Though still finding it hard that it applies to all
My poems, reading like a gaudy dancer.

But if this is true,
Must learn to swallow my pride
Taking stock to reassess
How to save my little writer's hide.


© SuSanne &*_*&


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