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Date Posted: 20:53:58 06/08/02 Sat
Author: AAAAGGGSSS
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Subject: Re: Gurgling Waters
In reply to: SuSanne 's message, "Gurgling Waters" on 09:47:10 06/07/02 Fri

The water gurgling
Awakes her from sleep
With her dreaming
Of images to keep.

Of a beautiful spring day
Wrapping her with lush
Of reborn, in the month of May
While the river speaks gush.

Bird's songs peek out of trees
Into realms of fresh air
As insects buzz an encore
For sounds beyond compare.

Stretching, she remembers her dream
Where the majority evolved
Without any government schemes
For lack of sensitively being solved.

For beings to discover the joy
Of positive good to promote
Without thought of self ploys,
Very well, coming from worlds remote.

Oh what a dream
That can quietly grow
As a stone tossed into a still pond
Or seeds, that poetically .. we Poets sow.

Ok SuSanne, Hiiiiiii

This was an awesome poem that address simplicity in communications between peoples. It also hints at the theme that simplicity in communication is actually an erotic experience, and helps to "put" people into each other, tht is they seath into each other as you title also hints, the gurling of waters, as INTO another ie person, ie their top soil, it speaks of the power of poets to do this. You may not have known you have included all this, but it was aboutrebirth in personalityethrough honesty and how it is alwaysa a possibility. :) Al

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