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Date Posted: 07:50:49 09/18/02 Wed
Author: sp99
Author Host/IP: pool-63.53.97.120.nwrk.grid.net / 63.53.97.120
Subject: Re: Cherished Dreams
In reply to: Raphaela 's message, "Re: Cherished Dreams" on 11:22:01 09/15/02 Sun

I can appreciate what you say Raphaela. However this
is a poem that is a accumulation of friendship and
a growing love and knowing or hoping that ocean tides
is a past, present and hopefully future occurrence of
Nature is why I used it not thinking an everlasting
occurrence was stilted and archaic for a first time of
physical relations where they do not know yet if they
shall reach fulfillment....however, I also take your
feelings very seriously and under advisement....thanks!!!
Susanne>I know the picture you are writing for and can
>envisage the scene. However, I personally found the
>language somewhat stilted and archaic -
>
>'We have ebbed and tided'
>
>it doesn't sound like the language of lovers about to
>reach fulfillment.
>
>Just my thoughts but good to see you post.
>
>Raphaela
>
>
>
>>

>>CHERISHED DREAMS
>>
>>
>>We have ebbed and tided
>>For many a month now
>>While friendship deepened
>>Since from a knowing start, felt the know.
>>
>>That gives a special glow
>>Coming from deeply within
>>Building up for tonight,
>>Results of us feeling sanguine.
>>
>>As I look at you as you I
>>Gossamer thoughts beam in-between
>>For invisible streams flowing of us,
>>In reality, becoming a cherished dream.
>>
>>Without sound, a duo yes is voiced
>>As you approach with deep thoughts
>>Encircling my waist with quiet strength,
>>Drawing my body to meld with yours
>>Your neck bends towards mine arched .. for your lips.
>>
>>
>>© SP&*_*&99
>>13sept'02~smb.powell
>>
>>A response to a Mutington's Meadow
>>"Picture challenge" C ~ http://voy.com/7622/
>>
>color=navy>

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