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Date Posted: 08:04:35 06/04/02 Tue
Author: Gemini
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Subject: Re: In the Shadow of the Taj Mahal
In reply to: Raphaela 's message, "In the Shadow of the Taj Mahal" on 15:08:04 06/02/02 Sun

Hi Raphaela,
This is one of the most moving poems I have read of yours.
I have a big guilt feeling of human injustice in the world, although very little first hand knowledge of it. Your poem is a powerful condemnation of wealth, past or present, being spent on the wrong things. I applaud you.
I love the sarcasm of the last 2 lines.
A good poem indeed.

Gem.

>In the shadow of the Taj Mahal

>Rose-encrusted sky twinkles a million diamonds
>shining down through moonbeams of desert dust
>the cold monument to love long gone stands tall
>ivory marble illuminated under the moonlit sky
>once adorned by a thousand precious jewels
>shakes off the dust of the surrounding streets
>such opulence cannot be so cruelly contaminated
>by the pitiful poverty and the stench of death
>as innocent babies play in sewage lined gutters
>and the elderly pull over their cardboard covers
>yet another hot day and wet night on the streets
>but they should be grateful should they not
>for they rest in the shadow of the Taj Mahal.
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>2 June 2002

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Re: In the Shadow of the Taj Mahal -- Raphaela, 15:10:32 06/11/02 Tue