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Date Posted: 02:05:46 06/17/02 Mon
Author: SuSanne
Author Host/IP: pool-63.53.145.190.nwrk.grid.net / 63.53.145.190
Subject: Begins To Rise ~ mild adult ~revised, thanks R.!!!

mild adult [3rd/final ? draft ]

If anyone finds this version the best one,
*smile*...well thanks are to Raphaela
who gently challenged me,
for a slight revise. Personally, I thank her for this...*smiles*.
Also, for the comments I have already
so graciously received
on this poem, I'm humbled and treasure them all dearly
and please know if one is short of time,
please do not feel the need to comment again...the
original ones still greatly warm
my poetic heart, thanks again!!! *smiles* SuSanne
>^. .^< sp99 &*_*&


BEGINS TO RISE


Realizing without speech
Needed being spoken
The long awaited shine
Of our special first time
Was now here, to be gone.

For then, midnight of silk
Whispered off my shoulders
To perch on a rosy hues
Causing us both, to smolder.

Electric thoughts
Spark bodies tension
To release our hands
Free of pretensions.

Our full mouths meet
To bud the rose
Tasting ever so sweet
As love's sword, begins to rise.

Slashing all garments free
To gather softly in a pile
Of sparks as our bodies touch
Amidst low laughter and smiles.

Before sinking into one,
The closest we humans can get
While anchored on a bed
Soaring to the stars .. as in a set.


© SuSanne &*_*&


9.6.02~smb.powell
3rd draft-16.6.02
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