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Date Posted: 11:27:55 01/16/01 Tue
Author: Raphaela
Subject: Re: One I almost binned, any input welcome, or should I trash it ?
In reply to: Rafaél 's message, "One I almost binned, any input welcome, or should I trash it ?" on 08:03:48 01/15/01 Mon

Noooo - don't trash it! Not sure the 3rd stanza works well there after 1 and 2 which relate well - perhaps it just needs another couple inbetween. I think it is a poem which would actually work well as lyrics with a slight rewrite as the words are so emotive and you would be able to do that. Rambling here .... so will come back if I have something constructive to say but don't bin it. :)

Raphaela

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  • Re: One I almost binned, any input welcome, or should I trash it ? -- Highlander, 14:25:36 01/21/01 Sun
  • Re: One I almost binned, any input welcome, or should I trash it ? -- Rafaél, 17:33:16 01/22/01 Mon
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