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Subject: Re: Heart-spoken .......continue.......


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Dolly
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Date Posted: 22:51:37 05/12/03 Mon
In reply to: kata-hati 's message, "Heart-spoken .......continue......." on 21:07:14 05/12/03 Mon
 Karena sebelumnya sudah diakui puisi ini karangan sendiri, boleh nggak memberi masukan untuk kesempurnaan. Versi bahasa Indonesianya sudah top banget, tapi versi Inggrisnya ada yang mengganggu : parallellism belum terlihat, transition tidak ada, determiner belum tepat, dsb. Tapi yah, jadi agak aneh, ya ?

This is my two cents :

Modesty harvests sympathies
Arrogance spreads aggressiveness

Winners must be unpretentious
Lossers tends to be magnanimous

The Creator developed religion
for human to express themselves

Religion makes us believe
that God allows us to create arts

Semoga sukses,
-Dolly




>>>> Heart-spoken <<<
>
>The modesty harvests sympathies
>Arrogances spread aggressiveness
>
>The winner must be unpretentious
>Loser is difficult to be magnanimous
>
>The Creator had created religions
>Human just self-expressions
>
>The religion makes us religious
>GOD allow me creates of arts
>
>---------- Daratista has my sympathy
>
>Sources : Alumni I Shipbuilding Polytechnic Institute
>of Technology Sepuluh Nopember Surabaya, Gov Senior
>High School 7 Sby, Gov Junior High School 8 Sby,
>YPPI’s Foundation School Sby
>
>
>>>> Kata-hati <<<
>
>Kerendahan hati menuai banyak simpati
>Arogansi banyak menebar sikap agresi
>( Keangkuhan banyak menebar serangan antipati )
>
>Pemenang harus rendah hati
>Pecundang sulit murah hati
>
>Sang Pencipta telah ciptakan religi
>Manusia sekedar ekspresikan diri
>
>Agama membuat kita mengimani
>ALLAH ijinkan daku ciptakan seni
>
>---------- simpatiku
>
>Heart-spoken …….continue…….
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