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Date Posted: 09:58:47 11/06/01 Tue
Author: 社長
Subject: Re: 獨坐夜車經上水公路有感
In reply to: 無名氏 's message, "Re: 獨坐夜車經上水公路有感" on 15:09:51 11/03/01 Sat

歡迎無名氏詞長光臨,
往後也請多來貼詩交流

略評如下,勿罪:
「歸家夜寂欲長眠」寫得很好,很活.
「搖頭太息更相憐」顧影自憐,「相」字用得很好
通篇連貫
但全篇的情感似未至於「涕淚漣」,有無端突兀之感

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