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Subject: Redwall Crossfire - Chapter 3


Author:
Stoakly Centurio of II
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Date Posted: 22:25:40 08/22/07 Wed

Mossyra was alive. The otter gasped – the first sign that she was not dead. Tinsy sighed with relief, and Terragon wiped nervous sweat from her brow. Their friend was alive. Legolas hugged Mossrya, but the ottermaid was obviously quite dazed. The four continued searching, but after a while, nothing happened. They walked through the now moon-lit paths of Mossflower Woods. Though they were relieved, it was hard to be happy – most of the Redwallers were dead or lost somewhere in the woods. However, as they came near the Great Inland Lake, they lost hope. “Alright,” Stoakly said, “It’s time to head back to Redwall. We should salvage the rubble and debris and try to re-build a bit of the wall. Mossyra and Audrey can fix us some soup…” They all nodded, but suddenly were alert. A rat, slightly maimed, was sprinting at them, with a mace in his hand. All of them were unarmed, as their weapons were still somewhere on the battlefield. It seemed Legolas was to be first, but suddenly, a knife struck in his back, piercing the spine. “Ugh…” Stoakly’s jaw dropped in disbelief – Raiden had killed the rat! “Raiden, we could’ve used a warrior like you here earlier!”

Sunset, Audrey, and Tokie looked inside St. Ninian’s, all of them recovered from the previous strife. There was no sound, well, that Audrey or Sunset could hear. However, they noticed Tokie with his head to the ground. “Oi be hearin’ somebeast atremblin’. Et’s getten’ fainter.” Audrey scratched her head. “Check the corners,” She said to both of them, “Somebeast is probably scared, wounded, and hiding.” Tokie followed the sound, and Sunset checked the corners of the ruined church. Audrey hopped outside, checking the perimeter. “Oi found ‘er!” A small, teenage female mouse was huddling in a corner, shivering. “I’ve seen awful things, Sir Tokie,” She said, and by that time, Sunset and Audrey had come up closer. “Now, now, Swordling,” Said Audrey, “Don’t fret. We’ll take you back to Redwall, and make you a nice bowl of soup.” The others had the same plan. So, the two groups would come back to the Abbey, make soup and discuss further plans over a nice, warm bowl of soup and some bread. “Sunset…” Swordling muttered. “Tiffie was kidnapped.” Sunset gasped in horror; however, she was relieved to know that she was alive, and not simply killed in battle.

After another long walk, Terragon, Tinsy, Mossyra, Stoakly, and Raiden made it back to Redwall. The bodies were decaying, fur was stained, and it was not a pretty site. Stoakly seemed rattled, his paw shaking, but it was more comfortable having Raiden there. The mouse had a confidence and comfort in the most troubling times, and it gave others hope, as well. They all walked through the lawn, a little dazed at the brutality. After the vermin broke through the Otter Crew and smashed through the Gate, the GOUSIM was slaughtered, but luckily, they lasted longer. The Long Patrol arrived from the south and flanked them. However, there were too many vermin, and both groups were killed. The few Redwall soldiers who were trained fought in the front line, but they still were wiped out. Then, as they broke through into the Abbey, the elders began throwing torches and everything they could. The fire destroyed part of the Abbey, but it allowed them to escape, and the vermin were too dumb to simply leave. And so they died, but the last few lines retreated, but took prisoners.

Now, all of the survivors were back, walking into Great Hall. There were dead elders, ash, and all the like through-out the room. Sunset and Swordling were the first to comment. “This… can’t be my home.” Said Swordling, leaning on Sunset’s shoulder. “I’m shaken up, too, ‘Ling.” Sunset, Swordling, and Mossyra entered the kitchen to make the soups, while the others decided to plot and plan. The first to ask the inevitable question, Stoakly opened up his arms. “So, do we begin the re-building of Redwall Abbey, or do we go after the remaining vermin first?” Raiden sat down, quickly responding. “Both.” They all looked at him, Audrey the first to give a disapproving look. “Think,” Raiden demanded, “Sunset and Swordling are not warriors, and so one of us, possibly Audrey, will stay with them and help out. We know that the vermin went north, that’s inevitable. So, Nicolaus and I will lead Stoakly, Tinsy, Terragon, and Mossyra, perhaps, out to fight the vermin. They left around dawn this morning – we leave dawn tomorrow and we’ll catch up. They don’t think they’re being tracked, so we’re fine.” He paused, looking around the table. “Any objections?” There was silence. “Good,” Terragon stated. “I’m all for it.”
Subject: Redwall Crossfire - Chapter 2


Author:
Stoakly Centurio of II
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Date Posted: 22:24:22 08/22/07 Wed

“No survivors?” Stoakly asked, a grim frown on his face. Audrey nodded, and Terragon sighed deeply. “Y’know,” the squirrel commented, “I have a hunch there’s more people out there - in the woods.” Terragon’s brown eyes pierced Audrey and Stoakly; they hadn’t thought of checking the woods. “You might be right, Terragon,” Audrey added, before rolling her eyes, “Of course, why wouldn’t there be survivors in the woods?” Stoakly turned to look at Goldbrush; she was still the same. “Okay,” Stoakly chimed in, “Does anybeast have a suggestion?” Terragon was the first to raise her paw. “A search party.” Suddenly, a rough voice came in, and they all turned to see a shrew. “There’s got to be more survivors,” Tysharm declared, “I heard something moving in the woods when I was on the ground.” They all glanced at each other for a moment, until Audrey nodded. “Okay, let’s split up. Tysharm and I will go west, until we reach the the border and near St. Ninian’s, and Terragon and Stoakly – go west, inland, into you get to the Great Lakes. Objections?” Everybeast remained silent. “Good. It’s settled, then.” Stoakly had a bad feeling, but at a time like this, it was nearly impossible to have hope.

Tokie was the first to spot Stoakly and Terragon heading west, and he nudged Legolas, who immediately glanced over there. Rushing over, the two caught up before they entered deep into the woods. “Hey, there!” Legolas remarked. Stoakly turned, sighing deeply. “Legolas, Tokie – you’re alive. That’s a great relief.” Terragon nodded in agreement before commenting to the three. “Y’know, Audrey and Tysharm probably haven’t gotten far; one of you can probably catch up, and then we’ll have three and three, eh?” The mole grinned. “Oi’ll go, Miz Terri!” And without another word, the mole darted off, moving awkwardly; moles were not renowned for their running. Legolas and the two others continued, the shrubbery of Mossflower Woods blocking a large portion of their site. But, Stoakly lifted a paw for the others to be silent. “I hear something.” The great moans and groans that only a badger could make were crying out from behind a thorn bush. Pushing through the foliage, Terragon saw the massive beast. “Tinsy!” She exclaimed, and indeed it was – Tinsy Stormsight was still alive.

Soon after Tokie had caught up, Audrey and Tysharm had come near St. Ninian’s, and they still hadn’t found a thing. “I hope the others have found something,” Tysharm noted, “I haven’t seen a moving body since we left the battlefield. Er, I mean home.” It was still aching in his heart – Redwall was a field of death and destruction. Vermin, goodbeasts, and all the like were dead on the grass that he used to play on as a dibbun. It was plagued. Setting it aside, they finally got a glimmer of hope. From the ditch of St. Ninian’s they heard a voice yelling. “HELP! HELP! I rolled down ‘ere and so did this rat, and now she’s on top of me!” The voice was very feminine, and it was quite squeaky. Audrey almost chuckled. “Sounds just like Sunset, don’t it, Tokie?” The mole laughed a little, before rushing to the ditch to help. “Oi be thinkin’ et is, burr hurr hurr!” They all rushed down, Tysharm being the first to lift the dead rat from the body of a not-so-wounded Sunset. “Thanks, guys, I thought I was going to suffocate down there!” She was obviously quite frustrated; after all, she was a mouse, and not strong enough to lift the body off herself. “Gurt to be of servoice, Miz Sunset, burr hurr hurr!”



Tinsy smiled at Terragon, finally out of the bush. She had a few cuts and bruises, but all in all, she was fine. However, something ached her heart; they could tell. Stoakly was the first to pose the question, however, as none of them had the courage. “Tinsy, why do you seem so sad, if you don’t mind me asking?” The badgermaid did not cry, but her eyes became full of tears that did not trickle down her cheek. “I saw something… awful. An ottermaid, younger than I, was fighting with a weasel. They were both already wounded, but as I sat there helpless in the bush, it came to a dreadful end. A little creek was to the left of the path, and when the ottermaid finally got the weasel to the edge, he stabbed her. The otter did not even have the strength to swim away, and she probably died. However, so did the weasel. The murderer was so stupid, he couldn’t even realize the water was too deep to stand. He drowned, and somehow, I was glad he was recently taken to Hell Gates.” A splash was heard to their left, and they both looked over. The otter was alive, but unconscious. “Oh dear…” That was all Terragon could say, and Stoakly muttered the name, barely audible, but the others heard it. “Mossyra…”
Subject: Redwall Crossfire - Chapter 1


Author:
Stoakly Centurio of II
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Date Posted: 22:23:26 08/22/07 Wed



The brutality of it all was stirring. Redwall Abbey was in ruin, and bodies were spread around the lawn with an endless count. No vermin horde had ever taken over Redwall, but this time, it was very close. Stoakly stood on the ramparts, his leg bloody from the previous battle. The ferret gazed out over the lands of Mossflower, taking careful steps; parts of the rampart wall were torn off, and he had to hop to get over the gaping holes. His brown tunic was covered in his blood, and the blood of his enemies. To his side was an old friend, Nicolaus Graym, a highland mouse visiting Redwall. They both stood there, wounded, feeling the breeze come over them on that hot summer’s day. Though they had won the battle, it was no victory. Looking for more survivors, the voice of a squirrel rang from behind them. “Is anyone out there?!” Turning, Nicolaus spotted Audrey Goldbrush and smiled. “Ah think there is quite a few o’ us here, y’ken?” He said, and then Stoakly shrugged. “Look for more survivors.” That was all he said.

In the far west gate, his leg crumpled underneath the body of a dead weasel, was a shrew. He panted, leaning back, trying to use his weakened strength to get his leg free. Tysharm’s shoulder was bloody, and there was a deep cut further down his arm. Groaning, he finally shook his leg free, but it was incredibly numb. Using his rapier to push himself up, the shrew finally stood on his paws. Sighing, he leaned against the post of the gate, getting blood over it. “Why?” That was all his breath could muster, and he sounded sick. But he would get over it – he had to. If Tysharm did not get his voice back, heal himself, and get busy looking for other creatures, how would he help save the others? Redwall needed him, and in his brown tunic, the shrew swore to help Redwall until it was safe or he died. His eyes swept over the battlefield. He couldn’t call it a battlefield, for it was his home. This awful field of death was his home.

The battle had many effects for different people, and the squirrel was still on the ground. I’m dying. She thought to herself. It was over. As her eyes began to close, and as she saw the gates of the peaceful Dark Forest, a voice rang into her head. “Wake up, Terragon.” She opened her eyes, alert at last, but still a tad dazed. Was it Ashnel? No, it could not be, the fur was not dark enough. However, it looked like the figure of a squirrel. “Terragon, are you alright?” Came another voice. A ferret was to the left of the squirrel, and they were both looking wounded. Helping her up, the two looked at Terragon with deep concern. Stoakly rubbed his chin; if Nicolaus was to start a team to go find and fight the rest of the vermin, they would need more people. “I’m fine.” Terragon demanded, nodding to Stoakly. “Audrey,” Stoakly chimed in, “Find Nic. I’ll take care of Terragon.” Audrey nodded and smiled, walking off to find the mouse. Though they tried to stay cheerful and optimistic, everyone knew in their hearts that Redwall was just about defeated. It was painful to look at. Friends, family, and some of the most respected elders were down, dead on the ground.

A female otter and a male mole were both walking to the lawn, from the east gate. No words were passed between the two; one was bitter and wanted revenge, and the other was sad, and wanted to see if there were other survivors. Legolas Greenleaf and Tokie the Mole both slowly strolled down the lawn, dodging a dead mouse on the way. “Oi be thinkin’, Miz Leggy, et hasn’t been long since the battler, so thur is prolly some varmints still out thur!” Legolas turned to Tokie, a grave frown on her face. “If there are, they will regret this say!” She swore, but Tokie shook his head and spoke with his mole logic. “Oi think we need to simploi help the Abbey and worry not about revenge, hurr hurr!” Sighing, the otter nodded. “You’re right, Tokie. You’re right.” But deep inside, even Tokie wanted to rid the world of the miscreants who did this to their Abbey. Rubble from the ramparts fell on the wounded to make sure there was no chance of escape, and the others bled to death. What would happen to Redwall Abbey now?
Subject: A Dark Prophecy IIII


Author:
Mossyra of the II
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Date Posted: 21:27:48 08/20/07 Mon

Martin woke in darkness. His heart ached with painful memories and he turned away from the past. But the past wouldn't leave. Hot tears poured down his cheeks and he mumbled, "Why, Dan?" There was no answer and he let grief sweep him away once more.

Rose stared uncomprehendingly at the small, unmoving bundle.
"I found him up a ways," Sam explained, gesturing to the west. "He was more'n half buried in sand and holding this in his paw." Sam held up a broken leather rope with a golden medallion hanging from the middle. Depicted on it was a mouse wielding a sword in one paw with the other supporting another mouse. His eyes were locked on that of the other mouse's and sapphire glinted in the second mouse's paw. Rose felt the breath leave her and murmured numbly, "There were no other bodies?" Sam shook his head. "Only this li'l squirrel. Poor thing. He's still alive, but only just barely. Don't think he'll make it." Regretfully, Rose looked away and said sadly, "We'll have to leave him. I don't know enough to save him." Sam nodded and they trekked onward. Before they left, however, Rose paused to drape the medallion over the young squirrel and whisper, "I know you tried to save my brother, and for that I thank you."

Juntil growled in anger. Before him was the remnants of a foraging party, most on the brink of collapsing with exhaustion. The guards looked nervous, but they had the sense not to speak.
"You don't know who did this," Juntil said flatly. "You didn't even get a look of them." The guards nodded. "Fools," Juntil roared, knocking over a wooden bowl. It shattered on the ground and made the guards flinch. "You should have brought the slaves directly back here! But instead you blundered through the woods until they started vanishing. Two slaves! That's how many I lost today! Two! If you lose any more I will use you as an example of what happens to those who disobey. Get out of my sight!" The two rats grabbed the rope of the line and hurriedly led the slaves to the compound.
With a sigh Juntil slid into his chair and stared moodily at the bowl fragments. He was surrounded by fools and blunderers without any brains.
A few hours later a squirrel came and silently cleaned up the smashed pieces and Juntil finally understood what was bothering him as she left just as quietly. Whenever he conquered the beasts were always defiant, fighters to the last. But these were cooperative. Why?


















"When rebellion is concealed by meekness,
The time for freedom is near,
But death is always the weakness,
For those who love and free.
Seven companions will go,
But one never returns,
For war's cost is never low,
And so the warrior mourns.
Peace must be payed for with death,
Life must be payed for with pain,
A warrior's weapon lies in the heart,
To be found in the weeping rain."
Subject: A Dark Prophecy III


Author:
Mossyra of the II
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Date Posted: 02:47:54 08/18/07 Sat

Terril stared at the warrior's face in front of her for a moment before gently laying his head on the ground. Tambun had been one of her best friend's and the Abbey Warrior also. And now he was dead, with no one to follow him. Redwall needed a Warrior and there was no warrior. She felt tears falling down her face and looked up at the sky, rage welling in her heart alongside pain and loss. What she saw made her forget the past horrors for a moment.
The sky, normally a clear blue since it was high noon, was a fiery red and the sun was almost black. She remembered that Tambun had murmured something with his dying breath and searched for parchment or bark to record his words. All she came up with was a roughly oval piece of red sandstone. Drawing her dagger, she began to engrave the words that had been burned into her memory by Tambun's soft, weak voice.

When the skies blaze red,
And the distant sun turns black,
The unbreakable pact will shatter,
And a warrior will be lost.
Hope remaining fades away,
And time itself turns cruel,
For no hero is living,
That can stop this growing evil.
The ancient cloth doth fade,
Then vanish completely,
And with it goes the hope,
Turning freebeast into slave.
Only a hero now dead,
Long turned to dust and dream,
Can bring back the good,
And hold against all foes.
Where is the warrior,
That has taken new birth?
To the lost shore thorn,
Where he first lived.
Come from that shore,
He lives his life again,
Feeling slavery's chains,
Losing much that is close.
Until his final loss,
Drives him to the sword,
And he finds her again,
With the hope reknewed.

For a moment Terril stared at the stone. Then, with anger swelling in her heart, she threw it as far as she could. FOr a momant it hurtled through the air faster and farther than an arrow could fly, the sky reflecting on its dull surface. Then it splashed into the river and was washed away by the raging current. Terril fell against Tambun's limp body and wept.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Nine Seasons Later~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Martin waited until the latest wave had passed, then sent his stone skimming across the surface of the sea. He felt pain because he was sure his mother was dying. No one would tell him how she was doing, but the cutlass had slashed deep into her side and he knew she didn't have much longer. His father was already dead, killed three seasons earlier by searats, and he had only friends. No family was left in the world for him but his mother. If she died, so would he. His heart lay with her.
After a long while had passed he glanced up at the sun and saw it was far past noon. He frowned. Dan had said he would come and tell him when it was time for the noon meal. Unless . . . Martin tore down the beach, sand spraying from beneath his paws, and searched for any sign of someone coming to fetch him. Maybe his mother had died and they wanted to leave it as late as possible to tell him. Maybe.
He was halfway down the beach when he saw his friend. Or rather, saw the limp form that had been his friend. Two arrows stuck out of Dan's back and a broken half of the third shaft lay on the sand a few paces away. Martin fell to his knees by Dan's side and lifted his friend's head in his paws.
"Dan," he whispered, staring at the closed eyes and slightly parted mouth. There was no response, not even a whisper of breath. "Oh, Dan," Martin sobbed, hugging the unmoving squirrel to him. "Why'd you have to come for me? Couldn't you just take the young ones and flee? Why, Dan!" He wept with his friend cradled in his arms, uncaring of the world around him. Somebeast came up behind him, but it didn't matter. A sharp pain came from the side of his head and he fell into darkness.


Rose rose before dawn and padded noiselessly to the larder. She filled a pack with cheeses, scones, flagons of water and cordial, and breads before slipping it onto her shoulder, taking her walking staff from beside the door, and heading out. She closed the door silently and quietly moved from shadow to shadow until she was free of the buildings. Then she left Noonvale.
Before she had reached the stream she felt a light tap on her shoulder and, without turning, said, "I was wondering when you would show up, Sam." A young squirrel with a mischevious twinkle in his green eyes flipped over her head to land in front of her, where he made a mock-curteous leg. "At you service, young Rose. I managed to make it off without so much as waking a bumblebee. Now, shall we find your rascal of a brother, O fair one?" The squirrel ducked under the playful blow she had aimed at his head and popped up to one side, grinning like a duck at a feast. "I thought so. Come on!" Sam scampered lightly ahead and she chased after him, laughing. Now she had a companion to share the hardships of the journey with.
Subject: A Dark Prophecy II


Author:
Mossyra of the II
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Date Posted: 23:35:10 08/17/07 Fri

A few seasons earlier, on the same day Rose was born, a wind swept across the distant land of Mossflower, sprinkling some raindrops on the burning gates of Redwall Abbey. They still crackled with fire despite the efforts to put them out, but Warlord Juntil wasn't concerned. New gates would be built. For now he was content to let them burn as he gazed triumphantly ay his prize. Redwall Abbey!
Red sandstone walls with smaller wallgates and one mian gate surrounded the fresh grass with a pond, orchard, belltower, and garden. But the main building, where Redwallers could fall back into when the need arose, that was what captivated him. A weather vane and high roof, with windows dotting every floor. It was all his now. His to rule from, to hold all of Mossflower, to defeat even the legendary Salamandastron. All his.
For a moment he paused to glance comtemptuously at the beasts that had dared defy him. They were bound and guarded with the badger kept far apart from the others and watched by five foxes. The babes were huddled together, a few appearing frightened but most bright-eyed and angry. The others varied. Mice, squirrels, voles, mole, hedgehogs, and even a few brawny otters. Conquered now, if not broken. He would let them live, for now.


Far away, on the northland coast, a small male mouse was born. His mother smiled down at him and murmured, "My little Martin."

In Redwall, the Tapestry started to fade and the Late Rose began to wilt.
Hope was dying.
Subject: A Dark Prophecy


Author:
Mossyra of the II
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Date Posted: 21:48:51 08/17/07 Fri

"When the skies blaze red,
And the distant sun turns black,
The unbreakable pact will shatter,
And a warrior will be lost.
Hope remaining fades away,
And time itself turns cruel,
For no hero is living,
That can stop this growing evil.
The ancient cloth doth fade,
Then vanish completely,
And with it goes the hope,
Turning freebeast into slave.
Only a hero now dead,
Long turned to dust and dream,
Can bring back the good,
And hold against all foes.
Where is the warrior,
That has taken new birth?
To the lost shore thorn,
Where he first lived.
Come from that shore,
He lives his life again,
Feeling slavery's chains,
Losing much that is close.
Until his final loss,
Drives him to the sword,
And he finds her again,
With the hope reknewed."

The red sanstone was smooth and worn from the constant river flow, but Rose liked it above it all the others in the stream. She hadn't known it had writing on until she picked it up, though. It was perfectly flat and rather oval, but the words were what captivated her. She didn't understand them, but they seemed . . . cold. Harsh. True. Tucking it into her pouch, Rose turned and started the long walk back to Noonvale.
Subject: Green Isle: Chapter 3


Author:
Cuoha (GG)
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Date Posted: 19:28:48 08/14/07 Tue

Later that evening, the feast at Holt Summerdell was in full swing. Everybeast was sat at a long table enjoying the variety of mouth-watering dishes. From pear and apricot flan to mushroom and onion pasties and turnip’n’tater pie, all foods were eaten ravenously by the hungry Redwallers. The shrimp and hotroot soup disappeared especially quickly, gobbled down in hotroot pepper soup competitions, where two otters went head to head to see who could eat the spiciest soup. The more bowls that were eaten, the more pepper was put in. Despite his ancient, frail appearance, Old Zillo the Bard was remarkably immune to the effects of the pepper. Zillo and Kolun were against each other in the final of the competition. Each otter had their own troupe of supporters cheering them on. Strangely, Deedero was supporting Zillo.
“That mischievous husband of mine needs to lose something,” she explained to Banya. “He’s bossing me around a bit these days.”
Banya suppressed a smirk. “And you don’t boss him around at all, do you?” joked Banya.
“Come on, Zillo!” whooped Deedero, pretending not to hear her friend.
Banya chuckled and joined in the cheering.
Zillo was on his second bowl of soup, but Kolun had already downed five bowls without much difficulty.
“Cummon, Mister Zilly, youse gonna lose!” cried out a small otterbabe. Rather than attacking the bowls with renewed vigour, Zillo merely winked in the babe’s direction and kept ploughing his way through the soup. Kolun, however, had accelerated and was now gulping down his eighth bowl, cheered on by his supporters, who included Tiria, Lycian and Tribsy.
Suddenly, Kolun coughed violently and seized up, choking. Luckily, Leatho was on the scene quickly, hitting Kolun on the back. Kolun coughed up the offending mouthful of soup, but was in no fit state to carry on with the competition. He sat down on his chair, watching nervously as Zillo kept spooning the soup from his sixth bowl into his mouth. Slowly the bowl’s contents disappeared, but it was clear that Zillo was beginning to weaken. The seventh bowl was a noticeable struggle, and he had to hold his nose to gulp down forced mouthfuls of the eighth. Near the end of the eighth bowl, Zillo finally surrendered to the heat of the pepper and swallowed a huge beaker of cool, clear water in one massive gulp, panting. Leatho, who was judging, inspected the bowls.
“I declare the winner of this competition to be…”
The gathered crowd waited with bated breath.
“…Kolun Galedeep!”
All the supporters rushed in to congratulate Kolun. They also all patted Zillo on the back, for despite the air of competition, they were all true friends with each other.
Subject: The tale of MacDac Part1


Author:
MacDac of Giggling Gang
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Date Posted: 14:09:08 07/18/07 Wed

OOC: This is my first story, so please do not tell me that its bad. Its about me(MacDac) as a dibbun, and how I did something great!!! Here goes nothing!

BIC: One day, there was a young dibbun,MacDac. He was a member of DAB, and was a good shot with his small bow n arrows. So, one day, he was walking aroung the Abbey grounds, when he heard noises coming from the south wall gate. He walked there, and heard some creatures talking. One said: Hurry up Rat-Tooth! We have to get in the Abbey to take it over! When MacDac heard that, he suddenly felt like hurting the rats. So, he oppened the gate, and attempted to stop then.(There were 13) He fired a few arrows at them, but didn't hit them. Instead, he warned them off. But one of them, a rat called Flame-Tail, punched MacDac hard. MacDac cried out in pain, the yelled out the cry he had heard from a hare:EULALIAAAAAAAAA! He ran right into the middle of the rats, hitting out with tiny fists, but missing mostly. The rats hit him many times, one even hitting him it the eye. But MacDac drove them off. They ran away, but not before they all yelled out: We will get you bushtail! MacDac roared back: I'm not a bushtail, I'm a squirrel! An if you come back, I'll be rady for you! He then rushed inside the Abbey, closed the south wicker gate, locked it, and ran strait into Mother Mellus! She roared at him: You've gone dirty! You need a good bath! Oh no! groaned MacDac, I just fought 13 rats! Ya right, said the Badger Mum, you did not, now to the tub!

OOC: If you want to tell me how I can do anything to this story, please e-mail me. And this was only part one. I'm hoping to make this into a 5 or more part story. Thanks for reading!
Subject: Mossyra's Tale: Part 15


Author:
Mossyra of the Iresistible Imps
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Date Posted: 02:13:35 07/16/07 Mon

Quickdash blinked in the sunlight. He had a pretty good idea why Cruelclaw wanted to see him. After all, he had grown up fighting along the coasts and ranging far and near to defend it against searats. Cruelclaw simply needed a navigator.


Mossyra didn't look back as she left Redwall. She knew she would probably never see it again. She was a fighter, a rover, born to wander the land eternally and fight against injustice. If she ever did come back, it would be to lead others there. Maybe she would come here before she died and find Martin's tomb. It was probably in the records and she could sleep eternally with his spirit guarding her body if she died there.
The wind blew dust from the path into miniture clouds and soon obscured the distant figure that was fated to roam the land forever.


Swiftstream hurried into the woodland and waited for shouts to start up behind him. Surprisingly, he heard nothing and was soon miles away from the vermin. Pawsore and weary, he blundered through the forest as fast as he could. Knowing he couldn't continue much longer, he searched through bleary eyes for a cave or some other suitable place to rest. Finally, he gave up and collapsed, aware that somebeast was nearby but too tired to care.
Then, two soft paws helped him to his feet and a distant voice murmured, "You look in need of assistance, friend." Looking up, he found himself face to face with a bright eyed and smiling squirrelmaid that he knew well.
"Mossyra!"
Subject: Death Will Be Alright


Author:
Tamer Lorika
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Date Posted: 21:59:15 07/15/07 Sun

Welcome to the wildly warped mind of Tamer Lorika. Okay, so after Saro dies protecting her friends, what awaits her? Did Brag make it? Will everything be alright, really?

As Sarobando came to, she was aware of only one thing: warmth. Warmth, and the feeling of … peace. She, after so many years of wandering, was finally at rest. Before even opening her eyes, she knew that here was the place that she could stop and stay. She and Bragoon, together.
Brag.

The thought of her comrade caused her to open her eyes in a hurry. Was he alright? The last thing she remembered was being attacked by those horrible rats; trying to give Horty, Springald, and Fenna enough time to escape. What had happened?

Light. A fierce, yet soft, bright, yet comforting light streamed onto Saro’s face. Ah, so they hadn’t come away unscathed. Death had found them at last.

It didn’t bother her. They’d had a good run. Since she and Brag had met, they’d been on their paws, wild and free, living the way they pleased. They had done their best, and enjoyed it. It was okay. They had been together, then, and that’s what had mattered.

They had been together then… but what about now? Where was Bragoon?

Death would be okay, if he was with her. They were best friends; had never been separated before. Nothing could tear them apart, everybeast had said. But… maybe Brag had made it. That would be okay.

Saro sniffed. Of course it would be okay. She could handle it. He… he was only an otter. She didn’t need him. He still had life, and she wouldn’t begrudge him that. He deserved it.

Before she could stop it, one fat tear rolled down her cheek. No! she reprimanded herself. She could handle it. She didn’t need him… another tear escaped, then another, another.

“Saro, are you alright?” A soft paw brushed away her tears. “Please, don’t cry… we’ll be okay, I promise.”

Sarobando looked up into the anxious face of an otter.

Brag.

His paws were wrapped gently around her waist, holding her fast. That was the warmth she had felt. It would be okay, he was with her, he had never left. Then why couldn’t she stop crying?

“Saro, what’s wrong? We’re dead, but we knew it would come. We said it ourselves. We lived just one summer too long.” Brag was pleading, now, unable to see her upset. Sarobando buried her face in her friend’s warm chest.

“I’m sorry,” she whispered. “I – I thought for a moment that you were gone. That you’d left me.”

“Saro…” Brag trailed off, his eyes speaking unbearable pain. “Why would I ever leave you? I love you.”

Saro looked up, her eyes blurred by tears. He… he just said… but that is what I’ve been trying to tell him…

“I love you, too.”

Yes, death would be alright. She could handle it, now. She had him.
Subject: Story of Samkin: Part 5


Author:
Samkin
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Date Posted: 20:32:34 07/12/07 Thu

At Redwall, There was a coucil of elders in Cavern hole. The Abbey warrior Tram, Abbot Jonathan, Infirmary Keeper Bluebell, Skipper, and Badgermum Judy were present.
Jonathan began the meeting. "I suspect we will discuss two things: Samkin's disapearance and the vermin attacking us."
Skipper joined in. "I though the li'l Dibbun was hidin' at first, but 'e's been gone to lon'. Nor did 'e run 'way, the gates were all locked. 'At leaves on'y one possible sugges'ion, 'e's been kidnapped by the vermints. The other subject we all know 'ow to 'andle, everybeas' in Redwall."
Skipper's deduction sent the meeting into an uproar. Judy's voice could be heard over it all. "Quiet! I agree with Skip, his reasoning is sensible. However, I do not like what I agree with. The thought that a Dibbun could be in the hands of those vermin is unberable. Also, I--"
She was cut off abruptly as a small baby dormouse rushed in.
"Farver h'Abbot, there be's an army of wabbits led by a mounting wiv fur at de gate!"
As it turned out, the dormouse meant that the Long Patrol led by Brondu was there, as they found out. Judy sent the Dibbun into the kitchen for a treat from the Friar.
"Well," said Tram. "That solves both our problems. With the Long Patrol we can easily beat thsi vermin horde, and here's little Samkin."
Samkin was given a bath (he was dirty, that makes sense) and sent to bed. He had no trouble sleeping. When sleep claimed him to dreams, they were of Martin the Warrior. "Samkin, you will be a warrior one day, but let that come in good time. For now content yourself to watching the Long Patrol battle. Do not be persuaded by their funny way of talking, they are perilous beasts every one." Then the dream faded and Samkin fell into the wonderful depths of dreamless slumber.



Dornan, the vermin leader, was in a terrible rage. They said these were peaceful creatures, pah! They had complete military knowledge and had know trouble repelling him. They seemed to have an endless suply of food and were able to resist siege with ease. He had taken to camping in the meadow west of Redwall. His tent was as far from Redwall as you could imagine.It had been closer, much closer, but Long Patrol longbows soon moved him. At first he won a couple battles, but a few days after the little squirrel brat escaped they won every one. It seemed as if they had gained troops, morale, and fighting experience. He racked his brain for a solution to the problem.
Subject: Mossyra's Tale: Part 14


Author:
Mossyra
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Date Posted: 14:32:36 07/10/07 Tue

Cruelclaw Stripetail ordered the slain vermin to be thrown overboard, then took over their ship. The first thing he did was bring his daughter to the deck and embrace her. "Silkfur, how I've missed you," he murmured. His compassion to her was stronger than that of any vermin ever. "Then he held her at arms length and said, "You've grown, daughter. I expect you want some food?" She nodded and replied playfully, "Of course, father. How else can I convince you to steer this ship back to shore?"

Quickdash watched the reunion with interest. Never had he seen love shown by vermin to anything but treasure and slaughter. Cruelclaw Stripetail was famed throughout the land for his power and evil nature, and yet he was loving to his only child.

Turfee was brought on deck bytwo cats. Silkfur was nowhere in sight, but the wildcat that was undoubtably her father sat regally on a wooden throne. "Tell me," he said quietly, "How did they feed you?" Turfee licked her lips before replying in a whisper, "They gave us some water and meat, sir." He leaned forward with narrowed eyes. "Nothing else?" She shook her head, too frightened to speak. He sighed, then motioned for the guards to take her below. Just before she was led down the stairs, she heard him tell somebeast, "Bring me the hare."
Subject: Story of Samkin: Part five


Author:
Samkin
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Date Posted: 18:33:06 07/09/07 Mon

"Bob little hare. That's the best I could come up with. After that it's pool, but I can't see that in connection to 'Bob little hare."
Brondu encouraged Samkin. "Good work! I suggest you go play and exercize your mind. I'll see if I can come up with anything."
Samkin wandered off. Soon he came to find two hares swinging a rope for a young haremaid to skip. He could not resist tapping his footpaws to the infectious rhythm of what they were chanting.

"Down in the cellars where nobeast goes,
Littlebob hare went runnin'.
He ran an' ran an' followed his nose,
Where the rocks never let the sun in.
He got very tired and sat by a pool,
Then found out to his cost, sir,
That he was nought but a silly old fool,
Who'd gotten himself lost there.
'Oh, woe is me," cried Littlebob,
'Tis so dark an' unsightly.
I must find some way out o' here,
To where the sun shines brightly.'
So he climbed up to the coilin' snake,
All damp an' slippy feelin',
Then found beyond the big plum cake,
A hole right through the ceilin'.
He ran up through and chased the blue,
And made it home for tea, sir.
He beat the tide an' spinies to,
But his mama tanned his tailfur!"

It struck Samkin like a thunderbolt. "Of course! Not 'Bob little hare', but Littlebob Hare!" Then he was off, running down toward the cellars. Brondu came out of his study then and called after Samkin, "Ahoy, where're ye goin'?" Samkin shouted back over his shoulder, "To run in the cellars where nobeast goes, just like the rhyme says!"
Samkin slumped down against a wall, exhausted. He saw a small passage in the wall, barely significant, and climbed through. There was a pool in the center, casting a strange water pattern over the walls. Then Samkin noticed the shiny object in the pool. It reflected the light, and was not sinking because it was tied to a rope that was tied to a stalagmite. Samkin pulled the object out of the water and gasped. It was his father's armor, with the sword sheathed in a belt.
Brondu agreed to keep the armor here. Then he took Samkin and half the long patrol and set out for Redwall. When Samkin asked why they needed so many fighting hares to escort a Dibbun, Brondu merely laughed and replied as thus: "We're not just escorting you home, but we've got a war to win against this vermin leader attacking Redwall. Did you honestly think a war could be going on at Redwall in my knowledge and me not attack the vermin? The hares would leave with my permission or not!"
Subject: Attack of the Weasels: Part 8


Author:
Mossyra of the Irresistable Imps
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Date Posted: 17:19:56 07/04/07 Wed

Spprig searched for any way to escape. He knew the Redwallers would die trying to rescue him and that couldn't happen. Unfortunately, he was blocked at every angle. In the middle of a camp of vermin, he was bound, surrounded by enemies, with no way to untie himself or make it to the forest. One of the guards watching the slaves, the only one awake, noticed his movement and kicked out at him. "Hey, you, quit that!" Sprig snapped at his footpaw, but missed. "Go away, smelly. I'll do what I like." As he had hoped, the guard stood up and drew his dagger. "I'll teach you to insult me," the weasel snarled, stepping closer.
Sprig moved like chain lightning.
Rolling to the side, he delt the vermin a sharp kick in the side, causing him to double up in pain. He struck out with his footpaws, once, twice thrice, and the weasels collapsed, stone dead. Quickly, Sprig sawed the rope off of his paws and snatched up the dagger, then slipped out of the camp as silent as a moon shadow.
The eight sentries met their death at the end of his stolen blade that night. He pilfered their weapons, then melted back into the forest.

Gufftong woke the next morning and stood in plain veiw of the walltop, just out of weapon range. Completely unaware of the events of the previous night, he called aloud, "Rise and shine Redwallers, it's time to surrender!" No answer came from the walltop.
A few more minutes passed, then the Abbess appeared with Skipper. "What do you want, weasel," the Abbess called sternly. We've already told you that we won't surrender." Gufftong smiled, thoroughly convinced that today was the day he conquered Redwall. " I believe we have a friend of your's, a squirrel by the name of Sprig. If you don't surrender and let us in, he will die at dawn in full view of the walls!" The Abbess laughed at him. "Go check on your prisoner," she taunted. "See how well your security is." Otters stood up, whirling slings with all their might. "Go, weasel, while you still have a life!" Gufftong fled the scene, running back to the safety of his camp.
Subject: Story of Samkin: Part 4


Author:
Samkin
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Date Posted: 02:53:58 06/29/07 Fri

Samin traveled south along the coast, foraging as he went. The silence was so oppressive he began talking to himself as he wwandered down the peaceful shore. "Mmmm, hmm, nice berries, nice an' tangy, with that li'l bit o' sournesserifindentilletty (Sourness. He's a dibbun, he can make up his own words.), with that deli-licos taste all molded in wun likkle berry."
He did not notice the evil eyes that watched him as he navigated his way down south.
Around midmorn he came across a swamp. He was trekking south, ever south, when the ground became soft and squishy. He tossed a stone a few yards ahead of him, and watched the stone sink. He was about to scamper up into the upper foliage and continue, when a compress of smoking herbs was pressed in his face. He struggled, but to no avail. Samkin watched dark forms rise from the earth just before he blacked out.


When Samkin woke, his head ached terribly, like a thousand drums pounding remorsely inside his brain. Then he took stock of his surroundings in the afternoon light. He was tied to a stake in some sort of clearing, away from the marshy ground, and he was surrounded by rocks. He sensed something was wrong with the rocks being there, but could not figure it out. He saw some vegetation lying at the end of the clearing, then realized that was not vegetatin. The lumps rose, and he heard chanting, dull at first, but it grew persistently louder.
"Weeeee'da Flitchaye, Flitchaye, Flitchaye. Wee'da Flitchaye Flitchaye, Flitchaye. We gorra gorra winna lorra wars!" The chanting stopped abruptly as a drum sounded twice. One of his captors stepped forward, and Samkin could see that they were small weasels covered in vegetation and plant dye, not lumps of loam. The weasel, obviously their leader, spoke. "Squiggle, muchfood goodroast! Growa growa fatty lump, muchfood!" Then two cauldrons were pushed forward by more Flitchaye, and they gestured for him to eat. Samkin decided to eat when they started prodding him with sharpened stakes. The food was tasteless, but Samkin was was hungry. He stopped eating suddenly, his appetite goen, when he realized what was going on. The Flitchaye were fattening him up to eat him! The rocks were the fire pit, they were flesheaters! He resolved that he would die fighting, and began chewing through the ropes. The Flitchaye realized what he was doing just before he finished and several large otters came running, shouting a fiersomely, "Holt Dronnooooooooo!! Come on, scum, play with real warriors, not babby squirrels!" and battering the vermin without surrender. Eventually the vermin fled, and the otters came back, one carrying Samkin, and took him to their holt which was obviously Holt Dronno.
Back at the holt, the otters questioned Samkin abut his life. When he told them all that had happened, they agreed to take him to Salamandastron.
Just before everybeast fell asleep, an otter crept over to Samkin. "I knows yore not from Redwall on plan, but tell me, why're ye travelling to yon fire mountain?"
"Because," Samkin replied, "My father's armor an' sword lie somewhere on that mountain, and I feel as if my father, Drendle, won't rest easy 'til I finds the armor an' sword."


Later the next day, they were met at the gates of Salamandastron by a hare guard. There the otters go back to the holt an Samkin is taken to the Badger Lord. When there, Samkin got straight to the point. "My father came 'ere once, didn't 'e? 'E would've left some sort o' message, wouldn't he?
The Badger Lord, Brondu, replied. "Yes, he did, Samkin. Here's the very parchment. Samkin sat down and began reading.


Two bees, one oh, two els, two tees.
One aitch, one ar, one I, one ae, one ee.
Scrambled together, now solve this please.
The first is in apple, not once, but twice.
The second can be found in both hot and cold.
The third is the same, coming in cocoon thrice.
The last is the first of last.
Find that which turned many a vermin aghast.


Samkin scratched his head as he prepared to solve the riddle.
Subject: Attack of the Weasels: Part 7


Author:
Mossyra of the Iresistible Imps
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Date Posted: 02:54:51 06/28/07 Thu

Skipper's prediction was wrong, as it turned out, and the Abbess was thankful. Gufftong once again demanded surrender, but made no mention of the slaves. Instead, he pointed a claw at them and proclaimed, when I have conquered your Abbey the two of you shall not live to see another dawn!" Then he swept back to his camp with outraged cries ringing behind him.
Sprig the squirrel was abroad in Mossflower. Like the shrews and otters, he was an on and off dweller of Redwall Abbey. Unaware of the weasel horde that was attacking, he walked carelessly through the forest -- straight into the vermin encampment.

Abbess Shaltra listened as the sparra scout related all he had heard. Dismissing the bird, she turned to Skipper and sighed, "They caught Sprig. The fool didn't even know that there were vermin about and he walked into the middle of there camp like a blind mousemaid picking daisies." The otter cheiftain chuckled. "How many did he put away for us?" Shaltra managed a grin. "From what the sparra heard it was about a half dozen. That one never did mess about when he fought." The two friends stood on watch until they were relieved at nightfall, then told the news to the rest as they ate supper.

Grufftong watched through lidded eyes as the Redwallers strove to stay awake. "Tomorrow we will visit them again. Then we see how they fight when one of their own is at my mercy!"
Subject: My (long) story Part 1


Author:
Summerald
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Date Posted: 02:14:06 06/28/07 Thu

Summerald was wandering from Spallwall. She had longed for adventure, so she left to find one. Summerald saw a campfire, so she ran over. It was deserted... or so she thought. Summerald didn’t see the weasel rising behind her before it was too late. He threw a sizeable rock at Summerald. She fell senseless.
Hisky the weasel grinned. He had caught an Abbey beast. Wouldn’t Chief be happy? Hmm... Delran was capable of any mood. I guess Hisky would have to wait. He threw Summerald in a sack and tied it tight. This beast was no ordinary one.
When Summerald awoke, she was tied paw to paw with another creature. “Hiya! My name is Anthers. So you’re Summerald?” “How do you know my name?” questioned Summerald. “Delran, the ferret, wanted you because you are a valuable prisoner. You are strong and big.” “So, this Delran captured me to be a slave?” “Yep.” Anthers said.
Delran sent Hisky to get Summerald. Hisky said “On your paws. Delran wants you.” Summerald realized she was to be questioned.
“So, Summerald, what is this Abbey like?” Delran asked nicely. Summerald stayed silent. She knew one word could destroy Spallwall. “You know, food can be given to you if you tell me.” Delran commented. “Not in a million years.” Summerald replied. “Fine, Hisky, show her what we do next.” Delran spat. Hisky advanced, grinning viciously. He took out his whip and began slashing at Summerald. Summerald dodged and weaved, but a rat named Cunly held her still. She fell senseless once again.
Delran said “Hisky, you are an idiot! What if those abbey animals saw you?” Hisky replied “Uh, uh, they didn’t, Chief.” “HA! You are a bad excuse for a weasel Hisky.” Delran laughed. He didn’t know that he was waking Summerald. She was supposed to be unconscious longer so she wouldn’t see the location.
“Uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.” Summerald groaned. All of her body was alight with pain. She looked down to see the red whip marks on her skin. Summerald sat up and began looking around. She ran into Delran.
“So, Miss Mouse-thingy has awakened.” He laughed. Summerald screamed “Go away!” “No. I think I’ll have fun with you.” Delran called for Hisky, Cunly, and a stoat named Frisky. Hisky had the whip, Cunly had a sword, and Frisky had a javelin. All surrounded Summerald.
First Hisky struck her once, trice, thrice. Summerald’s body erupted with new pains. Next Cunly jabbed with his sword, opening new wounds. Finally Frisky jabbed here and there with his javelin. Summerald collapsed with many wounds.
Subject: Mossyra's Tale: Part 13


Author:
Mossyra of the Irresistible Imps
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Date Posted: 18:04:48 06/27/07 Wed

Mossyra watched as shadows dodged from tree to tree. Summoning her courage, she called, "Who's there? I don't do well with creatures sneaking about in the dark." The shadows froze and she lost sight of them. Silence reigned. She was just about to call again when a dark shape bounded forward. It was an otter.
Stifling her relief, Mossyra lowered her weapon and greeted the Skipper of otters. "Hey, mate. You had me scared for awhile back there." Skipper grinned and held out a paw. "I trust you'll come to Redwall with us, little one? It ain't good to be wandering about in the dark." Mossyra smiled and teased, "Oh, you're so gallant, Skipper. Might there be a bit of this and that for a poor, starving squirrelmaid that's lost her way?" The otter snorted. "You? Lost an' starving? If I know you, you've had a regular ole feast, gluttonous monster." The small squirrel grinned in reply. "Oh, aye, I've had a couple portions of raw berries and supped a few dozen gallons of stream water while heading toward your Abbey to eat you out of house an' home. Saved some of the larder for me, have you? Good. Now, I'll need about half the cellar to wash down my little snack. What I'll have for breakfast I don't know, seeing as you hardly keep any food at your place." Skipper picked her up and said, "I'd best get rid of you right now, else the cooks will resign and the babes will starve." They all laughed.

After a hearty supper, Mossyra was shown to her new room and left to sleep in peace. Before she closed her eyes, she thought, Home.
That night Martin the Warrior walked her dreams. "You cannot rest yet, child. There is much to be done. Quickdash has paid for meeting you and Silkfur needs her companion. Rise now, young one, and fulfill your destiny."

She awoke in front of the tapestry and knew what she had to do. Before she turned, however, she thought she saw Martin nod.
Subject: Mossyra's Tale: Part 12


Author:
Mossyra
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Date Posted: 16:55:50 06/27/07 Wed

Silkfur glanced out her oar port and froze, completely stunned at what she saw. Her friend, Turfee, saw her expression and lokked to see what had caused the reaction.
The slave driver saw two oar slaves cease rowing and strode over. He remembered them well. One was the young wildcat that had made fun of him and the other was a small mousemaid. He smiled cruelly and raised his whip. Then he, too, saw what they had noticed. The whip fell from his nerveless grasp. Then he dashed up the steps, yelling, "Ship to starboard, ship to starboard!"

Cruelclaw stood on deck and watched grimly as vermin crowded to the rails with weapons bristling. The ship he had been following had hoved into veiw and now he had found his daughter. Anticipation of the fight to come nearly had him quivering and he smiled as he thought of getting his revenge on the beasts that had taken his daughter.

Quickdash stared out his oar port, as did every other slave on the ship, and found himself looking into the oar port opposite of his on the other ship. A mousemaid smiled at him, but the creature that really caught his attention was the wildcat next to her, a half-grown maiden that resembled Cruelclaw. So, the cat had finally found his daughter. Not that it made any difference to a slave.

The two armies met with a clash and a roar. The cats in Cruelclaw's horde leapt onto the other ship and slaughtered the opposing army easily. They were used to fighting battles while the sea-going enemy knew only how to raid. The wildcat leader dueled the searat captain, fighting back and forth across the ship. It ended with the cat as victor. Bringing his sword across in an upward slash, he cut a long slash into the rat's arm. Then, in the momentary distraction caused by the wound, he swept it sideways and chopped off the captain's head. Then he went in search of his daughter.
The two guards that had been positioned at the top of the stairwell to prevent anybeast getting to the slaves died at his questing blade, the only two left of the entire crew. Father and daughter were finally reunited.
Subject: The Great War: Part 12


Author:
Mossyra
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Date Posted: 15:36:21 06/27/07 Wed

Silver had fallen asleep on watch. With a full stomach, close to a warm fire, and it being in the middle of a peaceful night, he couldn't keep his eyes open. As he was unaccostomed to standing watch, he didn't have the willpower to stay awake and was snoring within minutes. The eyes that had watched them from the shadows moved forward until a sizeable army of reptiles was visible in the light of the dying embers.

Mossyra was a light sleeper after seasons of being chased across many lands by vermin of all sorts. When she heard the lizards slither into the firelight, she woke yelling, "We're under attack!" Her companions started awake with paws on weapons. Silver shouted his warcry while throwing himself at the mass of reptiles. "Eulaliaaaaaaaa! 'S death on the wind!"
The foes melted away as if they had never been.
Silver and Sunsword stood in bewilderment, but Mossyra was already packing up their supplies. Kicking dirt over the flames, she hissed, "Don't stand there gawking! Lizards are true cowards, but they won't stay hidden for long!" Pushing two laden packs at her friends, she shouldered her own and started off through the woods. The badger and hare followed her, still casting the occasional glance over their shoulders.


Rosefire had hatched a plan to escape. It was plain, simple, and effective and she didn't have to wait long for an oppurtunity. The next time she was taken on a forage party, she brought her hidden supply of weapons. Slinging a rock with all her force at the lead vermin, she quickly dropped her paw and hid her sling. While the other two soldiers milled about in confusion, she dropped one and ran. Most of the other slaves followed while a few stopped to dispose of the remaining rat. The retaliation had begun.
Subject: The Great War: Part 12


Author:
Mossyra
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Date Posted: 15:20:41 06/27/07 Wed

Subject: Story of Samkin: Part 3


Author:
Samkin
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Date Posted: 21:41:06 06/26/07 Tue

Samkin went like the wind, but he knew he could not keep up this pace for any lenght of time. Desperate, he sighted a stream and, without a second thought, jumped in and let the current take him away.
The water was dark and murky, the current rushing by his ears. Cold, wet, ever-moving. The water seemed to have a life of it's own, swirilng sometimes, still others, and other rushing recklessly downhill.
When he finally got out of the stream, Samkin found himself by another vermin encampment. Again he hurtled into the stream, arrows whizzing in after him.
When he got out later on, it was night. He made a camp in the hollow of an oak and slept.
Samkin woke at dawn. He saw a large branch floating on the stream, so in he went aain. He only got out when the he saw rapids in the stream approaching rapidly. Then he followed it toward a place where it joined the River Moss. There he raced through the treetops along the river.

Samkin nearly fell in awe out of the elm he was perched in when he sighted the sea.
Subject: Story of Samkin: Part 2


Author:
Samkin
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Date Posted: 21:09:15 06/26/07 Tue

The leader's voice was soft and soothing when he spoke, almost friendly.
"So tell me, what is your Abbey like? Any weapons, any seasoned warriors, would it last a siege, tell me all about it."
"Never! Not in a million seasons!" was Samkin's only reply.
The leader switched to more tactiturn methods. "You must be hungry, I should give you food, but only if you tell me."
"Hah! Redwall makes better food than any moldy rotten crusts you'll give me!"
"I'm sure, but the only way you'll ever taste it again is by telling me."
Samkin merely closed his eyes and mouth, lay on his side, and began imitating fake snores.
"Stupid squirrel! You'll talk soon, aye, you'll talk so much you'll make a brook seem silent! A few weeks without food should loosen your toungue! Scrull get over here and teach this squirrel a lesson, the stupid beast!"
Scrull, a weasel, came over. He carried a whip. "Aye, chief!" Then he drew the whip back and began whipping Samkin, or at least he tried to. Samkin ducked and dodged, bobbed and weaved, managing to avoid the whip every time. Then he fell into a rage at the merciless cruelty of vermin. Is that the best you can do, barrelbottom? A blind granny could evade you!" After a string of insults, he jumped forward and began kicking, punching, biting, and generally fighting (rhyme unintended) Scrull. Scrull managed to call for help, and a group of vermin came rushing over. They beat Samkin back, but not before he gave Scrull a mighty kick to rump.
After the vermin had left, Samkin took out the sharp rock and picked the lock on his chain. Then he clambered up a tree and took off through the upper tracery of Mossflower wood.
He had not been fleeing long when he heard shouts from the camp, such as, "Hey! The captives gone!" "Sound the alarm!" "After him!!" These made Samkin go all the faster.
Subject: The Great War: Part 11


Author:
Mossyra
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Date Posted: 17:21:59 06/26/07 Tue

Silverthunder struggled with all his might. It was two days after the failed attempt at ambush and, since the Badger Lord hadn't surrendered the mountain, Rottooth had decided it was time to get rid of his captive hare. While several of his soldiers held the hare steady, Rottooth drew his sword and prepared to slowly kill the young hare. "I'll make you beg to be killed swiftly," the stoat leader taunted. Raising his sword, he swung it toward the captive slowly, making sure it wouldn't hit a fatal spot.
"Eulaliaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!" The expected war cry rang through the air and Rottooth turned to face the mountain. He was surprised. Instead of the creatures of Salamandastron charging to the rescue, he saw no movement. Another cry challenged the army. "Reeeeeeeeedwaaaaaaaaaaall!!!!"
He whirled around in time to see a squirrelmaid release a stone from her sling. He ducked just in time; the stone whizzed overhead and killed the weasel holding Silverthunder. A half-grown badger thundered up the beach weilding a club, his massive strength reeking havoc among the vermin that got to close. The squirrel bounded past a stunned Rottooth and leapt at the two rats restraining the hare captive. "Reeeeedwaaaaaaaalll!!" The vermin soldiers took one look at her avenging face and fled.
Grabbing the dazed hare's paw, Mossyra hurtled past Sunsword shouting, "Got him! Let's go before the Bloodwrath overtakes you!" The three young beasts ran toward the distant dunes.

Silverthunder introduced himself to his rescuers and profusely thanked them. "By the way, chaps, when's dinner, wot wot?"
Mossyra whacked him playfully and pulled a wry face at Sunsword. "Told you he'd mention food as soon as we'd set up camp." Sunsword grinned in reply. "So, Silver, why didn't you mention a dream with us in yet? I saw you; didn't you see me?"
"Now that you mention it, I do recall such a dream. There was lots of scoff in it, so I didn't think it any different from the rest of my dreams." Silver ducked another whack from Mossyra. Sunsword sighed and said, "If you two are done killing each other, I'll make you dinner. We have to get to Redwall Abbey before any vermin do and seek saftey. I don't like it that two seperate armies are in Mossflower. It's just asking for a third." Mossyra nodded in agreement. "I'm not that tired, so I'll take first watch. Don't stay up two late, my little dibbuns!" Mossyra ducked the sticks that were thrown at her and started scanning the woodland for potential enemies.

She didn't see the eyes that watched unblinkingly as they waited for the invaders in their land to fall asleep.
Subject: The story of Jenny the Mouse-maid Chapter 1


Author:
Jenny
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Date Posted: 00:20:26 06/26/07 Tue

One day in Saint Ninnian's Church, two mousemaids were born. One was named Jenny. The other was Delaney.
Verda Greenclaw was coming. No creature that had stood up to him lived. He needed 2 prisoners. Jenny and Delaney were knocked senseless by Verda. Rose and Vole died in the ambush attack.
Jenny awoke with a groan. As she spotted Delaney she called "Are you okay?" Vitch (a captain for Verda) said “Shut it!" Vitch grabbed a club and knocked Jenny out once again. There was no hope for the mousemaids.
"Chief, the two have been thrown in the dungeons. That Jenny is dangerous, sir." Vitch said. "Wait 'till we get where we need two be. Then you may have fun with her." Verda said.
Delaney awoke to her dark surroundings. She saw Jenny with a cut above her left eye. Delaney jumped at a noise. Vitch opened the door. He kicked Delaney and grabbed Jenny. "Wakey wakey." He said evilly.
Jenny awoke to a pain in her ear. She came awake. Vitch was slamming a whip on her body. “Ha ha! You’re a twitchy one aren’t you?” Vitch laughed. Jenny tried to jump him, but she was pulled backward. She was chained to a wall!


“Abbess Millie, Martin spoke to me tonight.” Muriel, the bank vole, said. “What did he say?” “At dawn’s first appearance, a strange occurrence, several seasons from now, but no reasons, watch for the mouse-maid, on one autumn’s day. But beware of rewet for it is fatal.” “Its confusing.” said Millie. “Let’s ask Brother Sam!”


Jenny started getting worn out. Vitch had been whipping her for too long. So she summoned her remaining strength and leaped. She landed on Vitch and bit his paw. “YEOCH!!!!!!!” Vitch hopped around in agony. “Enough!” shouted Verda. He grabbed Jenny and threw her against the wall. She lost her senses.
“You idiot! How could you let a measly mouse-maid do that!?” Verda bellowed. “But, I...” Vitch tried to protest. Verda wouldn’t hear of it. He ran out of the room. “I’ll show that mouse-maid a thing or two!”
Delaney shook her head. Jenny had to be so reckless! It was taking all of her skills to save her (did I mention? Delaney is a healer!). Jenny’s eyelids flickered. “De...lan...ey?” she said weakly.
Subject: Ascent: Part One


Author:
Hermes (Clever Clan)
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Date Posted: 23:52:54 06/25/07 Mon

The wind moaned.
The hare groaned.

“I’m all alone,
Of course I can groan.”
The hare whispered low
While the first hints of snow
Fell from the sky.
And to his eye,
The young hare could tell,
That all was not well.

The icy snow built up
Creating a wall
But when he climbed over,
He had a terrible fall.

Right down the mountain
Down far below.
Luckily his fall was muffled
By the icy snow.

But he had broken his arm,
And had to get back there.
What would be the dangerous fate,
Of this little hare?
Subject: Lament: Part Two


Author:
Hermes (Clever Clan)
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Date Posted: 18:47:31 06/25/07 Mon

This is part 2! Sorry if I fudge the truth a bit, I haven't read all of the books. Here it goes:

Chapter 3

Landrye awoke to a pounding headache. She moaned, her eyes still closed. She felt horrible. Every inch of her body burned, ached, or burned and ached. She took a deep breath. Suddenly she heard a voice next to her.

“Look, the jolly old chap’s woken up, wot wot.”

Not knowing that there were others in around her, she shot up faster then a bullet, instantly collapsing back down from lack of strength. She realized she was in a bed, and surrounded by strange creatures, for she had never met a hare, or anything else besides other squirrels and vermin. She tried to get out of bed, but the strong paw of the hares forced her down.

“You’re going to have to stay there old chap, until you get better. I’m Brigadier Crumshaw of the Long Patrol, wot wot.”

Of course, Landrye had never heard of the Long Patrol. “Let me GO!” She screamed. “Let me out of here. I swear I won’t tall anyone about you.”

“We don’t intend to capture you, but you can’t leave until you have your breakfast, at least.” One hare said.

“Spot on! Hit the vermin on the head*, eh what?”

“That you did, Corporal Laceleaf.”

“Speaking of breakfast, I think it’s coming through the door now, wot.”

Another hare came in, carrying a tray laden with bowls of hot oatmeal and scones. The hare distributed the food, and talked to the other hares. Finally, Landrye got her food. All of the hares were talking among themselves, while wolfing down oatmeal and hot scones.

“Now this is the stuff for a hungry hare, eh?”

“Sure is, Laceleaf. I think the chef added a dash of cinnamon today, wot.”

“Cinnamon? Oh yes, you are a very keen chap. I say, when do you reckon Lady Melesme would like to see the young chap?”

“Probably sometime tomorrow. Gives the poor squirrel sometime to rest, eh wot.”

Laceleaf took another look at the squirrel, and saw that she was fast asleep.

Chapter 4

Landrye was feeling much better. This was her third day with the hares and she was already up and about. She helped prepare food, and watched the hares practice using weapons. Finally, toward the afternoon, Lady Melesme asked for her.

Laceleaf came up to her, while she was practicing using a sword again. “Hey there, my jolly friend. Regaining your strength, wot? Lady Melesme would like to see you now, chap. Follow me.”

Landrye followed Laceleaf in silence. “What would Lady Melesme say to her?” She asked herself. “Probably nothing too bad, since she let me stay here for three days. I hope she won’t make me go back to my home, through the desert.”

“Here we are,” said Laceleaf, interrupting her thoughts.

The young squirrel and not so young hare entered a vast chamber. Hares lined the walls on either side, and on the other side of the chamber stood Lady Melesme, the badger queen.


Chapter 5

“Welcome.” The badger queen’s words rang out with kindness, yet authority. “What is your name, young squirrel?”

“L-landrye, your majesty. Landrye Kaer Gharr.”

“What brings you here, to the mountain fortress of Salamandastron?”

Quickly, Landrye explained everything that had happened since the destruction of her home. “…And the next thing I knew, I was in bed and surrounded by hares.” The squirrel concluded.

Lady Melesme wore a thoughtful expression, as if amazed that the small squirrel could have survived so much. “Well, Landrye, you are welcome to stay with us in Salamandastron, or you can continue your journey north. What will it be?”

“Thank you for the kind offer of staying here, but I must continue north. I shall leave at tomorrow’s dawn. Thanks again for your hospitality. If I can find a way to repay you, I shall.”

“Very well, then. Farewell, my friend!”



*Authors Note: It’s supposed to be a joke. People say hit the nail on the head, but I thought it would be funny if hares of the Long Patrol said hit the vermin on the head. Just for all those people who don’t get it.
Subject: The Great War: Part 10


Author:
Mossyra
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Date Posted: 15:24:56 06/25/07 Mon

The vermin caught them by surprise. They had just found the entrance to the tunnel and moved the stone aside when two guards walked in. The four creatures just stared at each other for a second. Then, one of the soldiers, a stoat, gave a yell and rushed forward. Mossyra leapt upon him, calling to Sunsword, "Run for it! I'll hold them off, then follow you! Go, go!"
Sunsword fled through the wide opening, found a suitable crack, and wedged himself in. The weasel ran by half a second later and he dealt it a fearsome blow, then continued with his escape. Dashing through the tunnel at top speed, he soon reached the end and scrambled up a steep incline to the top, heaving on a large rock that got in his way. He tumbled into the sunlight, lying stunned for a moment. Standing up, he exerted his badger strength and slammed the sizable rock back in place. Moments later he was gone, melted back into the forest and perfectly camouflaged.
The walls of Tumbledale were perfectly visible from his hiding place and he saw a dark shape leap over the wall and hurtle downward, taking the open ground betweeen Tumbledale and Mossflower in a matter of seconds and going through the trees even faster before appearing near the escape tunnel entrance. "Mossyra," he shouted delightedly. The squirrel started with shock, then grinned and replied, "Yes, you big lump of a badger. I suggest we get moving before we're caught again."

A few moments later the small clearing was deserted and the two friends were on their way to Salamandastron to seek safety.
Subject: The Great War: Part 9


Author:
Mossyra
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Date Posted: 02:20:32 06/25/07 Mon

Bankdew strapped the quiver of arrows to her back and strode toward the place formely called Tumbledale. The goshawk, Kreer, watched for a moment, then said, "Kreearrr. You will surely be slain and the squirrel will be right mad. Kreeeerkk." The ottermaid didn't hesitate a second, but kept on walking. "She needs help and I will help her." Kreer sighed. "Krraaarr. I have told you already, she is a Warrior. Krreeaarrr."

Sunsword woke to dampness and wondered what had caused it. Opening his eyes he found himself in the cellar with an anxious squirrel standing over him. "Thank goodness! You scared me half to death, fainting like that, and I was about to wake you the old fashion way!"
He struggled into a sitting position and slowly took stock of the prison. It was lighter for some reason and three bowls sat on the floor. One contained water, another food, and the third strands of grass. Stones littered the floor.
"The creatures of Tumbledale hide food and grass strands in secret compartments all over their homes, especially in the cellars," Mossyra explained. "They also hide sharp rocks in the cracks and have wooden slats that are painted like the stones around them covering wells of sweet-tasting water. I was looking for the escape tunnel they have in every cellar just before you awoke. It's concealed by a stone that's heavier than all the rest. Come on, we'll find it together." The two young creatures searched steadily, unaware that Soretooth had ordered guards to fetch them.

Rosefire ate a loaf of bread she had pilfered from the soldiers' stores. Passing around some wild strawberries she had found, she kept the spirits of the slaves alive as she told them about edible plants and poisonous ones. "You see, that plant the stoat was forced to eat was nightshade, a deadly poison. It can be used as a cure sometimes, but I would suggest avoiding it. The yellow blossoms at the north end of the camp are laburnum, totally deadly. If you touch any part of them you won't have long to live. Now, let me see . . . Ah yes, wolfbane, another poison. It isn't fatal in small amounts, but a big enough dose will kill you. It looks like . . ."
And so the slaves of Blackfang learned poisons to slip into the food of their captors when they weren't being watched and wild plants to find so that they could have more energy to help keep them alive.
Subject: The Great War: Part 8


Author:
Mossyra of the Irresistible Imps
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Date Posted: 20:57:50 06/24/07 Sun

Silverthunder dreamt of a badger. This badger had golden stripes instead of normal white ones. For some reason he cried to it, "My lord, they are killing me. They are killing me!" Then he was dragged from his slumbers by a voice calling, "Danger is nigh. Awake, Silver, and face the threat."
Silverthunder awoke.

He was bound to a stake out of arrow range in front of his mountain home. Some sort of parley was going on between the current Badger Lord and Rottooth, but he was too far away to hear. A spearpoint tickled the fur of his neck and he could distinctly hear sounds behind him, doubtless more vermin. His immediate attention, however, was on the score of vermin sneaking in to cut off the hares and badger from Salamandastron. Despite the obvious threat to his life, Silverthunder roared at the top of his lungs, "It's a trap! They're behind you! Eulaliaaaaaaaaa!"
The startled guards jerked out of a semi-doze and quickly stunned him with a sharp blow to the head, but it was too late. The message had been recieved and the Salamandastron party retreated within the safety of the mountain. Rottooth swiftly drew back as a hail of arrows centered on him and angrily approached the guards.
"You were supposed to be watching the hare to make sure he didn't warn his comrades," Rottooth spluttered furiously. "Dozing on the job, letting the hares escape with their leader unscathed, and nearly killing your king, those are the charges set upon you. The pentalty: death!"
The two unfortunate soldiers backed up, one holding his paws forward pleadingly. "We was awake, I swear we was!" The first one was cut down before he took two paces. His companion turned and fled, dodging and ducking. Two soldiers ran after the escaper, swords flashing as they tried to cut him down.

Rottooth ignored the spectacle and turned on Silverthunder, eyes glittering with uncontrolled rage. "You, my friend, are not as fortunate. They were my creatures and had the right to be killed quickly. But you are the enemy. And I have no mercy with enemies."
Subject: Rampage North- Ch. 4 (Part 2)


Author:
Conder, AA
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Date Posted: 05:21:32 06/23/07 Sat

Puroc decided in the end that he couldn't attend Private Statigo's burial service. This was probably because he was collapsed and sobbing on his desk. Now that he didn't have to put up a front for his soldiers, the ferret had stumbled into his personal tent, threw his helmet on the ground and slumped into his chair, dejected at the loss of such a promising, closely related young beast before the primary battles hadn't even begun. As most of his mind wracked itself over the death of one person, another part of it sadly reflected that if this was how he reacted to one casualty, he'd probably lose his mind in the aftermath of the upcoming assault. It was amazing that he even got to be a leader in the first place just by promising a steady supply of sustenance, protection from warring vermin clans and education to boot. Not every typical so-called "vermin" knew the difference between the words "liable" and "libel," let alone possessed literacy at all. This laborious process of teaching his army how to hone their inherent intellectual potential ended up giving each individual soldier a close bond with their leader and their peers, but it meant that when one of them died, it was all the more regrettable. If it weren't for the forces pushing them northward, for that matter, Puroc might have even considered a life of peace.

At this point, the Commander realized how mentally sidetracked he was getting, took a deep breath and wiped the tears from his eyes. He had neglected to remove any armor, save his helmet, when he entered his tent, and finally the ferret realized how completely exhausted he was, and how much he was roasting in his thermally conductive steel platemail. Puroc stood up and went through the motions to take off his armor on muscle memory only, letting his mind stray to the day's other affairs. Trying to push the death of Private Statigo to the back of his thoughts as much as he could while unbuckling his gauntlets, he decided it would be constructive to contemplate the resource situation. Munitions were in good supply, water was practically unlimited, food was coming in at a reasonably constant rate and firewood was extremely easy to acquire with the trees tightly packed around them. The only variable suffering was morale, and there wasn't much he could do about that since... No, don't think about that. You already cried your eyes out over it, now focus on something that'll actually help. And besides, you're taking off your greaves already. Just relax now, maybe get some rest. You already put up the "Do not disturb" icon on your tent door, why not lie down?

Puroc reclined on his moderately thick, padded bed. Actually, to help stay on the level of his troops, he used the exact same bedding and mattress type as they did, which actually was of reasonably good quality. Smiling contentedly at the sudden pleasure of pressure on something other than metal, Puroc ran a paw down his short-sleeved shirt and decided to indulge in the simple pleasure of taking it off. He sat up, managed to take it off with just one paw (not an easy feat) and flung it apathetically across the tent. Commander Puroc could nearly see the heat radiating off his body, his closely cut dark gray fur providing barely any insulation and letting him cool down relatively quickly. The ferret gazed down at his weary body, ribs just barely visible underneath his musculature and his slightly figure-hugging and unobtrusive shorts giving way to his bare, sturdy shins and rugged, perpetually enduring feet. Did this exceptional body really belong to someone so easily disheartened by a single, premature casualty?
Subject: The Story of Samkin: Part one


Author:
Samkin
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Date Posted: 19:06:53 06/22/07 Fri

Samkin was walking by the Abbey pond when a volley of arrows came zoomed over the wall and made a large splash as they landed in the Abbey pond. Samkin dashed up to the wall to investigate. He saw something move in the ditch, and leaned over the battlements. Then the slingstone came, darting up from the ditch and hitting Samkin in the head, causing him to fall outward. Just before he lost consciousness, he saw a weasel scurrying across the path and hold up a sack. Samkin landed in it, but he did not know it, for he had fallen unconscious.
When Samkin awoke, the first thing he noticed was the throbbing pain in his head. The second thing he noticed was the bankvole chained beside him. The bankvole turned, and just before Samkin could speak, it answered the unspoken question. "You're in a slave line marchin' nort'. The vermint leader i' Narkal Deathfang. I su'est doin' what the vermints comman', 'cause 'tis either that or die."
Samkin noticed a rock with a sharp, jagged point, grabbed it, and bound it to his tail where it was unnoticable with some long grass. He finished this just in time, for a rat came swaggering up then, carrying a whip coiled about one paw. "So, the likkle squirgle be's awa'e eh? I 'opes youse'll dis'bey Narka', I'm par'ial to roas'ed squirgle."
Samkin replied. "Look, you lollop-eared bush-faced stick-legged ugly slimy toad, it's 'squirrel' not 'squirgle' and the squirrel's name is Samkin. What's more, if you eat me i'll stick in your ugly excuse for a throat and choke you, is it's the last thing I do."
The rat uncoiled his whip and raised it, saying, "Oh, I'll teach youse a lesson, you little pes'!" The whip stopped in md-air, then was wrenched out of the rat's grasp a ferret, who proceeded to belabore the rat with it. "You knows wot the chief said, yer ain't supposed to touch dat likkle squiggle!"
Again Samkin corrected the vermin. "It's squirrel, not squirgle or squiggle! And my name is Samkin!"
The ferret stopped beating the rat, snapped the whip, and flung it away. "Youse stay out o' dis, squiggle!"
Samkin was about to correct him again when the squabble was interrupted by another rat coming up. "Danbul, Furlump, wot's goin' on 'ere? Don' answer dat, just leave the skiggul a'one!"
Before Samkin could correct them on his species pronunciation, they were all frog-marched off by and approaching fox.
Wot've youse lot been tol' 'bout argooin'? Now git goin'."
Then a weasel came up, and they saluted him. "Squiggle's dat way, chief!"
Samkin drew in his breath as he realized he was about to go through an interrogation with the vermin leader.
Subject: Rampage North- Ch. 4


Author:
Conder, AA
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Date Posted: 18:37:39 06/22/07 Fri

"How did this happen so quickly?"

"His liver was completely impaled. The bleeding was simply out of control. I'm surprised he even had enough stamina to run all that distance and be able to intelligently talk to you afterwards."

Statigo's corpse lay on the triage bed, being stared at by both Puroc and Chief Medic Klaxon. The skillfully but hastily erected canvas tent around them let through a somber yellow light, illuminating Statigo's bare, muscular torso and the disconcerting crimson gash in the middle.

"Commander, we're going to have to start embalming soon. You might want to leave."

Puroc was obviously mentally elsewhere. Klaxon's strong, slow voice jolted him out of his reverie. "What was that, Klaxon?"

The Chief Medic hesitated. "I... Said, sir, we need to start embalming the body soon. For the burial."

"Oh! The burial... OK, I'll go. I was just thinking about how young Statigo is, pity he died before he could see anything much of the world. And he was doing so well."

Puroc quickly walked out of the tent, caught by surprise by the intense rays of sun beating down on the earth outside. He raised a paw to shield from some of the glare as an officer approached.

"Commander? Do you have a moment?" It was Captain Torque, the stoat in charge of the scouting parties. Commander Puroc glanced at the officer, realized who it was and responded.
"Captain Torque. How are the scouting parties going?"

The Captain shook his head. "Terrible, sir. We've come across a whole cache of forage patches, hunting parties have scored at least two dozen large kills, we have infinite fresh water from the Mossflower River, and one of my beasts is dead."

"I just had a conversation about that with Klaxon. If you want to see the body, you'd better get in there fast. They're about to start embalming and there isn't a beast in my army who doesn't know that the sight of a corpse in the middle of getting embalmed is worse than anything our best weapons can deliver."

Torque frowned. "I'll.. Get in there. I need to see the body. He's one of my hundred... Well, now it's 99..."

The Captain knocked three times on the front-center tent pole and then walked in. It was possible to practice manners even in times of stress and portable structures.

"Hello? Oh, Captain, it's you. We're just about to start embalming, actually, so if you wanted to see the body, we haven't shrouded it yet." Klaxon gestured past the discarded, blood-flecked brigandine armor and red-stained white cotton short-sleeve shirt on the ground to the corpse of Private Statigo on the triage bed.

"You haven't even been able to take my soldier off the triage bed?"

"It's a triage bed, we don't really have a separate one for mortuary purposes until the actual funeral. I'd like to, but we do have to stay mobile. The lighter, the better."

Captain Torque gazed at the body of his former soldier, clad in only short white cotton slacks, his boots having been removed when he was put on the bed and all armor being removed for examination. The gaping red wound was just as disturbing as it was when Puroc witnessed it, and it still left an unnerving aura over the rat's well-developed abdominal muscles, easily visible through his rather thin coat of fur.

"You know, Klaxon, if it weren't for that spear wound, at first glance I'd guess he was just asleep. He would really look a lot more... Peaceful if it weren't for that big red gash there... I'd like to meet whoever did that to him..." The Captain involuntarily curled his paws into fists.
Subject: Green Isle: Chapter 1


Author:
Cuoha of GG
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Date Posted: 17:40:42 06/22/07 Fri

At Holt Summerdell, preparation for the feast was underway. Water lanterns were strung around the pools and the waterfall, and long tables were set up at the edge of the pond. The brew otter, Birl Gully, was sat in a cave instructing otter babes on how to roll the barrels down to the pond, whilst perfecting his latest barrel of Gullyplug punch.
“No, no, not so fast, you’re going to run somebeast over!” Birl took a sip of is punch to calm himself down. “Hmm, a little more cowslip, I think,” he remarked. “Stop that, Toobil, you’re going to ruin that elderberry wine!” Birl mopped his brow with a handkerchief. These otter babes were more trouble than they were worth. Kolun Galedeep entered the cave waving a large stick.
“I found young Toobil brandishing this at Gribbsy,” Kolun explained. “I took it off him before he took somebeast’s eye out.”
“Those young’uns will be the death of me,” said Birl, shaking his head. “When they’re not smashing my best barrels of strawberry fizz on the rocks, they’re attempting to assassinate each other with sticks. They were meant to be using those sticks to control the barrels, y’know, but no chance. D’you think you could get them away from here, Kolun?”
“Any time, matey,” said Kolun with a wink.
“Ahoy, mateys, I’ve heard Deedero needs help making candied chestnut trifle!” yelled Kolun. Whooping and roaring, the otterbabes charged over to Deedero’s kitchen.
“We’s gonna make twifle!”
“We’s gonna make twifle!”
Kolun grimaced. “My missus won’t thank me for that,” he said. “I’d better go and help her out.” He charged off in pursuit of the otterbabes.
Deedero’s kitchen was a scene of chaos, mainly due to the fact that she was not making candied chestnut trifle.
“Wah, me wanna make a candy chesknut twifle!” squealed the babes. Deedero noticed Kolun at the back of all the otterbabes, looking at the floor and shuffling his feet nervously.
“Kolun, you big fat plank-tailed liar! You told them I was making candied chestnut trifle!”
“Well, I - ” Kolun was interrupted by excited whoops and cheers. Banya Streamdog came rushing in.
“The Redwallers are here! Leatho sighted the Fearless Frunk anchoring in the bay,” she said breathlessly. “Get the feast on the tables quickly!”
Holt Summerdell became a hive of activity. Pies, flans, pasties and trifles were all put on the tables, the ale and wine barrels were lined up neatly and the finishing touches were made to the decorations. Queen Tiria organised a small group of otters to go and meet the Redwallers. In less than five minutes, the feast was ready and Tiria, Banya, Kolun, Deedero and Leatho were marching off to meet with the visitors.




The otters stopped at the lake, just past the charred remains of Riggu Felis’ old fortress.
“There they are!” exclaimed Tiria. The Redwallers could be seen in the distance. “We’ll wait for them here.”
It seemed like an age before the Redwallers arrived at the lake. When they finally did, reunions were flowing thick and fast.
“Abbess Lycian!”
“Tiria, how you’ve grown!”
“Tribsy, it’s good to see you. Is Girry here?”
“Nay, ee little rarscal wudd get seasickened, ho urr!”
“Where’s Brantalis?” inquired Tiria.
“Oh, he’ll be along as soon as the gluttonous feathery foodbag has finished stuffing himself back at Redwall,” came a voice from the back of the crowd of Redwallers.
Tiria knew who it was instantly. She would recognise that voice anywhere.
“Dad, it’s you!” said Tiria excitedly. “I didn’t realise you were coming!”
“Aye, it’s me sure enough,” said Banjon. He came forwards and hugged his daughter tightly. “Now are we going to stand here all day, or can we go to this feast I’ve heard about?” Everybeast laughed. The joyful party started the long walk back to the holt.
Subject: Mossyra's Tale: Part 11


Author:
Mossyra of the Irresistible Imps
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Date Posted: 01:30:16 06/20/07 Wed

Swiftstream stumbled, almost fell, then recovered. He continued on wearily, searching for a place to hide from his pursuers. If they caught him, he was worse than dead. Coarse shouts reached his ears, causing him to go even faster. Laughter came from close behind and his exhaustion tried to pull him down. An arrow whizzed close by, but he was too tired to try to duck and dodge; even running in a straight line was an effort. The patter of running feet reached his ears and he knew they had him. Unable to force his limbs forward any more, he turned to face his tormentors. They burst through the trees and slowly began to circle him, leaving no escape. A few moved to attack.
They never got a chance. Another group of vermin that were obviously thieves broke cover at just that moment. A fox advanced a few paces and said, "What have we here? A gathering is it?" The rest laughed. The soldiers had turned to face the new threat, leaving two to watch their captive. Swiftstream eyed the newcomers warily. Most were grinning cruelly, ready to enjoy the sport their comrades would make. Others drew their weapons, mentally choosing who to kill. "Drop your weapons," the fox demanded harshly, all pretext of being merciful gone. The vermin soldiers leveled what spears they had in reply. "Very well then," the fox said coldly. Two simple words made his final order. "Kill them."
The battle was brief and bloody. Archers from the robber band poured arrows into the opposing force quickly, leaving only three creatures alive. The two soldiers still alive tried backing up, but more enemies appeared behind them. They were swiftly slaughtered: One fell to a spear thrust and the other died beneath the slashes of a sword.
Swiftstream tensed, his eyes never leaving the fox. He didn't have long to wait. The emotionless eyes swung toward him and a careless voice said, "If you resist you will be killed." Two vermin, a rat and a stoat, approached him as the rest left the spot, taking whatever they wanted from the dead. They tied his wrists behind his back and slipped a noose over his head before pulling him after the others.

Swiftstream was pushed into the vermin camp roughly by his guard. Eyes swung toward him and he tried not to cry out in pain as a sword prodded him sharply to make him go faster. He was led to a tent by the fox while the rat followed behind to discourage escape; the stoat had disappeared into the forest awhile back. The sentries ushered them in and the rat forced him to his knees before quickly departing and Swifstream took advantage of the moment to study the room. A heavily armored ferret sat on a wooden chair that was covered in strange symbols. Two weasels stood on either side and a stoat watched from the shadows. The ferret was obviously the leader of the vermin and Swiftstream knew better than to speak out. He waited silently, eyes downcast.
Minutes ticked by slowly without anything in the tent stirring. The ferret read a paper slowly, ignoring the intruders. After a long while he sighed and dropped the sheet, finally acknowledging the presence of the otter and the fox. "What did you find that you thought was important enough to bring into my sight," the ferret demanded. "A common slave is insignificant to me. If he fought you, then kill him. I am not needed to carry out such punishments." The fox bowed his head before replying, "Mighty Kilgon, this otter is special. We found him surrounded by nearly a score of vermin from Jarnak's horde, more than what was needed to track down a mere slave."
Kilgon's eyes swung to Swiftstream. "Is this true?" Swiftstream nodded silently without raising his eyes. For a moment no sound was audible. Then Kilgon said, "Leave us." The guards, fox, and stoat left without a word. Silence prevailed once more. Then, "You have a secret." Kilgon's voice was deadly quiet, like steel being drawn. "Something important, no doubt, for it has attracted the notice of my long-time foe, Jarnak. I must know, what has caught his notice so strongly as to track down one puny slave, a young otter with no friends or family." Swiftstream flinched. "Well?" He had no choice but to respond. His secret wasn't worth dying for, even if it did threaten another creature. Swiftstream took a deep breath, then whispered, "I know where somebeast is, a beast Jarnak wants dearly." The next question cut through his soul. "Who?" A pang of regret could not stop him from saying, "Just a squirrelmaid. I don't know why he wants her." Kilgon's sharp intake of breath made him wince inwardly. "Mossyra," Kilgon hissed. It appeared that the squirrelmaid's fame had exceded her.
Subject: Lament: Part One


Author:
Hermes (Clever Clan)
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Date Posted: 19:46:55 06/19/07 Tue

Prologue

All was not well. No matter how hard she tried, she could never make it well. And so what was the use of battle, when all that laid at the end of that path was death? More death. She couldn’t bear the burden of horrific memories. Burning houses, the slaughtered staring lifelessly into a blood red dawn. Even at the best of times, the horrid memories lingered, threatening to destroy her mind. Besides, what could she do about it now? All it was was a mere page in the great chronicles of time. No one knew, let alone cared what this young squirrel was doing. Always alone, swamped in distant memories. It all replayed back in her mind, as real as the grass beneath her feet. The ocean’s waters stained red as those retreating were picked off one by one. She wanted to run and hide, as far away as she could from the torturous thoughts. But how could she? How could she defeat a figment of thought? She would have rather gone unarmed against a horde of vermin, then to be cursed by memories. Horrible, terrible memories.

What was there to do now? Nobeast would take in a hungry, scavenging squirrel. Just more mouths to feed. She decided to travel north. Away from her home, away from her memories. Without further ado, she gathered up what little belongings she had, and began her journey.

Chapter 1

Her name was Landrye. Landrye Kaer Gharr. She had lived in a small village, secluded from everywhere else, unknown to the world. Until the attack.

The vermin armies marched forward, waving spears, shields, and lit torches. They burned the homes, slaughtered everyone. As far as Landrye knew, no one had survived. Except her.

The air was humid, and the young squirrel could sense a storm approaching. The clouds on the horizon darkened. The small squirrel quickened her pace, hoping to find a small cave or other protection from the rain. The rocks burned her paws like hot coals, but she paid them no heed. The last thing she wanted was the only food left to get wet. There would be no food in this desert.

A bolt of lightning split the sky, as sheets of rain poured down. Landrye tried her best to keep the food dry, but to no avail. Her pace slowed down to a gloomy walk as the icy rain chilled her to the bone. She let out a small sigh. There was no escaping the inevitable. After about an hour of the long trek, she found a small cave. Unfortunately, it was positioned so that the wind blew the rain inside. At least it was better then nothing. She tried to light a fire, but the scarce firewood that she carried with her was too damp to light. So she ate one of her last pieces of soggy bread, and settled down, cold and wet, with a fierce storm raging outside.

Chapter 2

Everything with her was dry in the morning. The stone of the cave had heated, and burned her paws. Quickly, she took he scrap of cloth that she had been using as a blanket and tore it in half. She tied each piece around her paws, using the cloth like shoes. She figured that she wouldn’t need a blanket anymore in the desert. Gathering her supplies, she left the cave.

The desert is no place for a squirrel. The flaming, sun-baked sand scorched her paws right through her claws. The only other signs of life were small sand lizards, not good for eating. After a long march, she reached the dunes. Her paws sunk into the sand, in some places up to her waist. She tackled the dunes, using all of her strength to pull herself out of the sand that threatened to engulf her. The hot wind blew grains of sand into her eyes, and stung her face. Coughing some sand out of her mouth, she trudged steadily forward. She began to feel feverish, and her mouth was parched. She had used up all of her water long ago. She stumbled, but forced herself forward. Her whole body felt as if it were made of lead. The wind blew more sand into her eyes, temporarily blinding her. Her feverish feeling grew stronger, overwhelming her and draining all energy from her. She felt as if she waited a moment longer, she would die. She stumbled again, but this time didn’t get up. She didn’t even have enough strength to turn around. She laid face-down on the sand, her thoughts trailing away. And the last thought she was aware of having before the world went black was, "Why did I ever do this?"
Subject: Attack of the Weaseals: Part 6


Author:
Mossyra of the Irresistible Imps
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Date Posted: 01:59:05 06/19/07 Tue

The mighty weasel army tore through Mossflower, capturing any woodlanders they found unawares. Screams resounded through the air as those that resisted were mercilessly slaughtered. Harvest mice were dragged into Grufftong's presence, along with what remained from the army of squirrels that had fought back. Vermin guards were careless of the way they treated their captives; any that fell were beaten until they got up or died. The beasts that had been caught were forced to kneel before the weasel leader. He pointed to one of them, a sturdy squirrel with blood streaming from a wound in its head, and said something to two of the nearby soldiers. They nodded. When all the survivors were gathered before the evil weasel he motioned toward the soldiers and they rougly dragged the frightened squirrel forward.
"I have selected you to be the leader of the new slaves," Gufftong announced with evil glee. "If they rebel you will be the first to die, followed by whoever takes your place as leader. If you die before your time or are killed to subdue a rebellion, I will choose the next leader. Every time the leader is killed to quell unrest, the one that follows will get younger." He turned toward the new slaves. "Their deaths will be on your heads." Then he waved his hand dismissively and the terrified captives were herded away. Gufftong faced the chosen leader and said quietly, "You are in charge of keeping them settled." Then his soldiers took the squirrel away.



The Abbess of Redwall watched the attackers through narrowed eyes. Unlike the ones before her, she understood the ways of war and participated in the retaliations quite freely. She knew the attacking weasels were up to something. Most of them had disappeared into Mossflower, leaving a few to keep the Abbey dwellers bottled in. Then she heard shouts from the forest and watched with a sinking heart as the main force appeared, pushing woodlanders in front of them. Now she understood what the army had been doing in Mossflower.
"Getting provisions, eh?" Her captain, Skipper of otters, sighed. "I had hoped it was so. Soon their general will come forward and threaten their lives if we don't surrender." The Abbess echoed his sigh. "I wouldn't mind if that prediction was wrong as well."
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