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Subject: ^.The Divine ::Thunder::.^


Author:
Jin.rai
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Date Posted: 17:26:12 01/19/03 Sun

::Thunder::
^.1 : the sound that follows a flash of lightning and is caused by sudden expansion of the air in the path of the electrical discharge
2 : a loud utterance or threat.^


^.She abandoned Frozen Dreams to his mood, cavorting down through the ravine. Hooves played through the air in her trademarked tip-toe style, onyx repelled by the polar surface of the loam. Spotting Euripedes and Perseus she halted, surveying them from shawdowed bluish ooids. Lobes flicked, an attempt at eaves-dropping...to no avail. She studied them in greater depth, without the arrogance she had masked herself with previously. After memorizing there visual appearence, the fae trotted gracefully off in the direction of nowhere. She stopped again...wondering what lay outside the prison the valley had become this day. Without FD to silently taunt...Sodality to argue with about her freedom, Seductress of the Storm to show false dislike towards...she was alone...utterly alone. A once light, now a slave, one who had every rebelious sinew in her body dampered...by this...this place! Everything about it...who was Jinrai? She asked again of herself. There was nothing in the world for her...She nearly craved a sharp kick in the barrel, some punishment for her behavior...Just attention...Just to be visable when invisable...Here...she was Invisable all together.^


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[> Subject: ...So Invisable...


Author:
Jin.rai
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Date Posted: 00:32:57 01/20/03 Mon

^.The phina looked about herself...still unnoticed by anyone. She cursed herself, was not the slave girl independant?! She needed no one! But slowly, an exausted mind addmitted it's lonely condition. She sighed, Jinrai wanted to fly...more than anything in all the world. If at this moment she could have any one thing...she would ask to fly, to fly without wings was the greatest of miracles. She craved speed, a shameless addiction. She longed to just galloped out of here...and never stop...never look back...Her she was, standing alone...and screaming inside.She stepped in the direction of the border, lobes turned forth. Not even thinking...not wanting to...^


[> Subject: ...So Invisable...


Author:
Jin.rai
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Date Posted: 00:33:33 01/20/03 Mon

^.The phina looked about herself...still unnoticed by anyone. She cursed herself, was not the slave girl independant?! She needed no one! But slowly, an exausted mind addmitted it's lonely condition. She sighed, Jinrai wanted to fly...more than anything in all the world. If at this moment she could have any one thing...she would ask to fly, to fly without wings was the greatest of miracles. She craved speed, a shameless addiction. She longed to just galloped out of here...and never stop...never look back...Her she was, standing alone...and screaming inside.She stepped in the direction of the border, lobes turned forth. Not even thinking...not wanting to...^


[> Subject: [almes for the poor]


Author:
Syndic
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Date Posted: 14:17:26 01/20/03 Mon

The lactescent stalion was easily mistakeable for a snow drift with legs, as his till poise and niveous hide blended pwerfectly with the blanketed rollings of the valley. he had his camargue ancestors to bless for that. since his entrance upon the terra he had refrained from travelling inward, away from the comfort the heavy-laden pines that stood greenly not ten feet from where he stood, a few boidylengths, two good bunds... or two minutes with his careful shuffling gait.

for a demonstration of how easily time passed before his sightless eyes; while he delved so greedily into the oblivion of his labyrinth psyche, was the ice formations encompassing his onyx daggers in a beautifully fragile enclosure. life passed, for the moment, observed but unregistered beyond the safety of his frame. occuli were half-lidded from his trance, serving merely to damper the darkness of his milky irises.
standing, however for away, the sheer impossibility of deciphering his conferencing thoughts and emotion from such an expressionless pallet would prove an immense obstacle to interfere with such a set atmosphere. but i, sitting here a ways away, can summon every half-formed thought to sift through the rivers of his consciousness, and put on display for your awaiting eyes. every desire, hope, dream that lurks behind his sophisitcated, immovable facade. but treading that deeply into such a complex array of psychological fact would be a monstrous feat. instead i may but hint, suggest to you what exactly our poor, confused friend has on his mind.

would you believe, from his cool exposure and dreamy expression, that he wages a war with his concios, that logic has been utterly defeated, and that chaos wound so tightly to itself has erupted from the grounds of his persona? thoughts along the lines of death. child. war. flee. future. fling themselves in suicidal panics about his grey matter? thoughts so unrelated and alien from one another, but held together with doubtless sociopathic intent. and what causes one to lose all sense of presence? to spark a deadly harmony of disastrous thoughts? four lines. a little rhythm. a poem. a quatrain. the musical melody of words in the absence of instrumental accompaniment. a prophecy. and he was caught. locked within the confining walls of the analysation, and yet completely safe. at home within the fortress of dermis and sinew and blood and bone.

it was his nose that saved him, hed his hand while he stepped back from the edge, lessened his medication and waved aside the impending doctors in white coats. a perfectly ordinary perfume, whose brother and sister scents created a distant monotony that characterised the valley. a giant knot of assimilation. ofcourse, each strand could be unwound, traced to it's prper source. but such an undertaking, with no idea of the outcome save that one smell was a near impossibility, and any equine was likely to lose patience with the task long before it was through. This particular aroma however, had a certain sweetness to it. salvation in any form could flavour most anything to a desired taste. and this one had surely saved him from himself. the strength of this scent compelled him to take action. it was more than the dull throb he perceived from far off groupings, this alluring smell came from somewhere closer.

with the lack of attention his gloomy mindset shattered and splinterd it's way into his subconcious. to harrow him at a later time. very adverse to sinking himself once more into the painstaking analysis of those bothersome four lines. the ivory statue cocked an auditive accessory atop his pate in the direction his mug indicated. with a flare of coral lined nostrils to accompany the intent alignment of his senses.

as the lids peeled from his ooids no trace of discomfort crinkled their corners. indeed, briefly the stallion turned and stared in blatant rebellion toward the haze clouded sun. Ra tried his bes to provide the light that was his reign, but ignorant of his effrots a drab fog had set itself comfortably in screening of his bountiful light and vital heat.

without notice the command to break free of his icy bonds and march toward the strange femme was heeded by his muscled limbs, and in an almost comical way he trudged forwar as if his eyes were planted upon the soles of his mammoth feet; polished flints raised above the earth and hesitated it deent, assuring that he wasn't about to trust the whole of his weight to a patch of frozen water that would undoubtedly send him crashing into the lithosphere without a second thought.

in this maner he proceeded. his extremities performing their gracefully humorous dance, while his cerbrum maintained it's eevated position, allowing his nose and ears to guide him toward his goal.

as the deflowered flakes in his wake grew more numerous the purely tinted brjo gradually realised the radiating warmth of another life form. he stopped, unure of the distance that rested between them. a frown flickered the concentrated alignment of his countenance. indicesion racked his stance, and with the lengthening of silence he tested the air with a single expression, greeting, question.

Hello?

his voice was a low baritone, concise and quiet in it's delivery, his words or rather word, reverberated with tainted patience as he strained to hear a response.

so many things were his senses good for, and still the faults of a missing one showed plainly through at times such as these. his nose told him many things; that the creature in face of him was equid, that she was a she.. and a fringe of perpiration alerted him to sort of suppressed spirit, and wary indecision. His ears furthered the mentl image, the crunch of snow as the mare shifted weight indicated a hesitation. such an action was distinct, among the many different possible meanings. and with the addition of touch he could locate the kona, to a certain proximity and so the question. now voiced, he reflexively shifted his bulk to rest more upon the hind portion of his frame. sinews relaxed with the revelation that no further movement would be needed for a little while. staring ahead blankly in the general direction from which he detected her presence.

listless and milky in appearance, the blue lamps curiously neglected the required black dot, the polem of his steely optical flowers. there was no pupil there.



[> Subject: ^Thunder, Sweet Storms.^


Author:
Jinrai
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Date Posted: 14:33:55 01/20/03 Mon

^.Bleached cloak writhed with the movement of suprised muscle. The phina broke from her trance, focusing her attention on the charger. She knew of him, his 'condition' might one dare dub it that. The kona shifted, to better face the brujo, lobes intent on his form. Irony...Invisable when visable might we say? Oh never mind. What made her speak to him as herself she may never know. The fact they were both prisoners of themselves? Perhaps. She glanced of into the horizen, some part of her was glad for this distraction. She spoke now, civil, collected, a whispy cotton candy sweet tone...Jin's voice...not Jinrai's.^


"Hello."


^.Short, sweet...vaguely friendly...testing this being's personality.^


[> Subject: [when ravens cry]


Author:
Syndic
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Date Posted: 18:27:52 01/20/03 Mon

relief smoothed the final stubborn tenseness that rested in the muscles of the mascu. languidly he swept his cania toward the femme, pinpointing her postion from the single echoing consonant. he immediately liked her. it was her voice. sweet and gentle. and although he was aware of the unnerving quality of his sightless stare he nevertheless suffered her it for the sake of politeness. with a quiet smile that reached only the length of his labrums he demonstrated the silent thank you for not leaving him hanging. his next words were less hesitant, more rich in the musicality of their tone.

Who are you? tell me something of yourself. you seem an interesting character. my name is Syndic, by the way.

he added this last as an afterthought, rebounding from the silence of the sentence before hand. he wasn't interested in talking of himself. the questions immediately put forth held not a twinge of hesitation, or embarassment at their less than formal nature. he had grown accustomed to asking the blunt, rather obvious questions. how else was he to gather such information? his eyes could not alert him to the moods, the expressions, the depth of the chasms that served for sight, yes, but so much more. for the moment he bit back the 'describe yourself to me.' and 'can i touch you'. as he was unsure still of the nature in hostility for the members of the valley. but so far, this was the most in depth his conversations had been. the last he'd had had ended abruptly with his uttering an accursed four line poem. the effects were usually enough to set strangers to avoiding him. with an inward sigh he turned again to this other. the glow of salvation still illumintaed her presence for him, and even as it faded the smile remained stubborny set upon his features. he felt akin to her in some way. as yet he was unsure how, but the connection was there. and it drew his mind away from somber analysations


[> Subject: ^Simple. I Like It.^


Author:
Jinrai
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Date Posted: 21:38:10 01/20/03 Mon

^.The fae immeadiatly let down her walls. She smiled, partially because she knew he would not know it, yet part of her accepted him immeadiatly. She spoke, again, tone giving a hint to her smile.^


" Jinrai...Jin. Slave of the beloved Frozen Dreams...Syndic? What does it mean?"


^.She spoke with a rich sarcastic tone of her master, but her voice managed to stay as cotton candy laced. She felt no shame telling him what she was. He didn't seem the type to shun her for it.^


[> Subject: [ickily ungood post]


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Syndic
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Date Posted: 16:21:17 01/21/03 Tue

he nodded as her words were whispered from the wind to his awaiting auds, the gesture almost in understanding, almost inacceptance of such a practice, but not really an expression of either. he wasn't positive he approved of slavery. but then again, there was slavery under all of our noses, wasn't there? hiding under the rug. wasn't he a slave? to himself? to the damnable quatrains that haunted his life with their cryptic meaning. a slave to forever rely upon others to aid him, no matter how much he seemed able to maintain himself. he brought himself back to her with the uncerimonious prodding of his conscience, he had been asked a question, dipping his head to cover a sheepish grin he answered, placidly before he moved the conversation back to her.

it means judge, law holder and the like. im not quite sure the relevance. will you tell me of yourself Jin? what do you look like?

he intoned, crania drifting placidly along the wind, bobbing like a cork on water as he tried to ascertain which level and direction his eyes should fall upon. eventually he decided she would understand, and ignored formality to allow his head to rest serenely, if rather uselessly, upon his curved boa, sinew marking his ivory statue as he stared in what appeared a resolute and decided manner toward the horizon and the trees.


[> Subject: ^lol^


Author:
Jinrai
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Date Posted: 18:48:55 01/21/03 Tue

^The pheonix caught herself wondering, what was is like without light? Were there colors in the world without sight? Which ones? She was puzzled with it. She turned the thoughts away. She grew more comfortable at his use of her nick name. The one she rarely trusted to anyone now adays. The concept of describing herself took a bit of musing.^


"Hmmm...Well, I am of the arabian lineage, on the smaller side I suppose. I'm not really sure how to describe myself...where shall I begin? Theat isn't a very accurate painting."^


^ She felt slightly embarresed, to herself...she sounded like a midget.^


[> Subject: [until the end of time] wow. running out of subject ideas


Author:
Syndic
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Date Posted: 14:51:11 01/22/03 Wed

he smiled patiently, as she stumbled through the first few lines, but even the sparse details were of help to him, now the pictures formed in the back of his mind, he offered a few suggestions, his tone mild, light, friendly and eager. after all, she was doing him a favour, no? and he did appreciate it. every day things were more difficult for him than she could possibly imagine. and being able to visualise the beauty of his surroundings was almost completely barred to him; save those pictures his hearing and smell provided him, the presence of life. his imagination took over from there.
how such a small thing could differ him from every other individual stunned him, as a child we learn that common sense should tell us that leaves were green. to him there was no reason the foliage around him shouldn't be bright purple with yellow spots.


well.. what colour are you? the length of your coat, and your mane.. interesting features? your eyes? tell me about your eyes. he stopped himse there. so many questions could be asked, the ones his eyes failed to provide him with answers for, but he considered it rather more intelligent to allow her to keep up with his questioning.


[> Subject: ^Words spoken...thoughts Given^ ((ditto))


Author:
Jinrai
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Date Posted: 21:19:37 01/22/03 Wed

^She found this easier, not until after the words has slipped from her palate did she realize the vague absurdity of it. She chuckled within, she enjoyed speaking with him...wonder flooding her. What his perception of the world must be like...^


"Well, Ivory. Bleached. My coat, ussually thin, but many harsh winters have trained it to become a bit unkempt...a bit...shaggy. My mane, when it isn't tangled up from running into the wind in about the width of my neck...My eyes?? Blue. Sky blue."


^She had to admit...she was proud of the color, its clarity, not like the china eyes of most...Just...blue.^


[> Subject: OOPS!! THIS ONE!!!


Author:
Jinrai
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Date Posted: 21:45:44 01/22/03 Wed

^The phina listened lobes held intently 'pon the kon. She hesitated a moment. Color? At first, the was an absurdity to the question, she put it off. Something told her his mind was her canvas...but he chose the paints...That may seem confusing to some...but she understood it perfectly...many a time she had sculpted those she had never seen...Her parents on occasion...but ussually only to destroy them in her mind.^


"White, bleached...I guess I could say without color...But the opposite of darkness. My pelt is ussually thin haired, decending of desert dwellwers. But it is thicker this days with the cold. Slightly unruly. My mane, tangled from too much running againest the wind. But it is normally lays down the width of my neck... My eyes. Blue. Swirled with the vaguest touch of green..."


^.Color...though the visual might be all Black noise, the imagination has many channels...and most of them are in "color". She awaited more questions eagerly. She wanted him to know her...She had no idea why...but she did.^


[> Subject: can i paint your picture, pretty please?


Author:
Syndic
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Date Posted: 23:38:55 01/25/03 Sat

musing over her words he pieces together the painting in his mind, layering an image with the experience of his years. the only thing he would ever see were the pictures in his mind, and for that reason he kept them all as carefully as he could, some were dog-eared, or bent, or softened from too much use, but all wer in perfect clarity and focus, just as the day they'd first been painted. and now his thoughts worked quickly to fill in the assumed outline as she spoke. that would do. how tall, the litheness of her frame, such things he could tell for himself, with a little help from he, ofcourse. stepping forward hesitantly he put forth the next few words, with a surprising lack of embarassment, he did not feel put on the spot to ask, she had already seemed such a marvelous creature, and he felt drawn in to her. lowering his pate he groped about in the dark a few seconds until his mug hit her whither, and he ran his muzzle along the breadth of the muscled shoulder before he spoke,

do you mind, jin?


ofcourse he meant, in all obviousness, do you mind that i'm so close? he needed, as the blind often do, to touch her, feel for himself the dimensions of her body, so that his painting would be complete in it's accuracy. but he waited, politely, for an answer before diving right in. he had lifted his crania slightly to speak, and onve every few seconds it drifted back to the warmth she radiated, and brushed against her pelt, ascertaining that she still stood in the same place.


[> Subject: Paint Me Pretty


Author:
Jinrai
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Date Posted: 20:11:50 01/26/03 Sun

^She felt his touch, alomost comforting, the slight caress of another prisoner. She was drawn to the charger, and stood still. Serpantine bent, sending plush across to graze his shoulder ever so slightly.^


"Not at all..."


^She understood. She herself would want to "see". She wondered what she looked like in his mind's eye. Jinrau puzzled over it a moment. watching him quietly.^


((SRRY, In hurry...))


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