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Date Posted: Thu, Apr 22 2004, 18:16:49
Author: AC
Subject: Gee, this looks familiar
In reply to: AC 's message, "New Spankfic!" on Sun, Apr 18 2004, 15:41:38

Just as an update, I find it hilarious that she has several other spankfics up. All have lines like this - this particular example is from a 7th Heaven story called Ruthie's Luck at <a rel=nofollow target=_blank href="http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1826479:">http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1826479:</a>

WHACK!!

"Ouch!!"

The boy’s plump bottom trembled under his briefs, and Peter resisted the urge to rub it. A red stripe appeared a second later, crossing it from cheek to cheek. Eric then raised the belt once again, and he striped a similar line on his youngest daughter’s derriere. Ruthie’s panties were still halfway down, and the belt hit right on the upper portions of her bottom, where the skin was unprotected. The child screamt too, but Eric was unmoved.

SPANK!! WHACK!! WHIP!! SMACK!!

He went on and on, alternating kids and cheeks. Peter’s left, Ruthie’s right; Peter’s both, Ruthie’s left. He was furious. He did not speak, though, and let the belt to all of the talking.

WHACK!! WHIP!! SMACK!! WHACK!! WHIP!! SMACK!! WHACK!! WHIP!! SMACK!!

They rained down again and again, like the finger of God, making the two children cry and beg for a mercy that would never come.

WHACK!! WHACK!! WHIP!! SMACK!! WHACK!! WHIP!! SMACK!! WHACK!! WHIP!! SMACK!!

Eric stopped at last, but only to remove the kids’ undergarments, thus exposing their bare backsides. Peter’s too-tight briefs were pulled down to mid-thigh, revealing a bottom red all over and full of welts that must have been really painful; the boy was sobbing and holding to the bed for dear life. Ruthie’s panties rested at her knees, and buttocks were also striped for good; the little child was sobbing uncontrollably into her pillow, but thought better of massaging her butt even with a hand.

The belting resumed.

WHACK!! WHACK!! WHACK!! WHIP!! SMACK!! WHACK!! WHIP!! SMACK!! WHACK!! WHIP!! SMACK!! WHACK!! WHIP!! SMACK!! WHACK!! WHIP!! SMACK!! WHACK!! WHIP!! SMACK!!

The Reverend’s anger smacked down on the kids’ bottoms, that grew redder and redder, and finally reached purple tones, under the leather’s implacable wrath.

SMACK!! WHACK!! WHIP!! SMACK!! SMACK!! WHACK!! WHIP!! SMACK!! WHACK!!

Eric Camden never counted the whacks: whenever the spankee’s bottom looked like it could take no more without bleeding, he delivered five more hearty wallops and he was done. This time he spanked both children way past that point, and when he was through – and stormed out of the room, still without speaking – he left four bruised buttocks, not to mention the sorriest children he had ever seen in his life. There was no time for talking, now. There would be time for that, and to make sure they had understood just why he had done that.

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Again, we have common elements like the use of "WHACK!! WHACK!! WHACK!!". I mean, what the hell is that supposed to be? It's not dialogue, nor is it description. It's like when people type "RING!! RING!!" to indicate that the phone is ringing. Completely lacking in imagination and creativity. And there's the whole bare-butt spanking thing and as the caressing of the naked hineys, as well as long, loving descriptions of said hineys and how they react to the spanking.

I'd like to see PU argue that these stories aren't sexual. Especially Awakening (<a rel=nofollow target=_blank href="http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1826476),">http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1826476),</a> which has blatant, in-yer-face mother/daughter incest. But at least this one is honest about it and not in denial.

AC

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