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Date Posted: Mon, Nov 17 2003, 22:59:59
Author: Aubrey
Subject: One of those stories that makes you go 'gee that was...stupid'

It's so cheesy, it really is. I think it may be a troll from the two authors notes of 'did I spell that right' but if so, they really aren't funny. BTW it's the only story they have and their profile is blank, so either they created in a hurry to throw up their fic, or jus made the account for the troll fic.

Since the whore is always down, I'll post it here, it's short.

<i>Candy

{KagomePov} I watch shippo dig threw my bag

I wonder what he looking for

he ask me where is it

where what the candy

oh that

it’s right here

I handed him the candy

thanks he said and

took the candy and sat in my lap

he started to nibble on some chocolate

then I took my candy back

he started to cry

{No pov}

Then Inuyasha came

“stop your whinnying” the hanyou yelled

{tell me if I spelled that right ok ^-^}

“I’m not whinnying you baka” shippo said between sniffs

{sango and Miruku did I spelled that right, any way they are just watching ok}

“WHAT did you call?” Inuyasha yelled while jumping down

“you heard me you “baka” shippo said stand up in kagome lap. TO BE CONT.</i>

Treating this like the troll fic I hope it is, I posted this review:
<i>It's a parody. I am telling myself that whether it is or isn't, otherwise it's kind of distrubing to know teens make it through that many years of school and learn nothing about proper spelling (Which isn't a great problem in the case of fan fiction, as Word fixes misspellings by default), capitalization and grammer.

I'm sure you're very bright, but simply decided to do a parody for what ever reason. I can understand the urge, but parodies cease being funny when they aren't made explicitly obvious. Then they simply look like another bad fic, thus defeating their purpose. It's such a waste of talent to throw out something you spent no effort on, all for a joke that wasn't particularly funny. Put that talent to good use and write something mindblowing. It'll get more reviews and leave a lasting impression.

I hope you're not insulted by this, because I seriously believe this is a parody. If it's not, well hopefully it'll make an impression on you that your readers tend to perceive it as false.</i>

If for some reason someone wants the addy, it's here: <a rel=nofollow target=_blank href="http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1603441">http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1603441</a>

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