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Date Posted: Tue, Apr 13 2004, 0:07:34
Author: Ayezur
Subject: Re: *bashes head against boiler*
In reply to: Heart-Stricken 's message, "Re: *bashes head against boiler*" on Mon, Apr 12 2004, 23:50:11

*begins pacing*

First, his speech patterns are so off it isn't even funny. This is a common enough mistake; his dialogue is really hard ot write accuratly. But "pumpkin"? Aiyaa. Even "piggy" is preferable if the author has some osrt of hang-up about the word bitch...

Also, he's acting like a moron.

And why is he speaking in italics?

And why is he not just raping and killing her? Why the elaborate lead-in? He's not as down-to-buisness as, say, Jason, but he's fairly straightforward. And he LOVES his boiler room. He'd do his buisness there.

...did I mention he's acting like a moron? -_-

And why is he doing shit to her while she's ASLEEP/unaware of what he's doing? He feeds off fear, off people's reactions.

I did mention he's acting way to stupid to be Freddy, yes?

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