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Date Posted: Thu, Nov 13 2003, 17:51:37
Author: Asp
Subject: Troll Toll: "The Little Mermaid," from the bowels of the abyss...I mean, Greyarchive.

<a rel=nofollow target=_blank href="http://greyarchive.greyarchive.org/Tyval31.html">Oh, dear.</a>

Who on earth gets off from writing Disney porn? I mean, <i>what</i> is the attraction?

Anyway, this fic has all the Greyarchive trademarks -- impossible situations, bad grammar and eye-gourgingly bad sex.

Take, for example, this part:

<i>her hand touched a rock that moved and
revieled a small undamaged chamber that held a small chest inside. There
was no water in this little alcove making Arista curious as to what
could be so valuable for Ariel to hide it where it wouldn't get wet.


" Huh? I wonder what's in here?," Arista said," It must have been
important."


Arista swam into the small chamber, her body half out of the water. The
air was stale and musty, but mermaids could spend short periods of time
out of water. Arista opened the chest. There were several things that
Ariel called books inside as well as restraints for hands and what the
human's called ankles. Arista didn't know what whips were, but there was
a cat, a flogger, a riding crop, and a tawse inside as well.
</i>

[a few sentances snipped.]

<i>
Since the Merfolk had no written
language she of course couldn't read, but all the books in the chest had
lots of pictures. One or 2 were nothing but pictures. The pictures all
showed nude women in various poses, tied up and whipped, or fucked in
bondage.


The variety of whips and restraining devices were many. Like Ariel,
Arista found herself growing strangely aroused as the pictures showed
men whipping women, women whipping women, men fucking women, and women
having sex with women in odd ways.


" Wow! I don't know what they are doing, but it sure looks like fun,"
Arista breathed. </i>

At this point, my train of thought is stuck on "Oh, my *God*...oh, my *God*, Oh, my *God*..."

<i>" Father," Arista called out.


" Daddy, what are you doing?," Ariel asked," It's over."


" Silence!," Triton shouted," You have broken my laws Ariel, and you as
well Arista! I am the law! No one, not even my own daughters can
willfully break my laws and escape punishment!"


" Father!," Ariel and Arista cried out together.


" You! Ursela! You have attempted to murder my daughters and usurp me as
ruler of the ocean! Your punishmet is first! You will remain trapped in
that pleasing body and voice and become truly Felicia. Do not think that
that is a reward! For by my command you will henceforth be a bi-sexual
pain slut and will serve as Prince Eric commands! Your magic is forever
gone! Ariel! Arista! You are both exiled from the sea and will remain as
humans," Triton boomed," Since you have sisterly love it is by my decree
that you will both also be bi-sexual pain sluts even to the point of
incest. Prince Eric! You will now be a sadistic master who will search
the world for still more Princesses to torture and rape. You will sire
only daughters and take them as well. I have spoken!" </i>

This extremely plausible and in-character scenario is followed with:

<i> the windows were too small for anything human
to escape. Felicia tried, but her magic was truly gone, her memory's of
being Ursela were fading to be replaced by those of a submissive little
slave. A warm bath was prepared for her. Felicia relaxed in the tub, her
hands straying to nipples that were now permanantly hard and erect, and
to her tight lightly brown furred pussy which was always going to be wet
and excited.


Ariel and Arista were to share the other room. No sooner had the door
closed behind them when the 2 sisters flew into each others arms.


" Oh Ariel," Arista moaned.


" Arista," Ariel said.


The 2 sisters kissed deeply, tongue's seeking each other hungrily. Ariel
was the aggressor as she pushed her squeeling sister back onto the bed.
Their mouths greedily sought each other as their hands stroked each
other. Ariel broke the kiss and lowered her mouth to her sister's ripe
tits. There were slight bruises that were already fading as Ariel kissed
around her sisters nipples, then took each one in her mouth and sucked.


" Mmmmmmm," Arista moaned.


" Do they hurt?," Ariel asked.


" To be honest I would love more pain," Arista smiled," A lot more pain.
I saw those books of those."


" Father may think he's punishing us, but these body's are far more
sensative, more sexually arousing," Ariel said," I had prayed that Eric
would be a sadist. He was instead kind and gentle. Now he's exactly the
way I want him. I want to be kept naked and in chains, always covered in
whip marks, take cocks in all my holes and suck sweet pussy." </i>

And then....

<i>" Ooooooo, a whip," Felicia moaned," I need a whip! Ooooooooo! Please,
someone, anyone come in and lash me! Ohhhhhhh, a whip, a cock, a pussy,
anything."


Ariel and Arista were better off as they were now in a 69 position and
sucking each others pussys. They came in each others mouths and lapped
up each others tasty juice. Ariel's pretty pink asshole was too inviting
as Arista pointd her tongue and stabbed into Ariel's asshole.


" Ahhhhh! That's soooo hot," Ariel moaned as her sister started rimming
her.</i>

I'm just soooo traumatised. Soooo suicidal. Soooo on the verge of dementia.

Anyway, this is the heart-rending ending:

<i>" Ummmmmm, I love the taste of asshole," Arista whispered.


" So do I," Ariel smiled.


" Maybe we'll try scat and piss games too," Arista grinned.


" Sounds delicious and naughty," Ariel grinned.


The sister kissed until they fell sleep in each others arms. Exhausted,
Felicia finally fell asleep as well. </i>

Awww. Scatting in to the sunset. How darling!

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