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Date Posted: Thu, Nov 13 2003, 18:06:19
Author: LbN
Subject: On the topic of X-Files and baby fics
In reply to: JAL 's message, "Troll Toll: Cheap & Easy GAFF . . . X-Files" on Thu, Nov 13 2003, 17:18:54

Krycek and Scully have the baby in this one - oooh swoon. Fic with usual mistakes like there for their, bad plot and everybody is OOC

First chapter

*****In The Past 1990

Dana Scully and Alex Kreycek were sitting in the nursery with there new born baby boy, Alexander. Dana had just given birth to Alex's baby. Little did they know a Cigarette smoking man sat in a small room watching them on a video screen. They put baby Alex in his crib kissed him good night then proceeded to go into the next room to sleep.

<i> Gah, this story is so full of cheap cliches and banalities it deserves a friggin award - and that for the first few lines alone</i>

It was around 3:00 in the morning when Alex and Dana woke up to a noise in the baby's nursery. Alex ran down the hall and into the baby's nursery pushing the door open with a bang. But it was too late, baby Alex was gone.

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<i>Newborn baby Alex ran out on this GAFF? Clever little thing I'd say </i>

Dana came into the room seconds later only to realize her baby was nowhere in sight. She broke down into his arms and cried wetting his t-shirt.

<i> Even if he was nowhere in sight *snerk* </i>

"How could this happen?" She cried through her tears.

"I,. Dammit!" He turned around to face Dana and cupped her face in his hands. "Dana I'm so sorry I had no clue, I didn't think he'd take him away from us."

"What the hell are you talking about?"

"I've been working with some bad people Dana, real bad, they kill people and I think they took our baby from us."

<i> Ah, the kogic, the logic! I'da never thought of that. Genious move to twist a plot </i>

She pulled away from him wiping her tears away and glaring at him. "I want my baby back and I want him now! Get him back! Why would they want him?" She yelled with tears still slipping from her eyes.

<i>Whiny Scully - how endearing</i>

"They probably killed him! I'm sorry I had no clue this was going to happen. As much as I want him back if they want someone dead they'll have it done."

Dana grabbed her suitcase from the closet and began throwing stuff into it. "I will find him if it's the last thing I do!"

"Where are you going? You can't expect to find him when they've got him. Dana please don't go! I love you" "Then why did you do this to me?" She turned around and walked straight out the door, out of his life forever. She grabbed her cell phone and dialed her parent's number. It rang three times until her father answered "Hello?" He asked in a groggy voice.

"Hi daddy, it's me Dana I'm coming over"

************ Hope you liked this chapter. What will happen next? Please Review!! Comments?

<i> The comments I'd leave would probably burst the pink lenses you're wearing while writing this crap.</i>

For the thing in loco - more chapters are promised.

<a rel=nofollow target=_blank href="http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1577277">Finding the Past</a>

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