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Date Posted: Thu, Nov 13 2003, 21:16:41
Author: Heywood
Subject: Found the link. "“Something is missing here, my nasty girl.”
In reply to: Heywood 's message, "Ah, the good old sex-changing roofies" on Thu, Nov 13 2003, 20:36:28

Quoted from the post (somewhere around the beginning of September):


<A rel=nofollow target=_blank HREF="http://adultff.nexcess.net/aff/story.php?no=6071">http://adultff.nexcess.net/aff/story.php?no=6071</A>
I feel dirty, just copying and pasting that link.

<I>“Tonight, you’ll have me, Naraku, inside your body” He said as he put another drop on his mouth.
Inuyasha’s eyes went wide and started to hyperventilate.
“And I’ll be a daddy three times.” Added Naraku, as his hands slid inside the kimono and rested on his nipples. “Something is missing here, my nasty girl.”</I>

One, rapefic. Two, MPREG. Three, gender confusion. Four, nasty dialogue (throughout the entire fic). Blech. My stomach is congealing.

<I>“still fighting my bitch?”</I>
This seriously sounds like where they put the two roosters together in the pit... "You're MY bitch now!"
That, and I felt the urge to quote Ripley. "Get away from her, you BITCH!" ^_^

So Naraku's slipping Inuyasha a roofie. Literally, that's the premise of the fic. That'll teach Inuyasha to leave his drink unattended...

Remember there was a discussion about rapefic a few threads back? This fic is one of the variety where it begins as a violation (and the fic certainly makes it felt), and ends up as one of the multiple-orgasm, "yes! i love you" variety.
<I>He arched his back, welcoming the action.</I> [snips out the rest of the action from the scene that's described like a day in a dairy farm]

So, after they give each other blowjobs, Naraku decides that making Inuyasha OD on the roofies will make him female. Ohhh, I shouldn't have had so much to drink, I'm so nauseated that it's not even funny. Remember those fics where the authors practically changed the character's gender? This one actually does it...
<I>He felt how his penis melted inside his body slowly</I>
<I> Inuyasha felt her captor’s hands squeezing her new engorged breasts.</I>
<I>his hand traveled down, to her new womanhood.</I>

For the next three pages, Inuyasha's dialoge runs like a copy-paste job of <I>“mmmmmmmasssster… mmmmmmmore…”</I>. And the fun begins. The fic shows signs of being a Lactation!Inuyasha fic. I'm hoping it's never brought up again.
<I>He kissed it again and trapped the nipple in his mouth. He sucked firmly. Inuyasha squeezed his breast. “I can’t… I can’t… I don’t have milk…” Naraku sank his teeth in her flesh and sucked blood, and his bitch moaned in pain and pleasure.</I>

And then Naraku goes for the home run.
<I>SOOO TIGHT. Inuyasha hugged his waits with her legs…</I>

Naraku rams it in, and Virgin!Inuyasha.... oh dear god... Lactation!Inuyasha resurfaces in a scene that's... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god... oh dear god...<BR>

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