Re: What? This isn't a Mary Sue? -- Godawful Fan Fiction

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Date Posted: Tue, Nov 11 2003, 1:17:12
Author: Eli-kun
Subject: Re: What? This isn't a Mary Sue?
In reply to: Black Pearl 's message, "What? This isn't a Mary Sue?" on Mon, Nov 10 2003, 16:26:03

Fanfiction.net likes to change ellipses into periods.

***She vaguely wondered if she wore mascara, and debated that if it were present it would melt away or not (While her eyelashes were thick and curly, they were a light blonde that demanded to be clad in rich, darker shades of brown or black so that they were noticeable- luckily her eyebrows didn't need the same attention and were dark of their own accord).***

Descriptions and concerns over makeup usually sets off my Mary Sue alarm.

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