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Date Posted: 13:23:56 02/11/03 Tue
Author: VJ Hashiba
Subject: You'd be sensitive too if your mother wrote this. (Spoiler enclosed)
In reply to: Duncan 's message, "Wow, you're sensitive." on 14:00:08 02/08/03 Sat

�Men,� sighed Mai. �Get a girl watching, and they go all �I�m invincible.�� Her Harpy Lady nodded her agreement.

As Duncan leapt at VJ, VJ realized how close they were to a wall. �Hmm... maybe...� When Duncan was an inch away, VJ took a step to the left. Duncan banged his head against it. He fell to the ground, dazed.

�Pretty girl birds... pretty girl birds...� @_@

�How is Mother gonna get you a girlfriend?� VJ muttered, poking Duncan with the tip of his sword.

�Is that it, VJ?!� yelled Mai.

�I hope not. If it is, then this was a waste of time.� As the two spoke, Duncan was recovering.

�Well what would you be doing with the time?�

�Being with you.� Duncan sat up and shook his head a few times. He then leapt at VJ again who calmly raised back his fist and hit Duncan in the face.

�Owie...�

�Oh, were you back there? Sorry. Mai why didn�t you warn me?�

�Was I supposed to?�

�No.�

�You�re not supposed to have help,� said Duncan, rubbing his face.

�I don�t.� VJ winked up at Mai, who blushed slightly. Duncan groaned and rolled his eyes. �Now, back to business. Burning attack!�

Your move, kid.

The promised spoiler.

�Please tell me it�s okay for me to go. I won�t go unless you say I can.�

VJ stared into those eyes he loved so much, the only thing that hadn�t paled in her face. He could see the pain in them. He sighed.

�Okay, Mai.� Mai smiled faintly.

�Thank you VJ. Could you sing our song for me? Please?�

�Okay.� VJ took a deep breath. Their song was from Earth�s 70s, but VJ loved it all the same. �Sometimes when we touch, the honesty�s too much... and I have to close my eyes and hide...� Mai joined in. �I wanna hold you till I die, till we both break down and cry... I wanna hold you till the fear in me subsides...�

�Kiss me, VJ.� VJ bent his head and kissed her, long and hard. �I... love... you... V...J....� Mai�s head fell back and her eyes closed. A tear ran down her cheek.

�I love you too, Mai. Good bye, my beloved Duelist Queen, my beautiful mate.� VJ sat down on the ground with Mai�s body in his arms and started crying.

Ya see? When you read the whole thing it�ll be worse.

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Replies:

:-)Whoa. -- Duncan, 19:49:30 02/11/03 Tue
- Mother's not gonna like this. -- VJ Hashiba, 09:15:27 02/13/03 Thu
  - :~(The end has come. I wanted to continue... -- Duncan, 15:40:02 02/18/03 Tue
    - [Info]By the way: Schlemiel = "trouble maker" :: Schlemezzel = "victim." (NT) -- Duncan, 09:24:17 02/20/03 Thu
    - Good job, Duncan. Sure, I'll train ya. (NT) -- VJ Hashiba, 21:00:57 02/21/03 Fri
      - You shall face me now. -- Unknown Assailant, 00:59:17 02/24/03 Mon
        >:)Death Giver? -- Iggy!, 16:53:29 02/24/03 Mon
        You have 37 other guesses. -- Unknown Assailant, 18:00:45 02/24/03 Mon
        >:)So, I'm finally forced to face J.T. Magnus. 'Bout time. -- Iggy!, 19:37:06 02/24/03 Mon
        I cannot confirm or deny any of the names you've guessed so far. -- Unknown Assailant, 23:38:59 02/24/03 Mon
        But I can. It ain't me. It's against my code of honor to hide my identity in combat. (NT) -- J. T., 17:12:47 02/25/03 Tue
        I'll say who I am in the end, Just having a little fun. (NT) -- Unknown Assailant, 17:36:04 02/25/03 Tue
        You want to know what one of the best parts of being admin is? I can check the IPs of people who post and compare them to other posts. ^_^ Interesting, huh, "Unknown" who is known? ^_^ (NT) -- J. T. Magnus, Forum Admin, 19:06:14 02/25/03 Tue
        I'd like to know, considering it certainly isn't me. But my curiosity can hold off until this is finished... (NT) -- Star S., 22:51:35 02/25/03 Tue