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Date Posted: 08:13:35 09/04/10 Sat
Author: Debi
Subject: I will see what happens with this...
In reply to: Fi 's message, "Hmmm" on 10:43:29 09/03/10 Fri

>If she doesn't drink much normally, then the alcohol
>might have an expected effect on her, particularly the
>disinhibition. Problem is, I don't see Valerie as
>particularly inhibited, at least when it comes to
>telling people what she thinks! Or maybe there is
>something she is inhibited about, something she holds
>back. Her feelings for Daniel? The disappointments in
>her life?

I'm seeing this scene taking place further down the road, in the next story, so, unless something made her think she was losing Daniel again, I don't know if that would come up as an excuse to get blasted and mean. It's a possibility, though.

>The disappointments in her life? The true extent of
>her anger at her ex?
>
>Anyway, what I would do is write out her speech,
>forget for the moment where and when she's making it.
>Let her speak her words and then it may become clearer.

There aren't any clear words yet. I just see her, without even an idea of anyone around. I feel like a crime-scene psychic... ugh.

Thank you Fi, for your excellent suggestions.

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