Date Posted:10:43:29 09/03/10 Fri Author: Fi Subject: Hmmm In reply to:
Debi
's message, "Scene attack!!!" on 20:16:15 09/01/10 Wed
If she doesn't drink much normally, then the alcohol might have an expected effect on her, particularly the disinhibition. Problem is, I don't see Valerie as particularly inhibited, at least when it comes to telling people what she thinks! Or maybe there is something she is inhibited about, something she holds back. Her feelings for Daniel? The disappointments in her life?
The disappointments in her life? The true extent of her anger at her ex?
Anyway, what I would do is write out her speech, forget for the moment where and when she's making it. Let her speak her words and then it may become clearer.
>If she doesn't drink much normally, then the alcohol
>might have an expected effect on her, particularly the
>disinhibition. Problem is, I don't see Valerie as
>particularly inhibited, at least when it comes to
>telling people what she thinks! Or maybe there is
>something she is inhibited about, something she holds
>back. Her feelings for Daniel? The disappointments in
>her life?
I'm seeing this scene taking place further down the road, in the next story, so, unless something made her think she was losing Daniel again, I don't know if that would come up as an excuse to get blasted and mean. It's a possibility, though.
>The disappointments in her life? The true extent of
>her anger at her ex?
>
>Anyway, what I would do is write out her speech,
>forget for the moment where and when she's making it.
>Let her speak her words and then it may become clearer.
There aren't any clear words yet. I just see her, without even an idea of anyone around. I feel like a crime-scene psychic... ugh.
