Date Posted:01:10:04 05/19/10 Wed Author: Promise Subject: Re: Word count: 1,323. Step this way >>> In reply to:
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's message, "Word count: 1,323. Step this way >>>" on 16:36:53 05/12/10 Wed
Aside from a bit of polishing and correcting some punctuation here and there....
Damn good bit of writing. Your dialogue is so natural! Can you tell I'm green w/ envy? ;0)