And they're all super suggestions and things I hadn't noticed. For example, I didn't realize I'd used both Jimi and Hendrix. And mucho thanks for catching the cream thing. Dunno where that came from, but it's changed to milk now.
I'm tickled pink that the fact Katie's always on the lookout for the next happening thing resonated with you! I'd been a little apprehensive I wouldn't be able to get such unspoken parts of her personality in without a lot of superfluous words. You so totally made my day, Fi! Now I hope I can get across the point that she's finally found that elusive thing she's searched for in the same manner. We shall see!
Thank you so much for going over this for me. I appreciate and value your sharp eye and spot-on perceptions!
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