Date Posted:12:39:13 02/10/10 Wed Author: Esther Subject: Well okay. I think I can do something along those lines >>> In reply to:
susiej
's message, "Yep, I had missed that post. Clears a few things up. >>>" on 15:59:46 02/07/10 Sun
This is a part of the story that consists of a whole big bunch of dialogue. I find all this talk a bit worrisome, and then the issue of having a break in what is going on is even more worrisome because I have a feeling what I put in as a break isn’t interpreted as such. Cadmus taking her back to the mall, and…well…this was to be a bit of a break as well. Just Darian and Heather talking, maybe revealing some things, maybe foreshadowing what’s to come. Obviously, it wasn’t quite right. *G*
But yeah, I hear you. You’re definitely correct in that there should be something. And now that I have an idea of what needs to be there, I should be able to add something in! Thank You!