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Subject: Modern Day Cowboys

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Amy Smith

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Date Posted: 13:23:40 04/07/04 Wed
In reply to: Seth Super 's message, "TV show proposal" on 11:14:29 04/07/04 Wed

I understand that you are proposing a show that portrays the fun that a group of friends can have as they share thier lives. This is a surprising proposal because I have not seen anything with the same type of characters. The fact that there seems to be a lot of alcohol involved caught my attention. I wasn't quite sure if they all lived in the same area. Maybe if you stated where they lived it would be more helpful. I liked the idea of the comedy between this group of people. When I was reading the basic plot, I was a little confused on following the description of characters. I think that your proposal could flow a little better and maybe you could check for spelling and gramatic errors that your computer did not catch. I do think that this is a good story line and I would be interested in seeing the first episode.

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Re: TV show proposal	Adan Rodriguez	19:54:51 04/08/04 Thu