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Subject: Re: TV show proposal


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Doug Kempf
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Date Posted: 13:33:45 04/09/04 Fri
In reply to: Seth Super 's message, "TV show proposal" on 11:14:29 04/07/04 Wed

(1) The key of the proposal is the life of a group of guys who rodeo on the weekend. It is a suprising proposal becuase I do not believe there are any shows on TV like this one. Cowboys are a forgotten aspect of our lives today.

(2) The details that stuck out the most with me were that they like partying and having a lot of fun. They have mostly normal lives except on the weekend when the rodeo and paint the town red.

(3) I am a country boy so I like the whole concept of the proposal. It seems to depict the real-life ventures of the cowboy who rodeos.

(4) I noticed one spelling error (ridding) instead of riding. A few of the guys names were not capitalized. There were a few punctuation errors, mostly commas. Some of the sentences need restructured to make better sense. The 2nd, 3rd, and 4th sentence of the 2nd paragraph are an example.Maybe "Waylon is a 21-year-old ...." is better. "He is quite tall ......brown hair, kin of lanky and enjoys drinking his alchohol." would be better.

I would watch it.

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