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Subject: process leter


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Seth Super
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Date Posted: 10:28:47 04/29/04 Thu
In reply to: Seth Super 's message, "revised summary" on 10:19:01 04/29/04 Thu

I tried to make this summary better by not using he as much, giving it more detail making it longer (the responses from others said it was to short), and by findind and fixing all the gramar errorrs i could. I still didn't make it 250 word, but then again its a summary and the original wasn't a huge article, so i didn't feel comfertable trying to make it 250 words. It seems to me that would defeate the purpose of a summary.

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Re: revised summaryDavid Kim20:04:57 04/29/04 Thu


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