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Subject: Re: revised summary


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David Kim
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Date Posted: 20:04:57 04/29/04 Thu
In reply to: Seth Super 's message, "revised summary" on 10:19:01 04/29/04 Thu

You did a good job on stating the author and the title of the source. Also, good job on stating what the summary is about in the early sentences. I would consider revising sentences that includes words and phrases like "say's" and "he talks about." You did a nice job on including key information and such. The sentence fluency needs work because it sounds strange when you are reading, but other then that the summary looks good.

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