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Subject: Re: Summary


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David Kim
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Date Posted: 17:59:01 04/29/04 Thu
In reply to: brenda bloodsworth 's message, "Summary" on 17:08:54 04/28/04 Wed

You should try to include the title and the author of the source in the first sentence. You stated the topic in the early sentences so that is a good job on your part. The summary can be longer also, it seemed a bit too short. So you should include more information because the summary lacks that. In addition, it does not seem to me that you are objective to the topic. I feel you are swayed in one side of the argument. And in terms of punctuation, it seems like you used too many unnecessary commas.

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