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Subject: Episode 2x04: Mindwipe pt1


Author:
EvilWillowFan
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Date Posted: 15:54:12 09/08/03 Mon

WILLPOWER PART 2x04: MINDWIPE
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==============================WHERE WE LEFT OFF=====================================
KENNEDY
Willow are you alright?

Willow turns around to face them. Her eyes are blood-red and she has a cold expression.

WILLOW *smiles*
Better than ever
=====================================================================================

The whole gang is looking at Willow with a mix of fear and confusion. It is clear that something is wrong,

but what exactly... they do not know.

XANDER
Will..... what's wrong with your eyes?

WILLOW *cold*
Nothing

DAWN
Willow, your eyes are like... completely red.... That can't be good.

WILLOW *smiles*
Oh, but it *is* good.

Xander realizes that something is wrong. He steps forward with an angry expression.

XANDER
What are you and what did you do with Willow?

WILLOW
Are you suggesting I'm *not* Willow?

KENNEDY
*Are* you?

We can see from the expression on her face that she is afraid of the answer.

WILLOW
I guess that all depends on how you look at it.

The entire gang draws their weapons as if instructed.

WILLOW *laugs*
What? You're gonna kill your precious friend? We think not.

The gang keeps pointing their weapons at Willow but none of them attack.

WILLOW *smiles*
See? We'll be on our way now.... see you soon.

Willow uses her ability to travel airborne and disappears into thin air, leaving the rest of the gang dumbfounded.

DAWN *sad*
This cannot be good

Xander gives Dawn a look.

DAWN *sad smile*
But I guess that's obvious

ANDREW *scared*
Did she just say "see you soon"? I didn't like the sound of that

KENNEDY
What could do this to her?

ANDREW *scared*
facing Darth Rosenberg once, was enough....

KENNEDY
She's one of the most powerful witches in the world.

ANDREW
...more than enough.

GILES *shouts*
Alright, shut up, both of you.

Everyone stops talking and stares at Giles, surprised by his sudden outburst.

GILES *calm*
Sorry.... we need to find out what happened. This isn't helping.

XANDER
She kept referring to herself as We. "We think not" and "We'll see you soon"

GILES *remembers*
Yes, you're right. That's important

DAWN
So you're saying something took control of Willow? We kinda got that

GILES
Not just that. It also means that Willow is still in there somewhere

ANDREW
Yes, *or* whatever took control over her said that to make sure we wouldn't kill it..... and what
about the possibility that Willow just went crazy again and just said that to throw us off.

KENNEDY *angry*
*That* is *not* a possibility!

ANDREW
And how do *you* know that? I was in the line of fire the last time, you weren't! If you had been
there.....

XANDER
Guys, this isn't helping. Let's get out of here and do some research.

GILES
Let's head for the Magic Box

They all walk down the Bluff, headed for the Magic Box. Kennedy, Dawn and Andrew walk almost twenty feet ahead of

Xander and Giles.

XANDER *to Giles*
Do *you* think Willow's gone crazy?

GILES *resolute*
No. There is something inside her.... something evil.

XANDER *smiles*
Thanks

@@@next scene@@@

We suddenly find ourselves inside an ancient temple. Everything around us is white. There is a big empty space

in the center of the temple where Willow is busy kissing with someone whose face we can't see. They are lying on

the floor wearing white robes. There are roseleaves on the floor where they are layed down.

Willow withdraws from the other persons lips.

WILLOW
I missed you so much

The camera turns around and we see that the other person is Tara.

TARA
Don't worry sweetie. I'm here.

They start kissing again. Moments later, the camera shows the temple from the outside. There is a huge fence around

it, the sky is dark and everything around the temple looks dead or dying.

The camera zooms out....... and further out........ and further out, until we zoom out of Willow's head.

her eyes are still red and she smiles wickedly.

=========================================
cast:
-----------------------------------
regulars:
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Alyson Hannigan as Willow / Radament
Michelle Trachtenberg as Dawn
Iyari Limon as Kennedy
Tom Lenk as Andrew
Katie Holmes as Kate
Anthony Stewart Head as Giles
and
Nicholas Brendon as Xander

guest stars:
------------
Amber Benson as Tara

==========================================

Giles, Xander, Kennedy, Dawn and Andrew arrive at the Magic Box.

ANDREW
Deja vu.

XANDER
Huh?

ANDREW
You know, us running from Willow and coming here

DAWN *to Giles*
What do we do now?

GILES
Research.... as usual. Look for entities that can take posession of a person and are recognisible
by their red eyes.

DAWN
On it.

Dawn and Andrew walk over to the booksheft and search for useful books.

XANDER
Nobody probably wants to hear this...... but what do we do if Willow comes here to kill us? I
mean, if something took control of her body, killing everyone she knows is a logical first step
to gain more control over her.

KENNEDY
You're right... I didn't wanna hear that.

GILES
I'm afraid we can't do anything about that. She can find us anywhere we go. But in here, we'll be
protected by the anti-violence spell.... I hope.

ANDREW
You hope??

GILES
Well, Willow is not a demon, but maybe the thing that controls her *is*.

DAWN
Suppose it works in her, can she disspell it?

GILES
Yes. I'm afraid so. But I think she needs to recharge her powers. It's the only real reason I can
think of for her not killing us on the Bluff. It gives us time we need to find out how to defeat
the thing that controls Willow... preferably without killing Willow.

KENNEDY *fake smile*
I'm sorry.... I don't think I heard you right.... Did you say, preferably?

GILES
Yes I did.

KENNEDY
So you say you'd kill Willow to defeat this thing?

GILES
Yes, Willow and I talked about a situation like this and.... she made me promise to stop her
from killing anyone..... at all costs.

KENNEDY
No you won't. I'll stop you.

GILES
Willow and I discussed it and we agreed on this

KENNEDY
That was just talk. You're *not* killing her...... none of you. Besides, that was about if she went
evil again... not if she was posessed.

XANDER
Let's argue about this later and try to find a cure or something. I'll get some help.

DAWN
I think I get what kind of 'help' you had in mind. Are you sure this is a good idea?

XANDER
She has a lot of experience with magic and demons and such. She may have valuable information.

DAWN
And she may not.

XANDER
Then at least we tried

Giles nods at Xander to go.

@@@next scene@@@

Xander arrives at Kate's house. She rings the doorbel and Kate opens the door.

KATE *smiles*
Hey Xander, come in

Xander enters the house but does not walk further than the hallway.

KATE *smiles*
I didn't expect to see you here tonight. I figured Willow gave you a permanent restraining
order for my house.

Xander looks at Kate with a sad stare. The smile on Kate's face instantly disappears.

KATE *serious*
What's wrong?

XANDER
Willow.... she's.... something took control of her.

KATE *laughing*
You're kidding.... Willow? You'll have to do better than that Xander.

Kate looks at Xander who doesn't smile or laugh.

KATE *stops laughing*
You're *not* kidding

XANDER
No I'm not. We could use your help.

KATE *hesitant*
I don't know Xander. You know, it's not like I don't want to help.... but none of your friends
particularly like me. I don't think it's.....

XANDER
They need time. Can you really blame them?

Kate thinks it over for a few seconds.

KATE
Alright, but if Willow comes to kill us, there is nothing *I* can do about it.

XANDER
We all do what we can. No one expects more of you.

Xander and Kate leave Kate's place.

@@@next scene@@@

Kate and Xander reach the Magic Box. Everyone looks up from their books as they enter. Giles is behind the counter,

Andrew and Dawn are sitting at the table and Kennedy is sitting on the stairs.

DAWN *to Xander*
So she came..... she know anything useful?

KATE
I'm right here, you know

Xander gives Dawn a pleading look. Dawn sighs and decides to drop the resentment for the moment.

DAWN
Do you know anything that could help us? Do you know what happened?

KATE
Xander told me what he saw and it doesn't ring a bell.....

KENNEDY
Well, that's useful.

KATE
....but Xander told me there was someone burning on the floor.

DAWN
Yes... so? He burned really fast.

KATE
Well... maybe that was it's previous host.... and the old host burned when the host switched bodies.
I've read about that. Maybe if I can see the body I might be able to determine.

ANDREW
Why is everyone ignoring the possibility that there *is* no host?

KATE *to Xander*
What does he mean?

XANDER *to Kate*
He's afraid Willow has gone insane like she did more than one and a half year ago

KATE
Do we have any reason to assume *that* happened?

DAWN
Not really

KATE
Then let's assume she's posessed.

Kennedy is satisfied with this proposition. Andrew doesn't know what counterpoint to make here and decides to

follow Kate's plan.

KENNEDY
Okay, she's posessed. What do we do now?

KATE
Let me see the place where it happened.

XANDER
I'll take you

Xander and Kate walk towards the door.

KENNEDY
And what should we do?

KATE
Stupid question. You keep doing what you're doing now.

KATE *to Giles*
Hey uh......

GILES
...Giles...

KATE *to Giles*
..Giles, do you have Rheinbaums Works?

GILES
Yes, I believe so.

KATE
Try that. It has a whole section about creatures that can posess people.

GILES *smiles*
Alright, I'll try that

XANDER
We'll be back as soon as possible

Xander and Kate leave again.

DAWN
Okay, that was..... weird

ANDREW
One minute here and she was like Buffy2 with the commanding

DAWN *smiles* *to Andrew*
Andrew... I like you a lot... but if you ever make that comparison again, I'm gonna hit you

Andrew gives Dawn a small smile to let her know he understands.

GILES
At least she was helpful... we can't deny that

Dawn's eyes suddenly open wide and she looks directly at Giles.

DAWN
Do you still have that book with antimagic that we used on Willow before?

GILES
I'm afraid not. That was lost when the store got destroyed.

ANDREW
Lost?

GILES
Yes, we never found it. It was probably burned or something

ANDREW
Is anyone getting the feeling that this prophecy has something to do with all this? Maybe Wesley
translated more about the prophecy.... something that can help us.

GILES
He said he'd call when he found something

KENNEDY
Give him a call... what do you have to lose?

@@@next scene@@@

The sun has risen and a new day has begun. The streets are filling with people.

Willow is walking through one of the housing streets until she suddenly stops. She turns towards one of the

houses and rings the doorbell. A man with a briefcase quickly opens the door. It looks like he's about ready to

leave.

MAN
Hello!? Do you know what time it is?

WILLOW
Yes...... I do

The man doesn't seems angry, but quite a bit annoyed.

MAN
What do you want?

WILLOW *cold*
Now *that's* the question, isn't it?

MAN
I don't have time for this. I'm late for work.

The man tries to walk past Willow but Willow swings her arm sideways, hitting the man in the throat. The man

falls down, catching his breath. Willow stands over the man and looks down at him.

WILLOW
*That* was not nice

MAN *scared*
I'm sorry?

WILLOW *smiles*
I can see I have your attention now

The man simply nods with a scared looks on his face. Willow allows the man to stand up. The man is not thinking about

going to work anymore; he is terrified that Willow will kill him. He looks at her carefully, and only now, notices

that her eyes are red.

MAN
Oh my god..... You're..... You're......... No! That's impossible!

WILLOW
And yet you're seeing it with your own eyes

The man seems even more terrified than before.

MAN *scared*
Stay away from me

WILLOW *laughs*
You know I won't....... but I'll make a deal with you.... give me the first section and you can go.
*Or*..... I kill you and I'll find it myself

MAN *scared*
Alright..... It's in my briefcase.

WILLOW *laughs*
You're kidding

Willow grabs the briefcase which fell on the floor when Willow hit the man and opens it. it's easy because the

combination is already set right. She grabs a small transparent object which looks like a part of a crystal ball

and puts it in her pocket.

WILLOW *smiles*
Good. Now.... where are the second and third pieces?

MAN *scared*
I don't know.... I swear

WILLOW *comforting*
It's alright. I can find them myself. I just thought you could speed things up a little.

MAN *scared*
Sorry

Willow turns away from the man and takes one step away from him. She then stops in her tracks and turns towards the

man again.

WILLOW
Oh, one more thing....

With that, she slams her fist right through the man's chest. She pulls out her fist, which is covered with blood.

The man is dead instantly and falls to the floor.

WILLOW *sighs*
Idiot!

Willow the walks away from the house.

@@@next scene@@@

In the temple, Willow and Tara are busy kissing. It doesn't seem like anything has changed since last time.

Suddenly, Willow stops kissing and sits up straight. She looks confused and scared. Tara sits up too and

looks at Willow.

TARA *calm*
What's wrong sweetie?

WILLOW *breaths fast*
I.. I.. I..

TARA *calm*
Calm down Will. Calm down.

Tara's voice seems to have a calming effect on Willow and Willow seems to relax.

TARA *calm*
I something wrong?

WILLOW *a little confused*
I..... I don't know. It feel like something terrible just happened.

TARA *calm*
Nothing happened Willow. You're here.... here with me.

Willow smiles and lies back again. When Willow can't see it, a wicked grin appears on Tara's face, which

disappears again when Tara also lies down again.

TARA *calm*
See? Everything is good.

Tara leans in and starts to kiss Willow again. Willow returns the kiss and all worries disappear.

@@@next scene@@@

Xander and Kate arrive at Kingman's Bluff. There, they find the remains of the slain warriors and a burnt corpse.

XANDER
Told you there wasn't much to go on

KATE
Maybe....

Kate sits down next to the burnt pile of flesh and starts digging in the burnt corpse. Xander walks over to one

of the slain warriors; Rakanisu to be exact.

KATE
Well, the bones look human..... This *has* to be a human.

XANDER
So?

KATE *defensive*
Hey, any information was helpfull you said and...... hey!

Kate starts digging even further in the burnt corpse at the chest. When she pulls her hands back, she is holding

a pendant.

KATE
Look at this!

Xander comes closer and immediately backs away, holding his hand in front of his mouth.

XANDER
Oh my god!

KATE *smiles*
Yeah. Interesting, right?

XANDER *disgust*
No, oh my god, how can you stand that smell?

KATE *soft*
Wuss

Xander didn't hear that right

XANDER *inquiring*
Huh?

KATE *to the point*
I said you were a wuss. Now come on.

XANDER
No thank you.... I can see.... and smell.... it from here

KATE
This was *inside* his chest

XANDER
Inside, as in, under his skin?

KATE
Yeah..... weird

Kate digs around in the body some more but she finds nothing more. After that, she and Xander walk past the

three fallen warriors. When they reach Rakanisu, which they come by last, Kate is startled for a second.

XANDER
What's wrong?

KATE *surprised*
I know him..... I worked with him

XANDER
He was a friend of yours?

KATE *quick answer*
No. When you do what I do, you have no friends.... only those you kill, those you don't kill,
and those who help you kill. He was the last.

XANDER
Who was he?

KATE
His name is.... was.... Rakanisu. He is a necromancer which means he can raise the dead....

XANDER
So we saw

KATE
He's a mercenary. He kills for the highest bidder.

XANDER
He won't any more

KATE
No, he won't....... come on, let's go and let those friends of yours have a look at this pendant

Kate and Xander walk down from the Bluff

@@@next scene@@@

At the Magic Box, Dawn, Andrew and Kennedy are busy reading. Giles is just hanging up the phone. After that,

Giles walks back to the rest of the gang.

GILES
My god, I forgot how long-winded Wesley can be

DAWN
Uh.... right?

Giles gets the point and quickly moves on.

GILES
Anyway..... he doesn't know anything new

ANDREW
And you spent half an hour on the phone to figure *that* out?

KENNEDY
Are they coming here?

GILES
No. They have this big evil in LA too.... and besides, I don't think they could do anything

DAWN
We need something more to go on.

Xander and Kate enter the Magic Box.

XANDER
Hey, we found something more to go on

Xander and Kate walk towards the rest of the gang.

DAWN
Oh my god, what's that smell?

Xander points his finger towards Kate.

ANDREW
That's you?

KATE *not angry*
Hey! You try digging through a freshly burnt corpse. See how you smell


DAWN *to Giles*
Isn't there anywhere she could, you know, clear that terrible smell away?

GILES
Well, it's not like there's a shower in here, but there's a sink in the basement and some oils we
have here.

KATE
Shouldn't we be concentrating on what we found?

GILES
Well... what *did* you two find?

Kate takes the amulet out of her pocket. It's still covered with blood.

KATE
We found this in the burnt person's corpse.

KENNEDY
So? Maybe the guy liked to wear jewelry

XANDER
No, you don't get it... we found this *inside* that guy...... it was a guy, by the way

KATE
Yeah, I grabbed it out of his chest

GILES
Why don't you..... clean that up too

Kate walks to the basement. Giles waits until Kate is gone.

GILES *to Xander*
Anything else?

XANDER
Yeah... one small thing. Kate said she knew one of those attackers.

DAWN
And?

XANDER
Nothing we couldn't guess..... mercenary, necromancer

GILES
A name?

XANDER
Rakanimbu or something....... Rakanisu! Yes, that's it.

GILES
Rakanisu? We can work with that.

KENNEDY
How? Xander just said he was a mercenary. He was just hired by someone.

DAWN
Alright, just to summarize what happened...... something wanted Willow's body so it hired three
mercenaries to weaken her and then it took posession of her, burning his old body?

GILES
That sounds accurate

DAWN
So..... how long do you think it's been planning that?

GILES
What are you saying?

DAWN
I'm talking about all those things that happened before..... the dead demon here, the cure for
that poison spell.....

KENNEDY
You think it's been around here that long? That makes no sense, why not go for Willow earlier?

GILES
Maybe it only works at a specific time

DAWN
See, we've found another clue

GILES
But if this thing *gave* us the cure for that poison spell.... that means it's old.... way older
than a human could be.

ANDREW
So that human wasn't the enemy.... it was the last host

XANDER
So let's hit the books and find out what this creature is. I think we have plenty to go on here

@@@next scene@@@

Willow is walking through a cemetaries. it doesn't look like Sunnydale. She stops at a small crypt, opens

the door and walks in. Inside, she is greeted by three vampires. They were sleeping and woke up.

VAMPIRE 1
Well well, dinner is served

VAMPIRE 2
More like breakfast

Willow slowly walks towards the vampires. Two of them charge towards her but she effordlessly slams her fists

through their throats with enough force to behead them and make them turn to ashes.

VAMPIRE 1
What are you?

Willow doesn't answer and walks towards the vampire. The vampire now notices Willow's eyes. They are still red, but

are a little less bright than before. The vampire seems a bit frightened.

WILLOW
Now let's see how we're doing with the magic

Willow holds her hands in front of her chest with her palms up.

WILLOW
Tehra estu va ma-al setente a

A glowing ball of light appears in front of the vampire. It's not sunlight because it doesn't harm the

vampire..... yet. Willow stretches her hands towards the vampire and the ball hits the vampire who dusts

immediately on impact.

WILLOW *satisfied*
Excellent!

Willow walks towards a casket in the center of the crypt and violently pushes the heavy lid off it.

She then pulls the corpse out of it and throws it in the corner of the room. She then searches the casket.

After about half a minute, she pulls out a crystal piece that looks a lot like the piece she got before.

WILLOW *smiles*
Jackpot!

@@@next scene@@@

Back at the Magic Box, everyone is still busy researching. Kate is there with them so apparently, she cleaned

up. Dawn suddenly looks up from her book.

DAWN
I got something. This demon was imprisoned in an amulet almost 1800 years ago

GILES
What happened with it?

DAWN
It says they threw it in the ocean

GILES
And it could posess people?

DAWN
It had posessed someone and it held control of the host for years.... until the host started
to adjust itself to the creature

Kennedy walks over towards Dawn and takes a look at the picture in Dawn's book. it shows radament how he was when he

got trapped. She seems upset.

KENNEDY
So you're saying that if we don't get that thing out of Willow she'll turn into that?

DAWN
No, that takes years

GILES
And what creature are we talking about?

DAWN
It says Radament

GILES *astounded*
The overlord?

XANDER
You know more than us here, G-man? Spill

GILES
Many, many centuries ago, something walked the earth that was neither demon nor man.

ANDREW
Another hellgod?

GILES
No.... slightly less powerful, but you're thinking in the right direction. Anyway, it had
this big plan to destroy the world but he got stopped.

XANDER
And this big plan.... what was it?

GILES *eyes wide*
It was going to open the hellmouth

ANDREW
How?

GILES
Legend goes that he was looking for a crystal orb that would direct him to the hellmouth.
After he was defeated, the orb was broken in three pieces.

XANDER
Why didn't they just destroy it?

GILES
It was protected with magic

DAWN
So you're saying it's gonna use this orb thing to find the hellmouth? We all know where it is

GILES *smiles*
Yes, but he doesn't know that we know.

XANDER
That brings us to two important questions..... *how* is he going to open the hellmouth after
he finds it?

GILES
That will probably be magic

KENNEDY
*That's* why he wanted Willow!

XANDER
.....and the other question.... I'm afraid to ask.... where are those crystal pieces?

GILES
One is kept by a guardian near the hellmouth, one is buried with a knight in London and one is.....

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Date Posted: 15:55:14 09/08/03 Mon

@@@next scene@@@

We find ourselves at the former council headquarters. The place still hasn't been rebuilt and with all the

debris gone, the place is completely clear. Except for the foundation, it's like the building was never there.

Willow walks over to a specific spot and slams her fist right through a stone slab. Underneath it is the third

and final piece of the orb.

WILLOW
This is just too easy

@@@next scene@@@

XANDER
You *can't* be serious. It's at the Watcher's Council?

GILES
Not anymore it is. We buried it under the floor. And then we..... forgot it.

XANDER
Now we don't have to worry. There's no way Willow could get there that fast

GILES
I'm afraid she could. With Radament's help her powers grow. She'll teleport

XANDER
Damn! So you're saying he could have all the pieces now?

GILES
We gave him enough time to collect them. I think he has them. He can sense the location
of them.

XANDER
Give me some good news Giles. How do we evict him from Willow's body.

GILES
I don't know...... only Willow could do that.... if she's still in there somewhere

DAWN
You mean she's helpless inside her own mind? What if she's dead?

GILES
She can't be dead. A person's magic is in the mind. He kills Willow, he loses the magic.

DAWN
What if he has her trapped?

GILES
Then she's doomed.

DAWN
Let me help. I'll enter her mind.

KATE
Okay, I've kept my mouth shut so far, but that's a really bad idea

DAWN
Why? Willow did it with Buffy once?

KATE
Well, Willow is a lot more powerful than you and this Buffy person was probably not posessed.

GILES
Are you saying it couldn't work?

DAWN
I know a spell that can make this work?

GILES
Willow taught you such a dangerous spell?

DAWN
Not so much taught... more like.... revealed

XANDER *frowns*
You went through her books

DAWN
Hey, it comes out handy here

KATE
Are you even listening? *You're* *not* *powerful* *enough*!

Dawn looks at Kate with a look of despair.

DAWN
I have to try

@@@next scene@@@

It's a bit later at the Magic Box. Dawn, Andrew and Kate are sitting at opposite ends of a circle. Xander, Giles

and Kennedy are ready to leave.

KENNEDY
Good luck

DAWN
Yeah, you too

Giles, Kennedy and Xander leave; weapons packed.

DAWN
Alright. Let's do this.

KATE
You understand you have to work this spell alone? I can't offer any help magic.

DAWN
I know

Dawn closes her eyes, then Andrew and Kate close their eyes too.

DAWN
Demium spatium esnoba pine

KATE
God of spirits, hear out call

DAWN
Sateri grysimi ava santini ma

ANDREW
Aid us on our quest

@@@next scene@@@

Willow suddenly appears in the middle of the road of one of the Sunnydale streets and is immediately hit by a car.

Willow falls to the floor but immediately gets up. She points her hand at the driver, who got out, and the woman

falls on the ground. Willow dusts herself off and grabs one of the crystal pieces from the floor.

WILLOW *smiles*
Wouldn't wanna lose this

Willow walks to the sidewalk and grabs the three crystal pieces. She seems to know exactly how the three pieces

fit into each other. In less than ten seconds, the crystal has the form of a ball again and it seems to have a

mind of it's own. Willow holds on to it and the ball slightly pulls to one direction.... the direction of the

hellmouth. She takes a few steps and then stops.

WILLOW
Naughty, naughty.

At that same time, Dawn, Andrew and Kate are busy with the spell.

DAWN
Barra, barra, setenana amusa go

KATE
Begone, begone, the walls around the mind

DAWN
Comara seth setanana ago

ANDREW
Admit me to the mind of my choice

Back with Willow.

WILLOW
Very well.... I'll play

Willow keeps walking.

Back with Dawn, Andrew and Kennedy.

Having finished the spell, Dawn collapses to the floor. Andrew checks on her. She's not responding to anything.

ANDREW *scared*
Is she dead?

KATE
No.... her mind is away

ANDREW
I thought you said she wasn't powerful enough

KATE *frowns*
Radament must have let her in.

@@@next scene@@@

The ground is lifeless and the air is black. We are inside Willow's mind. Dawn is standing in a large dead field.

There is nothing growing anywhere, except a dead tree every here and there. Dawn quickly spots the temple, which

is only a few minutes away.

When she reaches the temple, she encounters a big surprise, there is a large fence around the temple.

RADAMENT (O.S)
Come for me?

Dawn turns around and her face fills with fear. Radament is bigger here than he was when he was imprisoned.

RADAMENT
Come on. Don't tell me you're scared of me...... you came all this way.

DAWN *angry*
Get out of here

RADAMENT
Uh, let me think.... no

Dawn looks to the left and notices that the fence is missing a part. She runs for it, but before she can reach it,

the missing part suddenly appears.

DAWN
Hey, don't cheat!

RADAMENT
I can do everything here. Here.... I am god

DAWN
Why... just because you happen to be here?

RADAMENT
Exactl......

Radament realizes what Dawn meant. This is no real place. All the stuff here doesn't exist. There is no distance

there is only one thing that counts here..... Willpower.

As quick as he can, Radament lunges for Dawn but when he gets to his target, Dawn is already gone. He sees her at

the entrance of the temple. She managed to 'teleport' away. Dawn quickly runs inside. Radament stays behind. For

some reason, he doesn't want to go inside. When Dawn comes inside, she quickly spots Willow and Tara on the floor

but she doesn't recognize Tara yet.

DAWN
Willow!

Willow and Tara stop kissing and Willow sits up.

WILLOW *ignorant*
Dawnie, what are you doing here?

DAWN
Willow, listen to me, this is not real. This is your mind, you have to fight it.

WILLOW *calm*
Fight what?

Dawn now sees who the other person is. Dawn's eyes grow wide.

DAWN
Tara?!

TARA
Hi Dawn. Willow and I were kind of busy

DAWN
You're not real

TARA
Is that a way to welcome an old friend?

DAWN *shouts*
You're dead!

The sound of Dawn's voice echos through the temple for several seconds. A tear appears on Willow's face.

WILLOW *soft*
Dead....... yes, I remember

A red spot appears on Tara's robe at her chest.

TARA
Willow.... please. Don't let me die

DAWN
Don't listen to her. There is no choice about this. She is dead and we need your help

TARA *cries*
Willooooooow!

Tara drops to the floor and doesn't move. Another tear has appeared on Willow's face. Tara's body just disappears.

DAWN
See? She wasn't real.

WILLOW *close to crying*
What was all this for? I was happy here.

Dawn grabs Willow's hand and literally pulls her towards the exit. When she gets there, Willow's eyes go wide.

She sees the wasteland that is there.

DAWN
This is your mind, but someone else took it over. You have to take it back.

Just in front of the entrance to the temple, the fence disappears. Radament appears right where the fence was.

RADAMENT
Time to end this

Willow holds her hands above her head.

WILLOW
Solemn cobata mii

Nothing happens.

RADAMENT
You wanted to use magic here? Laughable!

DAWN
Willow, this is *your* mind. Do something.

Willow looks at Radament and suddenly, a small fence is positioned around him. It doesn't last long however,

Radament just looks at the fence and it lowers into the ground. Radament works exactly the same move on Willow

and Dawn, making a fence appear around them. Willow also makes the fence go into the ground.

DAWN *to Willow*
He's stalling..... he must be close

@@@next scene@@@

Radament enters a deserted Sunnydale High. Meanwhile, Giles, Kennedy and Xander guard the hellmouth.

@@@next scene@@@

DAWN *to Willow*
You *have* to get rid of him. I know you ca do it

Willow seems to be trying hard, but she can't make it work.

RADAMENT
Trying to get rid of me huh, not gonna happen.

WILLOW *serious*
Yes it will. This is *my* mind. You don't belong here. The air shouldn't be black....

With a flash, the air suddenly turns blue

WILLOW
....the land shouldn't be dead....

As if by magic, plants and trees spring out of the ground

WILLOW
....and most importantly.....

RADAMENT
No! Don't!

WILLOW
....you shouldn't be here.

Radament disappears like he was never there.

@@@next scene@@@

At the Sunnydale basement, a red-eyed Willow is approaching Xander, Kennedy and Giles. Then suddenly, Willow

falls to the floor. A black cloud appears from Willow that evaporates into thin air. After a few seconds,

Willow gets up. Xander, Kennedy and Giles point their weapons at Willow.

WILLOW
Can I just say..... ow!

Kennedy smiles. She recognizes the real Willow instantly and runs towards her.

KENNEDY
Willow!

When she reaches Willow, she hugs her like crazy.

@@@next scene@@@

Back at the Magic Box, everyone has gathered at the main table. They all seem to be recovering. Giles told Willow

everything about Radament and what happened to her. Then, the phone rings.

XANDER
I'll bet you fifty bucks that's Wesley and that he translated the prophecy

GILES
You're on.

Giles goes to the phone and picks it up.

GILES
Magic Box, Rupert Giles

WESLEY (O.S)
It's Wesley. Look, I found someone who translated the prophecy for us.

GILES
Yes?

WESLEY
....And the witch named Willow, a witch with strong magic will fall for the power of the evil one
under the seventh moon after the rebirth. The overlord of destruction will take control of her
and he will get out of control and attempt to destroy the world. But with the help of friends, she will archieve victory over the evil one.

We now hear Giles saying a few words on the phone. We don't hear Wesley any more. After a few minutes, he hangs up.

XANDER
And? Was it Wesley?

GILES *smiles*
No.... it was a customer.

XANDER
Damn!

@@@next scene@@@

The next day, Giles and Kennedy are training again in the Magic Box. Giles is holding a punching bag and

Kennedy is kicking it.

KENNEDY
So, have you decided yet?

GILES
What?

KENNEDY
You said you might leave.... have you discussed it with Willow?

GILES
No..... because I'm not leaving

Kennedy is visibly happy to hear this.

KENNEDY
Really? That's great. How come you decided to stay?

GILES
What happened yesterday, actually. I can't start to think what I would have done if I weren't here.
I can help from London with a lot of things, but I also can't help with a lot of things. I'm going
to stay here, where I can help most.

Kennedy is so pleased that she kicks the bag really hard, knocking Giles, and the bag, back ten feet.

GILES
Glad to see you're happy about it, but you didn't have to kick that hard.

KENNEDY
Well Giles, with all of us here, there's nothing we can't handle

GILES
I hope you're right..... I hope you're right
[> [> Subject: Mindwipe -- title fits


Author:
MTsFan
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Date Posted: 05:53:44 09/10/03 Wed

Things I really like are:

Using Tara as a distraction to pacify Willow.

Radament showing his true evil, even if it was in Willow's body.

The strong Dawn insisting on the mind entering spell and getting it done.

Willow recovers by using her Will Power.


Unanswered:
What did they do with that sphere?

Why did Giles cover up the translation?


The end of the Radament arc seems like a season finale. Of course, with the translation coverup and Radament dissipating in a cloud, we aren't sure he's really done for. Either way, this one makes me want more.
[> [> [> Subject: Some answers to that (quite a bit actually)


Author:
EvilWillowFan *talking too much*
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Date Posted: 08:30:19 09/10/03 Wed

I'm glad you liked the episode. This episode is sort of a finisher for a lot of stuff. It was supposed to be two episodes, but I decided to put them together because one part wouldn't have any real action. You say it feels like a finale..... I can't disagree with that; it does. People often say that finales are the best episodes and I figure, I could spend five or six episodes trying to delay it, but what's the point? Radament was more of a season binder anyway.

What happened to the sphere? I'll get into that the next episode, but it won't be a major arc.

You don't have to think anything bad about it. Giles accepted a bet with Xander for fifty bucks because he figured it could never be Wesley (what would be the odds?). When it *was* Wesley, he just told a little lie to avoid embarrasment and paying fifty bucks.
Don't worry, his lie will come to the light, but it's no major plot or something.

Is Radament dead? Who know? He certainly won't be back the next couple of episodes, but there is always the chance I'll bring him back later.

Now, what happens the next episode? I'm not going to give a summary (among other things because I haven't written it yet), but here are some questions for you to wonder about:
* What will Kennedy do when she finds out about Tara?
* Will the council accept Giles' refusal (will he change his mind)?
* Will Willow's attitude towards Kate have changed?

That and much more will come in the next (couple of) episode(s) of WillPower.
[> Subject: Impressed


Author:
I mock you with my monkey pants
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Date Posted: 05:22:53 09/09/03 Tue

This so far is my fav
[> Subject: Re: Episode 2x04: Mindwipe pt1


Author:
Nullafy
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Date Posted: 01:01:07 09/11/03 Thu

Great episodes, Im even warming up to Kate!
[> Subject: Re: Episode 2x04: Mindwipe pt1


Author:
VKMax
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Date Posted: 02:08:09 09/12/03 Fri

ooh creepy magic mamma Willow! v.cool and yay!Tara and Boo!Dead Tara again but I like the way it all crumbles, like the blood re-appearing etc etc

Nice, one t hing though. I have to say I think this should be the last DMW storyline as IMO she's pretty over that now. Job well done.
[> [> Subject: DMW?


Author:
EvilWillowFan
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Date Posted: 08:22:43 09/12/03 Fri

What's DMW?
[> [> [> Subject: DarkMamaWillow


Author:
VKMax
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Date Posted: 14:14:21 09/12/03 Fri

[> [> [> [> Subject: Well rest at ease...


Author:
EvilWillowFan
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Date Posted: 15:13:24 09/12/03 Fri

DarkMammaWillow is not on the planning for the next batch of episodes I have planned.
But thanks for mentioning it. It's good if I know what y'all are thinking.
[> Subject: Re: Episode 2x04: Mindwipe pt1


Author:
Gemma
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Date Posted: 04:53:12 09/12/03 Fri

Wow what a start! I like the temple bit especially. Ok I've been reading and not commenting, which is a good thing, not for couchhubby who came in wanting to prattle on about cars and motors as I asked him to hurry up because I was reading a great fic.oops. You can tell you put alot into your fic. Every scene has a purpose and adds to the storyline. Yes it is like a finale. But that just adds to the interest of "where will you take us next". This series so far has blown me away. It's been well written. it's almost like you go through and through the ep just to make sure everythng fits into place. Yes there are a few questions left open but that means there will be more to this season that you can use. They aren't big plot holes just things that make you think I wonder what will happen with those. You've got an excellent grasp of the characters, especially Willow, wonder why ;). i really am looking forward to more. Bring on the next ep as soon as it's ready.
Excellent!


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