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Date Posted: 23:31:57 03/05/05 Sat
Author: Lightning Dark
Subject: Re: Life or Death?
In reply to: Dancing Sun 's message, "Re: Life or Death?" on 23:19:24 03/05/05 Sat

>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Name: Light Darkness (DUH!)
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Age: 2 and a half yrs
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Colour: Reddish-Brown with black
>>mane
>>>>>>and
>>>>>>>>>>>>>yellow
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>stripes
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Breed: I dunno
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>A milky white, young mare cantered up
>to
>>>>>>>>>>>Lightning
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Dark she tossed her head trying to get
>>>her
>>>>>>>>mane
>>>>>>>>>>>>out
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>of
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>her eyes, "hello dear friend, I'm glad
>>>you
>>>>>>>>>could
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>join
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>us." Her voice sounded like soft rain
>>>>>>>>pattering
>>>>>>>>>>>to
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>the
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>ground, she nipped Lightning Dark
>>>>>playfully.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Lightning Dark looked to see her sister
>>>>>>>>Juvenile
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Bliss
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>and nipped her back "Nice to know
>someone
>>>>>>here
>>>>>>>>>>>>isn't
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>a
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>complete stranger" she said nipping her
>>>>back
>>>>>>>>>>"Come
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>on,
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>let's play!" and she ran off with
>>Juvenile
>>>>>>>>Bliss
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>galloping after her
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>JB stretched her neck forward erging
>>>herself
>>>>>>to
>>>>>>>>>go
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>faster, racing her sister was something
>>she
>>>>>>>>hadnt
>>>>>>>>>>>>>done
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>in a long time and she enjoyed the rush
>of
>>>>>>>>>>>adrenalin
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>again.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>LD looked behind her and saw her sister
>>>>>gaining
>>>>>>>>on
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>her. She didn't dee where she was going
>and
>>>>>ran
>>>>>>>>>>head
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>first into a bigger, taller, stronger
>>>>>stallion.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>"Oh o..." she said as the stallion towered
>>>>>over
>>>>>>>>>her
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>JB came up to see if she was alright
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>"Oh, my god! Lighning Dark! Are you ok?"
>>>>>>>>>>>>>Concern showed on every feature of her face
>>>>for
>>>>>>>>her
>>>>>>>>>>>>>sister, as she stared up at the stallion
>>>>>>>>defiantly,
>>>>>>>>>>>>>then suddenly she realised it was her long
>>>>lost
>>>>>>>>>twin
>>>>>>>>>>>>>brother.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>Name: Dancing Sun
>>>>>>>>>>>>>Age: three
>>>>>>>>>>>>>Gender: stallion
>>>>>>>>>>>>>Colour: white with red patches
>>>>>>>>>>>>>Statis : darq
>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>>>>"Dancing Sun?! oh how I'm glad too see you,
>>>>>this
>>>>>>>>is
>>>>>>>>>>>>>like a family reunion!"
>>>>>>>>>>>>>"as I am glad to see you both, my little
>>>>>>sisters,
>>>>>>>>>am
>>>>>>>>>>>I
>>>>>>>>>>>>>right in presuming you still are both
>>>>>neautral?'
>>>>>>>>he
>>>>>>>>>>>>>bowed gladly.
>>>>>>>>>>>>"Well yes I am but I'm not too sure bout JB"
>>>>>>>>>>>>DS and JB were twins, yes, but what they
>>>didn't
>>>>>>>>know
>>>>>>>>>>>>was that LD had the hots for DS since she
>>>first
>>>>>>>saw
>>>>>>>>>>>>him.
>>>>>>>>>>>>'Sigh' LD thought 'If only he wasn't my
>>>brother
>>>>>I
>>>>>>>>>>>>would ask him out in a second' she thought
>>>>sadly
>>>>>>>>>>>>"So! What brings you here Dancing Sun?"
>>>>>>>>>>>"Well... I just found out a bit of disturbing
>>>>>news
>>>>>>>>>>>about our family, it looks like this isnt
>>>>>actually
>>>>>>>>>>>much of a family reunion, Mother told me a
>>>month
>>>>>>>ago
>>>>>>>>>>>that I'm adopted, I was taken in when my
>>mother
>>>>>>was
>>>>>>>>>>>killed by wolves, I'm not your brother!" he
>>>>>sighed
>>>>>>>>>>>depressed and rested his head across LD's
>>>back.
>>>>>>>>>>>"Oh," gasped Juvenile Bliss shocked and
>>>stunned.
>>>>>>>>>>"No way Jose!!" Lightning Dark exclaimed
>loving
>>>>>the
>>>>>>>>>>touch of Dancing Sun's head on her back
>>>>>>>>>>'This can't be real' she thought excitedly
>>>'Now's
>>>>>>my
>>>>>>>>>>chance'
>>>>>>>>>>"Um... Dancing Sun? May I talk to you in
>>private
>>>>>>for
>>>>>>>>a
>>>>>>>>>>minute?" Lightning Dark asked
>>>>>>>>>Already having an idea what this might be
>about,
>>>>>>>>>Juvenile Bliss stepped awy with a cheeky grin
>on
>>>>>her
>>>>>>>>>face, "go get him LD."
>>>>>>>>>"Yes? What is it LD? Is something wrong?" he
>>>asked
>>>>>>>>>concerned. Ever since he had been told that he
>>>>>wasnt
>>>>>>>>>really one of the family he had fantasised
>about
>>>>>him
>>>>>>>>>and LD being together, maybe this was his
>>chance.
>>>>>>>>Lightning Dark trotted over to an overhanging
>>>>willow
>>>>>>>>for a bit of privacy and waited for Dancing Sun
>>to
>>>>>>>>follow, which he did.
>>>>>>>>"Um... Dancing Sun! Um... ever since I saw
>you...
>>>I
>>>>>>>>um... Well, I dunno... Well I've kinda
>>>developed...
>>>>>O
>>>>>>>>jeez, how can i say this! It's just that-"
>>>>Lightning
>>>>>>>>Dark was cut off but the sound of a crash of
>>>>thunder
>>>>>>>>"How can this be possible? Today was supposed to
>>>be
>>>>>a
>>>>>>>>sunny day! It can't've change unless a dark
>force
>>>>of
>>>>>>>>energy is being used!" Lightning Dark said in
>>fear
>>>>>as
>>>>>>>>all the other horses in the field panicked
>>>>>>>"it's alight Lightning Dark, I'm here, nothing
>>>could
>>>>>>>beat me, I'm darq, and if this froce is too, then
>>>it
>>>>>>>will be alright," he cooed trying to comfort her,
>>>it
>>>>>>>distressed him that she was worried.
>>>>>>"Yes I suppose you're right." Lightning Dark said
>>>>>>looking out to the field of panicking horses "But
>>>you
>>>>>>know me. I simply hate thunder storms! And... Oh
>my
>>>>>>god! Where's Juvenile Bliss? I can't see her
>>>>>>anywhere!!!" Lightning Dark panicked and ran out
>>>into
>>>>>>the field of all the other horses who, unlike her,
>>>>>>were much, much bigger, stronger and taller...
>>>>>Stricken with panick for her safety both Dancing
>Sun
>>>>>and Juvenile Bliss galloped out to her, pushing
>past
>>>>>other horses not caring if they were hurt for fear
>>>>>that there little Lightning Dark would be killed.
>>"My
>>>>>dear, are you hurt?" they cried in unison.
>>>>Lightning Dark heard them both but they were from
>>>>opposite sides of her. She looked left, that's where
>>>>she heard Dancing Sun's voice. She looked right,
>>>>that's where she heard Juvenile Bliss' voice. She
>>>>reared up on her hind legs hoping they would see
>her.
>>>>They did and they both ran faster to get to her. But
>>>>before anyone of them did, a giganormos horse bumped
>>>>into her and she was knocked to the ground,
>>>>unconscious, while most horses missed her some
>>stepped
>>>>on her without giving her second thought
>>>Fired with anger at the other horses disregard for
>>>life, especially a life he loved, he bolted forward
>>>splitting the crowds in half, giving him a clear path
>>>to Lightning Dark, "please, please dont be dead," he
>>>whispered tears running down his face, "I couldn't
>>>bere anyone else dying!"
>>Lightning Dark stiired a bit when Dancing Sun said
>>this opened one eye to look at him. "Dancin Sun" she
>>said just as Juvenile Bliss walked through towards
>>Lightning Dark and Dancing Sun "I'm sorry. I'm so
>>sorry I didn't say this before but... I love you..."
>>Then she fell unconscious again her breathing
>>extremely shallow. Rain falling down on her and
>>Dancing Sun as well as the other horses who had
>>stopped panicking as the thunder had stopped
>With a rush of passion he dragged to shelter in a
>dark, warm cave, "I love you too, Lightning Dark," he
>whispered as the night swooped around them.
:::::Lightning's Dream:::::
Lightning wandered through a dark, damp and cold forest. She was searching for something but she didn't know what.
'Where's Dancing Sun and Juvenile Bliss?' She thought.
'What am I doing here?'
"Hello? Anyone? Someone help me!" She called. She comtinued to trot her way through the forest.
"Hello?" she called as she saw something move
"Hello my dear child" said a voice
"Wh-who are you?" Lightning asked
"My dear child, it is against my wishes to do this but I'm Death. I've come to take you away to the afterlife" 'Death' said
"No! I don't want to go! I want to stay with Juvenile Bliss and Dancing Sun!" Lightning Dark said moving backwards
"I'm sorry my dear child but you can't! There's nothing I can do!" Death said
"Please!" Lightning begged as she started to cry (can horses cry?) "I don't want to die! I want to stay! I love Dancing Sun! And Juvenile Bliss! I don't want to leave them"
Death sighed "My dear child, you have something to live for. In my book of rules, rule #104 says, 'if you have something to live for you may live'. So I'll let you live. Good luck, my child"
And with that Death dissapeared in a flash of light.
In the cave Lightning stirred and opened her eyes
"Dancing Sun" she whispered as she was still weak and tired

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