| Subject: Re: poetry good or dumb |
Author:
Erica H
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Date Posted: 22:29:10 06/13/04 Sun
In reply to:
Bobby
's message, "Re: poetry good or dumb" on 19:59:35 02/12/04 Thu
I was wandering if my poem was ok or just dumb
Hi Bobby,
I haven't checked out the site in a long time, and I found your poem. I don't think it's dumb. I think it has good rythm. I'm, personally, drawn to poetry that rhymes and/or keeps a repiticious beat. Yours does. I often find that leaving the piece alone for a couple days, then coming back with a clearer head helps. A poem is always critique-able. Good Luck!
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