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Date Posted: 13:21:51 11/06/04 Sat
In reply to: Bobby 's message, "Re: poetry good or dumb" on 19:59:35 02/12/04 Thu

The poem was good to me u express your love for the playstation very well!!
keep it up,
I write poems also.....

>I was wandering if my poem was ok or just dumb here it
>is
>My Play Station game
>
>There is much sighing, and weaving
>Over my Playstation game
>And there is much wailing and grieving,
>But I love my Playstation game
>It might cost me money,
>And it might cost me time,
>But I’ll give anything to play my Playstation game.
>There are many games to choose from but few that I
>love,
>But that is just better reason for me to love my
>Playstation game.
>When I’m in my own world playing my PlayStation game,
>I feel invulnerable to all the hassles of everyday
>life.
>Like doing my homework and doing my chores.
>Even though my mom yells and hollers to stop playing
>that game,
>I don’t because my PlaySation is the love of my life.
>I’m grounded right now but I’m not mad,
>Because I know there is always next week to play my
>Playstation game.

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Re: poetry good or dumb I WILL NEVER FOGIVE 11:22:38 12/29/04 Wed

WILL NEVER FORGIVE BRITTANY ALTORFER 11:24:40 12/29/04 Wed

Re: WILL NEVER FORGIVE -- erica h, 18:40:08 01/31/05 Mon

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>The poem was good to me u express your love for the >playstation very well!! > keep it up, > I write poems also..... > > > >>I was wandering if my poem was ok or just dumb here it >>is >>My Play Station game >> >>There is much sighing, and weaving >>Over my Playstation game >>And there is much wailing and grieving, >>But I love my Playstation game >>It might cost me money, >>And it might cost me time, >>But I’ll give anything to play my Playstation game. >>There are many games to choose from but few that I >>love, >>But that is just better reason for me to love my >>Playstation game. >>When I’m in my own world playing my PlayStation game, >>I feel invulnerable to all the hassles of everyday >>life. >>Like doing my homework and doing my chores. >>Even though my mom yells and hollers to stop playing >>that game, >>I don’t because my PlaySation is the love of my life. >>I’m grounded right now but I’m not mad, >>Because I know there is always next week to play my >>Playstation game.

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