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Subject: 8x04: Party Girl


Author:
VKMax
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Date Posted: 15:19:35 10/05/03 Sun

INT – SUMMERS HOUSE – MORNING

Buffy enters the kitchen with Xander. She’s holding two large pizza boxes – Xander is holding a large white carrier bag. He empties the contents onto the table and smiles.

The bag was full of candies and chocolates.

BUFFY
Xander!

XANDER
You asked for a variety

BUFFY
Well yeah but I didn’t ask you to rob Willy Wonka!

XANDER
I have sympathies

BUFFY
It’s her own fault, she should’ve told us

XANDER
Buffy how was she supposed to know what would happen?

BUFFY
There was plenty of warning signs

XANDER
Like what?

BUFFY
Me constantly warning her

Buffy grabs a tray of drinks whilst balancing the pizza on the other arm. Xander has various sugary products gathered in his arms.

They walk through to the living room where Dawn is sat in front of the television

DAWN
Hey!

Buffy plods her self down next to her

BUFFY
(to Xander)
I told her not to go to the party

Dawn rolls her eyes and takes a slice of pizza with her left hand.

BUFFY
(sarcastic)
Say Dawn, you need feeding now?

Dawn gives her the ultimate “shut up” look as she itches her arm through a sling.

Starring
Sarah Michelle Gellar
Nicholas Brendon
Michelle Trachtenberg
Tom Lenk
James Marsters
Alyson Hannigan as Willow

NOTE: James Marsters does not appear in this episode

Guest Starring
Thad Luckinbill, Amber Tamblyn, D.B Woodside as Principal Wood

“Four days earlier”

INT – SUNNYDALE HIGH – NIGHT

Dawn is sat on a bench with RJ and three of his friends. All except RJ and Dawn are drunk

RJ
Sorry about this

DAWN
It’s okay, I’m used to drinky people

RJ
Your dad an alcoholic?

DAWN
Sister’s a twenty something
(looking down)
I don’t see my Dad

RJ
How come?

DAWN
He’s…I think he’s in Spain

RJ
Spain, nice place

DAWN
You’ve been?

RJ
My Step-Dad’s got a yacht out there

DAWN
Ah, another child of the split home

RJ
Work’s better that way, four parents to get from
(beat)
How about you?

DAWN
Just Buffy and…I guess Xander

RJ
Where’s your Mom?

DAWN
(quiet)
She died two and half years ago

RJ
Sorry

DAWN
No, it’s okay

PRINCIPAL WOOD (O.S)
Dawn Summers

DAWN
Rob…Principal Wood

PRINCIPAL WOOD
Does your sister know you’re out drinking at
(checks watch)
Eleven thirty

BUFFY (O.S)
She does now

DAWN
Oh my god

BUFFY
Home!

DAWN
But…

BUFFY
Ten…nine…

DAWN
This is so embarrassing

BUFFY
Six…five…

RJ
I’ll pick you up for the party at eight

BUFFY
Tick tock

RJ
Bye!

BUFFY
(to Dawn)
Wait in the car

DAWN
I hate you

Buffy waits for Dawn to walk away, RJ is about to leave as Buffy stops him

BUFFY
Rule number one
(smiles)
of fifteen

CUT TO.

INT – XANDERS CAR – MORNING

WILLOW
So…

XANDER
So what?

WILLOW
Nancy

XANDER
Boris Becker

WILLOW
Huh?

XANDER
We’re not throwing around random names?

WILLOW
Xander!

XANDER
Nothing’s going on Will, she’s nice but…

WILLOW
But you’re not ready?

XANDER
Right

WILLOW
You know, I understand

XANDER
I know you do

WILLOW
(trying to lighten the mood)
Buffy’s the only one who’s girlfriend didn’t die
(beat)
That’s because she’s not gay and all her boyfriends are dead before she dates them

XANDER
You think they’ll be okay tonight?

WILLOW
Sure, she’ll look after him

CUT TO.

EXT – FRAT HOUSE – NIGHT

DAWN
Go away!

Dawn climbs out of the car dressed head to toe in Buffy’s clothes

BUFFY
Be careful!

DAWN
These clothes are too small, you’re like a munchkin

BUFFY
A munchkin who will save your life if you turn into your costume!

DAWN
(poking head through car window)
Hurry up!

ANDREW
I’m coming!

He tumbles out of the car, twisting his pants back round

DAWN
What are you supposed to be?

BUFFY
He’s Clark Kent

DAWN
You look like a farmer

ANDREW
Duh! We’re only on season three they’re still on the farm

DAWN
Whatever
(banging window)
Leave!

Buffy frowns as she drives off Dawn and Andrew stand nervously looking up at the house.

END OF PART ONE

INT – PARTY – NIGHT

Dawn and Andrew are weaving through the crowds of people, both looking incredibly nervous.

DAWN
Hey…
Hey…
Um, how are you doing?

ANDREW
Who’s that?

DAWN
(through teeth)
I have never met any of these people in my life!

RJ
Hey!

DAWN
RJ!

RJ
Who’s the guy?

DAWN
This is Andrew he’s, some guy I know

RJ
Your boyfriend

DAWN
As if!

ANDREW
Hello! Still standing right here

DAWN
Sorry

RJ
Hey guy, why don’t you get some refreshments

ANDREW
(fed up)
Sure

RJ
Great, they’re through there…

Andrew leads off looking a little down. Dawn looks guilty but soon perks up as RJ puts his arm around her

RJ
So, Dawn…let me tell you a little story about this place

DAWN
Okay…let me guess, some big haunt?

CUT TO.

INT – PARTY KITCHEN – NIGHT

Andrew is gathering a drink as he spots a girl running from the closet grasping her arm. A guy follows out soon after, he looks lost.

ANDREW
Nice party

PERCY (O.S)
Tucker’s Brother!

ANDREW
Percy, hey!

PERCY
Dude, what are you doing here?

ANDREW
I came with a friend, Dawn

PERCY
Buffy’s kid sister? That’s twisted man

ANDREW
What? Gross Percy she’s my friend is all

PERCY
Whatever man

ANDREW
What are you doing here any way?

PERCY
Dude, I’m a Sophomore here

ANDREW
Aren’t you almost twenty three?

PERCY
What’s that supposed to mean brainiac?

ANDREW
I…Nothing

PERCY
You calling me stupid?

ANDREW
I wasn’t calling you anything

PERCY
Whatever

Percy pushes Andrew’s face down in the punch bowl

PERCY
Once a loser, always a geek

Andrew pulls himself up as Percy and his friends watch on laughing.

CUT TO.

INT – SUMMERS HOUSE – NIGHT

WILLOW
This is nice

BUFFY
Still think it’s kinda goofy

Xander rubs his stomach as he unwraps another piece of candy

XANDER
There’s nothing wrong with adults trick or treating

BUFFY
I still think making the left over slayer pretend to be twelve was cruel

CUT TO.

INT – FRAT PARTY – NIGHT

DAWN
So, how come you’re at a college party? You’re eighteen

RJ
I have friends in high places

DAWN
How high?

RJ
My boss’ son comes here

DAWN
You have a boss?

RJ
Perfect Pizza, it’s just a weekend thing

DAWN
Is that Janice?

RJ
Totally, she always comes to these things

DAWN
Really?

Janice is grinding on the table with some guy

DAWN
Wow look at her go, I should go talk to her or something

RJ
Good luck getting sense to her this time of night

DAWN
What do you mean?

RJ
She’ll be truly up in the sky

DAWN
Sky?

RJ
High

DAWN
Janice takes drugs?

RJ
Just a few, the girls a total wreck head

Dawn looks on curiously as Janice continues to drown her self in alcohol

CUT TO.

INT – SUMMERS HOUSE – NIGHT

BUFFY
Is it sad?

XANDER
What?

BUFFY
My seventeen-year-old sister has more of a social life than us…and we’re legal

WILLOW
It’s quite depressing

BUFFY
I need more candy

CUT TO.

INT – FRAT PARTY – NIGHT

Dawn is wondering through the kitchen looking for Andrew

DAWN
Andrew?!

She wonders past several passed out party goers, couples making out and people being sick

DAWN
Andrew!

She reaches the patio door’s and spots him sitting alone on the porch

DAWN
Hey, what’s up?

ANDREW
I don’t wanna talk about

DAWN
What happened?

ANDREW
I said I don’t wanna talk about it

DAWN
You sure?

ANDREW
(quiet)
Go away Dawn, I wanna be alone

DAWN
Andrew…

ANDREW
Go away!

DAWN
Fine!

Dawn storms off, looking back from the window in concern.

CUT TO.

INT – FRAT PARTY – UPSTAIRS

DAWN
Rj!?

She steps through one of the closed doors and leaps back in fright

DAWN
Oh god!

JANICE
Dawn?

Dawn covers her eyes and Janice and random jock dress themselves

DAWN
Sorry, I’m gonna go blind myself

JANICE
Dawn wait

Janice chases Dawn down the corridor and stops her

JANICE
Aren’t you going to talk to me?

DAWN
Should I?

JANICE
I don’t know, we were best friends

DAWN
Past tense

JANICE
Why did you stop talking to me?

DAWN
Jeez maybe because you told the entire school that I slept with a vampire

JANICE
Didn’t you

DAWN
Gross! Besides those kinds of rumours…cover up much?

JANICE
This isn’t what it looks like, I just met him

DAWN
Then it’s exactly what it looks like and Janice, I don’t care. Do what you want

JANICE
Dawn, I need help, something’s happening to me

DAWN
It’s called puberty and you’re past it

JANICE
No, Dawn I mean it – I’m not like this it’s parties or these guys they just make me crazy

DAWN
Right

JANICE
I’m serious

DAWN
(rolls eyes)
Have you seen RJ?

JANICE
He was looking for you

CUT TO.

INT – PARTY KITCHEN – NIGHT

Dawn comes down with Janice and sits her down at the table

DAWN
Stay here, Andrew look after her

ANDREW
Where are you going?

DAWN
We’re leaving, I need to tell RJ

CUT TO.

INT – SUMMERS HOME – NIGHT

BUFFY
That was not scary

WILLOW
It was so, you’ve just built an immunity to it

XANDER
Okay, Okay I’ve got one. It was a cold and stormy night in Sunnydale. The date was 1953, it was the grand opening of Sunnydale university.

FADE TO.

Dawn walking down the corridor of the hall.

XANDER (V.O)
A fraternity party. All the senior transfers and all the future freshman

Andrew and Janice wait patiently in the kitchen

XANDER (V.O)
The party was cut short when the police arrived. The frat boys had liquored up one of the girls, she collapsed when the sober party was guarding her.

JANICE
I don’t feel so good

XANDER (V.O)
Her sister was with her, she’d gone to collect her coat and tell her new boyfriend that she was leaving.

DAWN
RJ?

Dawn walks along clutching Janice’s coat

XANDER (V.O)
What happened next she couldn’t have predicted for her life, a strange gurgling from the closet

Dawn has her ear to the closet

DAWN
Is that you RJ? If you’re in there, I just had to say thanks for the party but Janice is upset and so…

XANDER (V.O)
I have to leave. She waited another moment before starting to walk away. Suddenly the door flings open. Her boyfriend stands over her reaking of alcohol. He glares at the girl, she takes a step back – his eyes are cold and empty as a smirk crawls across his face. He pulls a knife from behind his back and snarls…

RJ
The party’s just getting started

END OF PART TWO

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[> Subject: 8x04: Party Girl


Author:
VKMax
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Date Posted: 15:20:37 10/05/03 Sun

INT – PARTY – NIGHT

RJ
What’s the matter Dawnie, scared of a little old knife?

DAWN
RJ?

RJ
Come on, it doesn’t hurt too much it’s because I love you and we have to connect

DAWN
Connect?

RJ
You’re not gonna sleep with me and I’d be a criminal if I raped you, but I figure if you’re already dead then it won’t make much difference
(laughing)
then If I join you

XANDER (V.O)
We’ll be together forever

INT – SUMMERS HOME – NIGHT

XANDER
So she’s running through this house screaming as he chases her with that sinister look in his eyes. They get to the top of the stairs and she falls in this great panic

INT – PARTY – NIGHT

Dawn is lying at the bottom of the stairs, knocked out. RJ creeps down by her and goes to kiss her. Dawn’s eyes spring open as she kicks him in the stomach and launches him against the stairs.

RJ
Bitch!

Dawn holds her arm in pain and runs for the kitchen where Andrew and Janice remain

DAWN
We have to go!

JANICE
What happened to your arm?

ANDREW
What’s going on?

DAWN
RJ has completely lost it, he’s like possessed or something, we need to…

Dawn stops and look around in panic

DAWN
Where did every body go?

INT – SUMMERS HOUSE – NIGHT

XANDER
It’s just the three of them left

INT – PARTY NIGHT

ANDREW
They just took off, I think the cops were on their way or something

DAWN
Janice, what’s wrong?

JANICE
I…

Janice falls off of the stool and begins shaking

DAWN
Andrew get her out of here

ANDREW
What are you going to do?

DAWN
Just help her, call Buffy

ANDREW
Dawn…

Dawn grabs a knife from the side and clenches it tightly

DAWN
I’m gonna play his game

INT – SUMMERS HOUSE – NIGHT

BUFFY
That’s it? They’re all stood around the kitchen and then he slaughters them all? I could’ve got that for $3 at the store

WILLOW
It was kind of lame

XANDER
But you’re missing the point, it’s not the boyfriend that done it. It happens at that same party every ten years after that – the spirits or something

BUFFY
Wait, where was this frat house?

XANDER
The loner one, on Baker street

BUFFY
The one my Sisters at right now?

XANDER
What? No, it’s the one…
(pause)
Oh god!

BUFFY
Get in the car

CUT TO.

INT – PARTY – NIGHT

Dawn, keeping her arm folded close to her, slides along with her back to the wall and the knife in her hand.

She reaches the end of a long hall which turns into the dorm rooms. With no warning, not even a flicker, the lights go out.

CUT TO.

EXT – PARTY – NIGHT

Janice and Andrew look up as the lights go down

ANDREW
Oh god!

CUT TO.

INT – PARTY – NIGHT

RJ is creeping slowly along a corridor holding a baseball bat

RJ
Da-a-wn, come out, come out wherever you are…
(damn!)
Oh come on Dawn! Don’t be such a bore!

He turns the corner at a shuffling and expects to see Dawn standing there, a cat leaps out at him

RJ
Damn it!
(pissed)
Dawn you stupid bitch get your ass out here NOW!

Dawn springs out of the wardrobe and crashes into RJ tossing him down the stairs. She manages to grab the banister before falling with him.

RJ remains still at the bottom of the stairs Dawn cautiously approaches him, attempting to climb over him.

His eyes spring open causing Dawn to scream as he grabs her ankles. Using her other leg she boots him in the face and sprints up the stairs – after finding himself to his feet, he follows her

RJ
You shouldn’t have done that Dawn!

She continues running and skids into a side room, slamming the door and pushing a chest in front of it.

She’s trembling for a moment until RJ begins bashing at the door, the chest is slowly moving.

Dawn runs to the window and looks out for help. She can see Andrew and Janice but it’s way too high for her to risk climbing down in the rain.

DAWN
Andrew!

ANDREW
Dawn!
(worried)
Are you okay?

DAWN
Yeah I’m having a ball! Did you call Buffy?

ANDREW
There’s no phones

DAWN
Andrew, find a phone…

Dawn is knocked from the window as RJ breaks into the room and throws her over

ANDREW
Dawn!

He can hear her screaming as he lowers the bat to the floor

CUT TO.

INT – BUFFY’S CAR – NIGHT

BUFFY
Damn, stupid comatose snail car!

CUT TO.

INT – PARTY – NIGHT

Dawn rolls out of the way as RJ swings the bat down, just missing her head

DAWN
Stop it!

RJ
Come on, there’s nothing wrong with a little touching base

CUT TO.

EXT – PARTY – NIGHT

The rain continues to pour as Andrew steps onto a bench, looking up at the window

JANICE
Are you crazy? He’ll kill you!

ANDREW
If I don’t try then he’ll kill her! Run to the road, get help

Janice flaps about in panic before sprinting off into the night

ANDREW
Okay, Andrew you can do this

He steps up onto two piled up kegs and grabs his hands onto the ledge, hanging off.

ANDREW
Oh crap!

Andrew slips in the rain and is hanging from the ledge, he manages to pull himself up as one of his sneakers falls down into the pool.

CUT TO.

EXT – THE FRAT GROUNDS – NIGHT

Janice steps out into the road, waving her arms around frantically. Buffy’s car skids to avoid her

Buffy leaps out of the car, closely followed by Willow and Xander

BUFFY
Janice…
(rolls eyes)
Halloween plus Dawn in trouble, how did I not reach the Janice conclusion

JANICE
She needs help

WILLOW
What’s wrong?

JANICE
It’s RJ…

BUFFY
I knew it!

WILLOW
Did he by any chance try to kill her?

JANICE
Badly

XANDER
As opposed to the good kind of killing her?

WILLOW
Xander, not the time

BUFFY
Where is she?

JANICE
She’s up stairs – Andrew’s the only other person there

BUFFY
This miz just keeps getting better

Buffy begins running as the other’s remain standing

WILLOW
Buffy!

CUT TO.

INT – FRAT PARTY – NIGHT

RJ has Dawn cornered as Andrew spies in from the window

He bangs on the window to get RJ’s attention. As RJ goes to pull him in, Andrew smashes a plant pot from the window sil and knocks RJ out. Andrew tries to keep a grip of him, but while supporting himself – this is impossible and RJ slips from the ledge, falling three stories and crashing down.

Buffy arrives as RJ lands in the pool, she dives in immediately to stop him from drowning.

CUT TO.

INT – FRAT – PARTY – NIGHT

Andrew pulls himself through the window and falls down on the floor, soaking wet

ANDREW
Are…you
(breathless)
Are you okay?

DAWN
(laughs)
I’ll live, are you okay?

ANDREW
Sure, I think

DAWN
Andrew you just climbed three stories and saved my life in the rain, you hate rain

ANDREW
I did, didn’t I?

DAWN
My hero

Andrew smiles appreciatively as Willow and Xander crash through the door.

XANDER
Where is he?

WILLOW
Dawn…you’re okay…and, and Andrew who is also not dead

DAWN
We’ve got it under control

ANDREW
I saved her
(proud)
I’m the hero

Andrew helps Dawn back onto her feet, she flinches at the pain

ANDREW
We should get you to a hospital

DAWN
You can stop playing hero now Andrew

ANDREW
Really? Because I gotta pee.

END OF PART THREE

“The following day”

EXT – SUNNYDALE HIGHSCHOOL – DAY

Dawn is sat at lunch with Janice as Willow and Buffy watch on.

JANICE
You think she’s ever gonna let you out of her sight again?

DAWN
Only if she goes blind

CUT TO.

Buffy’s table

WILLOW
Buffy…she didn’t mean to

BUFFY
I know, but believe me when I say grounded is an understatement

WILLOW
What would you do if your Mom had grounded you every time your boyfriend was possessed?

BUFFY
She did!

RJ begins to walk across the yard with his head down, he has his hands in his pocket and he’s nervous

BUFFY
(to herself)
Don’t even try it Dawn

Dawn steps from her seat and walks over to RJ

WILLOW
She tried it

DAWN
RJ!

He tries to avoid her

DAWN
RJ I don’t blame you

RJ stops and throws his head back

DAWN
Are…are we okay?

RJ
How are you so cool? You don’t blame me…

DAWN
No, I don’t

RJ
Well, I blame you

Dawn looks shocked and hurt

RJ
Later Summers

RJ walks away, not looking back as Dawn stands in shock, slightly welled up.

CUT TO.

INT – SUNNYDALE HOSPITAL – NIGHT

NURSE
So, how many times do you think the Summer’s kid’s been here in the past two years?

DOCTOR
I think we should open her own ward

The Nurse laughs as she finishes making the bed

NURSE
Looks like she left her watch here, I’ll call them

Both leave the room, the doctor switches off the light. The bed sheet begins to glow before fading away completely, the metal legs of the bed rust and crumble.

END.
[> Subject: Re: 8x04: Party Girl


Author:
Nullafy
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Date Posted: 19:52:17 10/05/03 Sun

Good ep! Liking it much more now :D
[> Subject: Wild Party


Author:
MTsFan
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Date Posted: 16:32:41 10/08/03 Wed

Nice Halloween story. The recurring party and connection to Janice are great. The story is exciting and well told. I actually guessed that Dawn chaperone would be Andrew, but nobody could guess he'd be the hero.

Grounding Dawn is not so much great. What did she do that deserves punishment? Likewise what did she do that RJ blames her for?

Ooh. Teaser glow and rusting. More. More.
[> [> Subject: Lol


Author:
VKMax
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Date Posted: 16:46:33 10/08/03 Wed

The grounding is just Buffy turning into her Mom which she swore she'd never do (It'll be played on next episode) and RJ, also you kinda need to wait till thier next confrontation but it's nothing major just...weird stuff happens around her type thing.

DOF is one that's gonna leave you with questions
[> Subject: Hallowen one I like


Author:
Gemma- still don't faint
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Date Posted: 21:01:15 10/09/03 Thu

Was kinda hopeing that after Buffy made Dawn wear her clothes(munchkin laughs there) and Andrew dressed as Clark Kent thatit would be like the buffy one where they became their clothes , but this was MUCH better. All urban ledgendy


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