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Subject: 8x05 Sister


Author:
VKMax
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Date Posted: 19:12:19 10/09/03 Thu

Title: Reconstruction
Number: S8EP05: EP149

INT – SUNNYDALE HIGH SCHOOL – DAY

Dawn and Vi are strolling through the corridors grasping hold of books, totally ignoring the bell for class.

VI
Still grounded?

DAWN
No, I told Buffy she was turning into Mom and she practically grew stress lines in front of me

VI
What about RJ?

DAWN
Apparently weird things happen around my family and me…

VI
Your family?

DAWN
He got into woods “staff” profiles during detention

VI
Yikes

DAWN
I’ll get over it

WILLOW
Hey! Aren’t you guys supposed to be in class?

VI / DAWN
Free period / Lunch

DAWN
Lunch is a free period

WILLOW
I’m cutting class too, I have Freshman, they have bad spelling

Buffy comes running down the corridor, stopping with alert as she sees the guys

BUFFY
I was just, I was going to the bathroom

WILLOW
The outside bathroom?

BUFFY
Freshman?

WILLOW
Yep. Class cutters?

BUFFY
Sandy Quentin. Cordelia squared

WILLOW
Hey she’s supposed to be in my class
(oh)
Which I am cutting and so she can be where she likes to be

BUFFY
Dawn what are you doing here?

DAWN
Cutting class and living off your guilt trip slash paranoia for at least three more days

BUFFY
(no words, just open jaw)
Vi?

VI
Creepy Chemistry Teacher

The girls start to walk to the door as Principal Wood steps in front of it

PRINCIPAL WOOD
That’s funny. I didn’t hear the fire drill

Starring
Sarah Michelle Gellar
Nicholas Brendon
Michelle Trachtenberg
Tom Lenk
James Marsters
Alyson Hannigan as Willow

Guest Starring
Kaarina Aufranc, Felicia Day, Iyari Limon as Kennedy
And D.B Woodside as Principal Wood

INT – CITY HALL – DAY

Xander is sat at a desk looking less than happy

MAN
Sorry Mr. Harris, with your disability it’s not viable for us to employ you on a construction site, for your own safety as well as others

XANDER
It’s not a disability, so I can’t see from one eye, Frank wear’s glasses

MAN
Like I said Mr. Harris, I am sorry

CUT TO.

INT – MAGIC SHOP – DAY

Buffy, Giles, Willow, Kennedy and Andrew are dotted about all over the magic shop.

KENNEDY
Do you guys ever do class?

WILLOW
Free period

KENNEDY
Buffy?

BUFFY
Principal Wood let us play hooky on the condition we don’t tell the chancellor he joined us

GILES
I see you’re both taking the profession seriously

BUFFY
As serious as I took High School the first time round

GILES
Do you want a sarcastic reply?

BUFFY
I can imagine it

ANDREW
Mr. Giles can I open those boxes now?

GILES
For the sixty fifth time, No Andrew you can not open the boxes if you don’t want your face eaten off

BUFFY
Wow, strict boss

GILES
It contains a form of mystical insect, their skin’s can be used for a great number of spells and they’re very dangerous if you don’t know how to handle them

WILLOW
Also, the skin’s sell at $40 per square inch

GILES
Yes, that too

KENNEDY
Whoa, I’ve gotta get me some of those insects

WILLOW
No sweetie, I like your face, Insects biting it off – not so much with the liking

BUFFY
Kennedy, did you see Vi at all today?

KENNEDY
I thought she was playing hooky with you?

BUFFY
She went with Dawn but then she sort of, didn’t go with Dawn

KENNEDY
She probably wanted some alone time
(pause)
Home sick

ANDREW
Yeah, I miss home. So long ago, so far away

WILLOW
Don’t you still live there?

ANDREW
No!
(beat)
Yes

BUFFY
Well, fun as this little meeting was I guess I’ve got to…

XANDER
This sucks!

Xander comes stomping down the stairs and slumps himself down on the chair by Kennedy

BUFFY
I have to go back to work sometime, these kids need therapy, they go to Sunnydale!

XANDER
What? No, I didn’t get the contract

BUFFY
Oh

ANDREW
Poor Xander!

Andrew comes running from behind the counter and hugs Xander over his shoulders.

ANDREW
There, there little one, let it all out. Would you like a muffin?

Xander flings Andrew’s arms off

XANDER
Stop it! And, yes please

Andrew smiles and wonders over to the Muffin tray

WILLOW
Sweetie, there’ll be other jobs

GILES
Yes it’s not the end of the world, there’s still plenty of work needs doing round here…like I was thinking of getting new windows

XANDER
Replacing Windows? Am I asleep? Is this that recurring nightmare again?

GILES
No need to get snotty

Giles wonders over to the muffin tray.

BUFFY
What did they say?

XANDER
Three guesses

KENNEDY
You can’t work because of your not having an eye

WILLOW
Kennedy

KENNEDY
What?

XANDER
Got it in one

Xander takes a bite out of his muffin as Willow gives Kennedy a disapproving look and Buffy looks around not knowing what to say.

CUT TO.

INT – PRINCIPAL WOODS OFFICE – DAY

DAWN
You wanted to see me?

PRINCIPAL WOOD
Take a seat Dawn

DAWN
Is this about the hooky because you gave me permission and you can’t take that back

PRINCIPAL
No, no quite the opposite, it’s actually about your test scores

DAWN
Hey, I spent most of the final’s in a house full of thirty girls I have my excuses

PRINCIPAL
Apparently you don’t need to make them

DAWN
I’m expelled?

PRINCIPAL
Dawn, calm down – geez now I know it’s genetic. The school board have been impressed with your understanding of science and languages, obviously unlike me they don’t know where that came from, but, either way they’ve asked me to make you an offer

DAWN
What kind of offer?

PRINCIPAL
They’ve asked me to challenge you, to stimulate your mind

DAWN
Pop quiz?

PRINCIPAL
What would you say to graduating in just six months?

DAWN
Yay?

PRINCIPAL
What if I told you that this Friday could be your last day as a Junior and that, starting Monday you’ll be advanced to the senior class

DAWN
(speechless)

END OF PART ONE

EXT – GRAVE YARD – NIGHT

Buffy, Vi and Kennedy are walking through the grounds at the dark of night.

KENNEDY
Question, why are we here when there’s no people to protect?

BUFFY
Answer
(thinks)
After a year or so you’ll learn that nothing makes sense so you just stick to routine

KENNEDY
But…

BUFFY
I know. None of it’s logic but at least this way we stop them from even having the chance to find people to harm

Vi is thrown to the ground as a Vampire leaps from the tree and knocks her down. He vampire spin kicks Kennedy in the face and swings from a tree branch bringing her feet into Buffy’s face and knocking her against a tomb stone.

KENNEDY
What the…

Kennedy launches at the Vampire (We’re gonna call her Daisy) swinging two switchblades through the air. She tears it’s arm open but is quickly thrown into a tree, head first.

Buffy runs at her but it knocked straight back with her own weapon. Vi grabs a stake and slams it towards Daisy, she ducks it and pins Vi up against a tree before stopping instantly and running away.

BUFFY
Where did she go?

VI
I…I don’t know

CUT TO.

INT – SUMMERS HOUSE – NIGHT

Spike comes wondering down the stairs, expecting to be alone he’s wearing nothing in the way of clothes. Yawning having just woken up. He wonders through to the kitchen to find Willow

WILLOW
Whoa

SPIKE
Sorry

Spike remains casual, he’s not one to embarrass easily. He just grabs a tea towel and holds it in front of himself as he grabs a glass of blood from the refrigerator

He smiles and nods as he wonders back to the stairs. Minutes later as he steps out of his room (now wearing pants) he heads to the bathroom stopping in shock at Dawn’s bedroom door.

Willow turns up the stairs carrying a tray of milk and cookies. She drops them as her eyes widen

WILLOW
Did I drink funny milk?

SPIKE
Not unless I drank it too. What is that?

Both of them look in astonishment at the amazing green light coming from beneath the door. Willow taps gently and waits a moment before entering. Both again stare in shock at the sight ahead of them.

Dawn’s skin is split in several places as if she were clay and she’d been dropped. From the cracks the green light appears

WILLOW
We have to find Buffy

SPIKE
Are you mad? We can’t tell Buffy about this until we know what it is

WILLOW
I’d say it’s something more than mumps

SPIKE
I’d say my chip isn’t the only thing that wasn’t meant to last this long

Both stare at each other with fear and confusion.

CUT TO.

INT – XANDERS APARTMENT – NIGHT

ANDREW
Cheer up Yogi

XANDER
Will you stop calling me that?

ANDREW
But you’re our Xander bear!

XANDER
Xander bear’s feeling growly today

ANDREW
Ouch! Hey why don’t you go and see Nancy then you can growl in a good way

XANDER
No, I’m not going to do that

ANDREW
Why not? Is this because of Anya? Because remember her letter…she’ll haunt you if you forget her, but she’ll haunt you even more if you end up a lonely old man living with Andrew, um, living with me and never moving on. Plus you’ve exceeded her time span

XANDER
She had a time span?

ANDREW
She allowed three month’s of heavy grieving, then a month of light treading
(beat)
It’s November 8th, that’s like almost six months.

XANDER
Strangely her schedule isn’t working out too well for me

ANDREW
If you don’t get your butt out of the house then that just means there’ll be twice as many Yogi hugs!

XANDER
Okay, I’m gone!

CUT TO.

INT – MANOR – NIGHT

Vi is sat up in the main room, the other six remaining slayers (two new arrivals) are in bed.

BUFFY
Something you want to tell me

Vi turns in shock to see Buffy standing behind her

VI
What are you doing here? It’s three a m

BUFFY
I’m curious as to why that vampire ran away from you

VI
I had a stake

BUFFY
I had an axe and a reputation

VI
Guess it didn’t like red heads?

BUFFY
Don’t be cute Vi. Something’s wrong with you and I need to know what it is so I can help you

VI
Right, I forgot you’re a super hero and you can help everyone with everything

BUFFY
I never said that, but fine, I can’t help you if you won’t help me

Buffy begins to walk away as Vi begins to cry

Buffy walks back, not moving her facial expression. She simply let’s Vi fall into her lap and cry it out.

BUFFY
Vi

VI
It’s Daisy

BUFFY
Who’s Daisy?

VI
My Sister

END OF PART TWO.

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[> Subject: 8x05 Sister


Author:
VKMax
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Date Posted: 19:13:36 10/09/03 Thu

INT – MAGIC SHOP – NIGHT

SPIKE
You break locks with your big goddess bambi eyes but you can’t unlock the gas station so I can get a light?

WILLOW
That would be criminal!

SPIKE
(rolls his eyes)
What I we going to find in ‘ere anyways? You reckon Dawn’s gonna be in a bunch of old books do ya?

WILLOW
No, it’s the safest place I can do a blood test where I know the owner won’t want me arrested…or at least won’t press charges

SPIKE
Blood?

WILLOW
There was an old band aid in Dawn’s trash can

SPIKE
You’re disturbing

WILLOW
Resourceful!

SPIKE
Whatever, just do the bloody thing so we can get back before Buffy does

GILES (O.S)
Yes because that would be the worst thing you could imagine happening

WILLOW
Giles…

SPIKE
Great

GILES
Silent alarm leads back to my new apartment, detects paranormal invasion, strangely a vampire and a goddess don’t fall into the category of your standard burglars

WILLOW
Sorry, we’re going to leave now

SPIKE
We’re bloody well not

GILES
Perhaps you can tell me why you’re so keen to stay Spike

SPIKE
Actually, you know what? I’m feeling tired all of a sudden, yawn! See there I go

GILES
It’s started hasn’t it?

WILLOW
You knew?

SPIKE
You mean, you’re not just visiting?

GILES
Am I ever?

WILLOW
Do you know what’s happening? Why didn’t you say something Giles?

GILES
Because I had to be sure, I had to see it for myself

SPIKE
You couldn’t have seen it a bit sooner, so we had time to stop the bleedin’ thing?

GILES
You can’t stop it, I’ve seen enough to know that

SPIKE
Look again

GILES
I’m sorry Spike but it doesn’t matter how many times we are to look at this. When the monks created Dawn, when they built her they were lead to believe that if Glory didn’t use Dawn, the slayer would terminate her existence upon Glory’s defeat to avoid any temptation of Glory’s return

SPIKE
But she’s not even the key anymore!

GILES
So we assumed

WILLOW
(sad)
Dawn always says that it makes an ass out of you and me

SPIKE
So what? That’s it? We just watch her crumble?

GILES
(cleaning glasses)
I don’t know Spike, I don’t know

WILLOW
W…but how do we tell Buffy?

BUFFY (O.S)
Tell Buffy what?

Buffy is stood in the door way with Vi

WILLOW
Buffy!
(panic)
What are you doing here? So late and not alone!

BUFFY
I saw the light on when I was passing, guys what’s going on?

Giles and Willow are lost. Spike steps up

SPIKE
We wanted it to be a surprise. We’re planning your birthday already, we were deciding who was going to tell you we had nothing planned

BUFFY
No surprise birthdays, ever!
(pause)
You’re all okay?

WILLOW / GILES / SPIKE
Sure, oh yeah / yes / yep

BUFFY
(something’s up)
Okay, I’ll see you at home

Buffy walks away and leaves them standing

SPIKE
We’re never going to be able to tell her this, never

CUT TO.

EXT – ESPRESSO PUMP – DAY

Nancy looks around waiting patiently for Xander. He’s sat in the car on the opposite side of the street, watching her.

ANDREW
Get out or I’ll make a scene

XANDER
Okay, deep breath

ANDREW
You’ll do fine! Just don’t open it with a joke that’ll almost certainly turn her into a demon and get you kidnapped

XANDER
Got it. Oh god I’m getting dating advice from the virgin

ANDREW
Always assuming

XANDER
What?

ANDREW
Go!

Xander steps out of the car and slowly walks over to Nancy

NANCY
I was beginning to think I’d been stood up

XANDER
Being stood up is better than being knocked down
(to himself)
Dammit!

NANCY
(laughs)
Nervous?

XANDER
A little

NANCY
Don’t be

XANDER
So, what’s the plan for the quote “Nancy’s day of fun”

NANCY
It was my third glass of wine

XANDER
(joke)
Ah a drinker!

NANCY
(stern look)
Yes I spent seven months in rehab for alcoholism
(off Xander’s look)
Joke

XANDER
That’s…that’s a good one

Xander follows Nancy down the street looking even more nervous than before

CUT TO.

INT – SUMMERS HOUSE – DAY

DAWN
Buffy!

BUFFY
Dawn, in here now!

DAWN
What did I do?

Dawn enters itching her arms through her sweater

BUFFY
Why didn’t you ell me you’re a senior?

DAWN
Slipped my mind?

BUFFY
Oh really? I hope you don’t think this means you can have sex!

DAWN
I am not doing the talk with you

BUFFY
Why do you keep itching your arm?

DAWN
I don’t know, did you use cheap fabric conditioner?

BUFFY
Let me see

Dawn peels off her sweater to reveal her arm covered in three band aids, a rough rash covering the rest of the skin

BUFFY
Oh my god, Dawn we’ve gotta get a doctor to see this

DAWN
It’s probably just left over from wearing the cast for so long

BUFFY
A week Dawn! That’s not long enough to make you the snake skinned lady!

DAWN
Way with the sympathy. Sis

BUFFY
Show me the other arm

Dawn resists, so Buffy grabs the arm and holds it out

BUFFY
You didn’t have a cast on this arm

Willow walks into the room

BUFFY
Willow look at this!

Willow turns her eyes away

BUFFY
Willow!

Willow indicates head phones in her ears and shrugs as if to say “sorry, can’t hear you”

Willow walks out and rushes up the stairs and into Spike’s and Buffy’s room.

WILLOW
Spike! Wake up!

SPIKE
Um, I’m not watching the television in my sleep Will

WILLOW
Buffy’s just examined Dawn’s arms…it’s bad

SPIKE
Bad?

WILLOW
Cracked skin, blood, rashes

SPIKE
She’s literally crumbling?

WILLOW
We need to go to Giles

SPIKE
Slight matter of bursting into flames pet

WILLOW
Grab a blanket

Buffy enters

BUFFY
Where are you going?

WILLOW/SPIKE
Nowhere/Shopping

BUFFY
Will, I hope this whole gay thing wasn’t a charade to get Spike into bed

WILLOW
Ha imagine that!

BUFFY
Guys I don’t want a birthday party

SPIKE
Tough

CUT TO.

INT – MANOR – NIGHT

KENNEDY
Vi, come on we’ve gotta get the vamp from last night

VI
I’m going alone

KENNEDY
No way, you saw what she did

BUFFY
Kennedy

Buffy nods at her

KENNEDY
Fine, get yourself killed

BUFFY
Kennedy, shut up and let her go

KENNEDY
Excuse me?

BUFFY
I think you heard what I said
(to Vi)
you ready?

Vi nods nervously

BUFFY
I’ve got your back.

Buffy hands a cross bow to Vi

BUFFY
You know what you need to do

Kennedy looks on furiously as Buffy follows Vi out.

CUT TO.

EXT – GRAVE YARD – NIGHT

BUFFY
She knows you’ll be here?

VI
She knows

BUFFY
I’m right here okay?

Vi nods nervously and walks out into the open.

VI
Daisies I know you’re here!

DAISY
Vivian

Daisy steps out from behind the tree

DAISY
Come and give your big Sister a kiss

VI
You’re not my sister anymore

DAISY
Sure I am, I know everything about you like only a sister could. I know when you’re sick because I can tell, I’d know if you were dying because I could feel it.

Buffy looks up from the bushes

DAISY
Guess what I can feel now?

Vi frowns as Daisy looks up in shock, she has an arrow through her chest as she dissolves

VI
Mom always said you didn’t know when to stop talking

BUFFY
Congratulations

VI
For killing my sister?

BUFFY
For doing what you had to do, for becoming a slayer.

Buffy hands Vi the scythe

BUFFY
Congratulations Vi, you’ve graduated.

END OF PART THREE

INT – SUMMERS HOUSE – NIGHT

Willow is reading over the blood test results she doesn’t look happy. Kennedy enters and sits down in Willow’s light

WILLOW
Kennedy you’re in my light

KENNEDY
Sorry

WILLOW
Can you please move?

Kennedy moves quietly

KENNEDY
Buffy doesn’t like me does she?

WILLOW
Not now sweetie

KENNEDY
Right, scooby stuff

Willow ignores her

KENNEDY
Why do you keep ignoring me? I’m trying to tell you something and it’s like it doesn’t matter

WILLOW
(Stressed)
Because despite what you were bought up to believe, you’re not the centre of the universe!

Kennedy is obviously taken back

WILLOW
I’m sorry I didn’t mean that

KENNEDY
Right

Sad, Kennedy backs away to the door

WILLOW
Kennedy

Willow runs down the stairs after her. Kennedy crashes into Buffy who is coming through the door. Buffy stops Willow following

BUFFY
Leave her.

WILLOW
Buffy…

BUFFY
Call Giles and tell him to get here, now!
(beat)
Where’s Spike?

TEN MINUTES LATER

Giles, Spike and Willow are sat in front of Buffy as she paces the floor

BUFFY
Why are you doing this?

GILES
Because it’s true Buffy

BUFFY
(crying and worked up)
No! No it is NOT true! You’re making this up

SPIKE
Buffy…

BUFFY
Don’t touch me! God what is with you people…this is sick

WILLOW
Buffy I know, it’s wrong and it shouldn’t happen but…

BUFFY
It won’t happen! I won’t let it even if I have to die again

GILES
Buffy that’s not possible, it’s not about the blood

BUFFY
No, no it’s not about the blood it’s about all of you lying to me and doing things behind my back it’s about my sister!

Dawn is walking down the stairs, her arms now wrapped in bandages, she stops at the mention of her name

BUFFY
It’s about you telling me that she’s about to die!

END.
[> Subject: The is wicked as in it's good AND evil


Author:
Gemma- ok you can faint now I've caught up!!!!!!!!
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Date Posted: 21:22:50 10/09/03 Thu

*hands MTsFan a stiff drink for when he reads this*

Poor Dawny. Reading this now. I'm amazed I haven't seen this brought up before about Dawn. I am kinda hoping Kennedy decides she needs to leave and be elsewhere..but that's the evil me talking :)
Much with the likeing of this series.
[> Subject: Thanks, Gemma, I needed that


Author:
MTsFan
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Date Posted: 19:38:54 10/10/03 Fri

Dawn with that kind of trouble makes for an interesting story, whether is over quickly or takes a few eps. There has already been glowing and rusting for quite a while. The mystery deepens about how they will solve it. I'll really need a drink if they don't solve it.

I like the development of Vi with having to dust her vamp!sister. Buffy's right. That kind of decision is what a Slayer has to do.

Kennedy is another story. There she goes again taking a negative attitude. When she gets pushed aside, it looks from here like she deserves it.

Good story. Now get on with the cliffhangy Dawn stuff.
[> Subject: Re: 8x05 Sister


Author:
revivingophelia
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Date Posted: 12:58:45 10/12/03 Sun

Okay, I just read the first five episodes in one sitting, and I'm really enjoying this. I loved the bit with them all playing hooky. Very cute... I liked the stuff between Willow and Spike as well. And poor Dawn. I'm looking forward to seeing how you resolve the fact that Dawn is crumbling.


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