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Subject: 8x14: My Girl (1) Author: VKMax [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] Date Posted: 17:25:32 12/30/03 Tue TVAIRDATE: February 11th 2004 INT – BUFFYS LIVING ROOM – DAY GILES I think you need to explain some things to me BUFFY I think I do Both of them sit and stare at the ground in silence GILES Today BUFFY Right Buffy stands and paces a little BUFFY Christmas GILES I hardly think Christmas is an appropriate topic for discussion right now BUFFY Christmas is when he came back – just before. He bumped into me at the mall when Dawn was an elf and… GILES Dawns an elf? BUFFY Gonna let me finish before next Christmas? GILES Sorry, do continue BUFFY Anyone, things went on and last week, Dawn got taken to hospital and I was on my way there so he could see her when I saw Spike and he saw me slay a demon that attacked us GILES Spike saw you slay a demon – this is how this started? BUFFY Hank saw me slay a demon – anyway, he then said he was going to take Dawn away and this was all in the same night that Tara came back from the dead and… GILES Sorry to keep interrupting Buffy, I’ve taken this all in but…Tara? BUFFY You didn’t speak to her last night? GILES Between the sleeping and waking to threaten your Father, no I didn’t (beat) Did Willow…Is she… BUFFY Willow did and no she’s not, it was an accident – she was doing some form of spell to help Dawn keep things together and she used the wrong shirt or something, I don’t really get it – it’s been a hell of a week. GILES So it seems BUFFY Giles what am I going to do about him? GILES Right, yes, um – leave that to me? BUFFY Okay – what are you going to do about him? GILES Frankly I have no idea – but I imagine it will be extremely sarcastic and British Long silence BUFFY Cool. CUT TO. ‘Stockton, California’ A young woman is fighting a team of vampires outside a club as she hears screaming. She quickly dusts the vampires before running to assist a blonde woman – late twenties – Glory GIRL I heard screaming – are you okay? GLORY Sweetie, I’m more than okay Glory smashes the girl down to the floor – a little shaken, the slayer leaps up and heads to attack Glory who spins her round by the arm, twisting it to a snap GLORY I’m friggin’ perfect Glory digs her fingers into the girls head as light pours out – instead of letting the girl live a state she snaps her neck GLORY Sweet memories… (beat) You have a sister slayer in L.A…what do you know? I was just on my way Starring Sarah Michelle Gellar Nicholas Brendon Michelle Trachtenberg Tom Lenk Amber Benson James Marsters as Spike & Alyson Hannigan as Willow Special Guest Star Anthony Stewart Head Guest Starring Clare Kramer, Felicia Day, Dean Butler, Thad Luckibill with Iyari Limon, Amy Acker as Fred and D.B Woodside as Principal Wood INT – SUNNYDALE HIGH – DAY Dawn is strolling the corridors with Vi as students go by their every day lives DAWN It’s good to be back here you know? VI You know where we are right? DAWN Come on, like you wouldn’t miss this place if you died tomorrow Silence DAWN Sorry, I didn’t mean…sorry VI It’s okay, I know what you mean and I would…miss it, not die tomorrow, I hope DAWN You’ll be cool. You’ve got the gang and trust me you can kick ass VI Even lop sided hell god ass? (off look) Spike DAWN We don’t know for sure that it’s Glory doing this VI But all the signs point that way DAWN That’s true but – hey we crushed her once VI Didn’t Buffy die? DAWN Well, yeah but…shh VI Okay new topic! You spoken to your Dad lately? DAWN He swang by for a couple of threats this morning before going to see his lawyer in L.A or something like that – he’s an idiot VI What about RJ? DAWN Not so much an idiot but… VI I meant did you speak to him? DAWN Oh, not yet but I will – today, I guess VI Nervous DAWN A little, if a little was doubled a few times VI Don’t freak out – he’s your sort of potentially former step brother – it’s not that twisted and you were grinding like a slut with him before he became that (off look) Buffy DAWN Argh! CUT TO. INT – MAGIC BOX – DAY Tara is sat at the table with Xander. Andrew is staring at her from the counter TARA W-why doe she keep looking at me? XANDER He thinks you want to eat his brains TARA Oh XANDER Play it up, it’ll stop him from bugging you for a few days Tara gives a smile to humour Xander XANDER I know, I know I’m losing the touch TARA No! Not feeling too humourful today XANDER How’s Tara’s first day of life been? TARA Lively, figuratively and literally XANDER Much as could be expected Long pause TARA Sorry to, ss-sorry to hear a-about Anya XANDER (quiet) It’s okay (chirping up) Sorry to hear about you! But hey look how that turned out – there’s hope yet Tara laughs a little XANDER See, I am magic TARA Thanks, for being regular with me, Willow’s… They both look over and see her manically cleaning everything in sight TARA Andrews… Andrews ducks down after staring – trying to look like he’s busy TARA Special and Buffy’s…she’s the same. XANDER Good the same? TARA Distant the same CUT TO. INT – KITCHEN – DAY GILES Don’t you agree? Buffy’s staring into the air GILES That I should cover the house in pink wallpaper and dance around in a silver gown BUFFY Sounds pretty GILES Buffy! BUFFY Sorry, what? END OF PART ONE ‘Los Angeles, California’ Fred is walking through the streets as she comes across a young dead woman down an alley – her stake is on the floor next to her CUT TO. INT – WOLFRAM & HART – DAY Fred is stood in the lab, talking on the phone FRED Angel is was horrible – she’d had her eyes ripped out, she was so young (pause) I don’t know, fifteen – maybe fourteen (pause) I know, I’ll call Willow…hang on I have another call (pause) Hello? Buffy…hey what’s…yeah I’m on the other line to Angel what’s… (pause) You don’t have to be so rude about it…hello? Fred shrugs and switches back to Angels call FRED Get ready – Hurricane Buffy’s on the phone (beat) Yes, that’s why there was a beeping in your ear CUT TO. INT – SUMMERS KITCHEN – DAY BUFFY Thanks Buffy hangs up the phone and walks back over to Giles BUFFY Turns out that little fit I just had, yeah I could feel death – but it wasn’t mine GILES Buffy? BUFFY Faith said she got a call about a slayer in Stockton this morning – Giles she’s doing a round the world tour GILES Another slayer? BUFFY Fred found one this morning in L.A…I was going to ask Angel to keep watch but I guess it’s too late. There are three slayers in Los Angeles, he’s going to try and find the other two tonight – Gunn’s on it now. GILES Gunn against Glory? BUFFY Gunn and Wolfram & Hart, she’s on her way back here Giles GILES You definitely think its Glory? BUFFY Oh I know it’s her! Why come back here Giles? She must know that we’ll be waiting for her GILES I don’t think she’d be afraid of that BUFFY We had the power to bring her back, we have the power to send her away – she has nothing to gain by coming back, by killing slayers GILES Except now – she’s getting revenge on you without having to receive a beating BUFFY She wants to kill these girls – she can go through me and Willow, fighter to fighter, goddess to skanky bitch! GILES What do you propose we do? BUFFY Get the sleeping bags Giles… Buffy starts to walk off BUFFY We’re bringing them back in GILES You sure that’s wise BUFFY I don’t care. I’m going and collecting them myself – I’m leaving tonight. GILES What about… (goes quiet and into himself) Your father… CUT TO. INT – SUNNYDALE HIGH – DAY Everyone’s leaving Willow’s class as Dawn tags behind DAWN Hey WILLOW Uh, hey Dawn DAWN You’re all spacey, not the Kevin kind WILLOW What, oh Kevin Spacey – joke ha DAWN Will… WILLOW Sorry, I’m just in a rush, want to get home to Tara and all DAWN Oh, I saw her at lunch she seemed okay WILLOW Wh…where was she? DAWN Xander’s taken her back to his place for drinks and meeting Nancy – she seemed keen WILLOW Oh Willow slowly sits back at her table WILLOW Keen is good DAWN Will, she’ll be okay WILLOW I…I know I’m just, you know she’s all back and I’m all here and not there and… DAWN I have to get some work from Robin, I’ll tell him you threw up WILLOW Would you? DAWN But this means you’re making your special spaghetti tonight WILLOW From the tin it is?! Willow kisses Dawn on the cheek WILLOW Thank you! She runs off, bumping into RJ WILLOW Sorry… RJ watches as she runs down the corridor RJ She’s…excited DAWN Yeah RJ Vi said you wanted to talk to me Dawn looks over RJs shoulder and sees Vi waving DAWN Did she? END OF PART TWO [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ]

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[> Subject: 8x14: My Girl (1) Author: VKMax [ Edit | View ] Date Posted: 17:26:38 12/30/03 Tue INT – RJS HOUSE – NIGHT HANK It doesn’t work like that! He can’t just stay out ‘til all hours Bev! BEVERLY He’s my son Hank you don’t tell me how to mother him after the way you treated yours HANK What did you say? BEVERLY Nothing. HANK It didn’t sound like nothing to me – you have no clue about me and my Daughters! RJ (O.S) What’s going on? How come he’s back so fast? BEVERLY Nothing, nothing…it’s…he… RJ Why are you holding her arm? HANK RJ she said it’s nothing now leave us to talk RJ You can talk once we have…about Dawn Hank stares back at her as the phone rings CUT TO. INT – WOLFRAM AND HART – NIGHT FRED We’ve got both the other slayers here (beat) She is? (pause) Tomorrow…but I thought…I’ll check Fred wonders over to an office door and leans in (we don’t see in because we can’t afford to get Boreanaz on for two lines) Fred nods her head and walks back to the phone FRED Willow…yeah, apparently Buffy called – she’s collecting them tonight and then they’re heading on. Faith’s bringing Kennedy and the others over now. CUT TO. EXT – MINI BUS – NIGHT Kennedy is stood at the side of the bus holding a tire – she’s talking into the door KENNEDY The borders just down the street okay – I’ll be twenty minutes or so CUT TO. EXT – LOS ANGELES/SUNNYDALE BORDER – NIGHT Buffy is tapping her steering wheel impatiently as she waits for traffic to move she’s whistling ‘where do we go from here’ BUFFY Come on…god this is slower than Harmony A large crushing sound comes from behind, anxiously, Buffy stares out of the rear view mirror BUFFY …Okay Buffy’s losing it (beat) Again Suddenly the roof comes tearing off of her car to reveal Glory GLORY Hey sweetheart did you miss me? Glory grabs Buffy by the shoulders and tosses her over the top of the barrier, crashing to the floor, Buffy’s face is bleeding Glory leaps over and lands next to her GLORY Let’s stick to L.A shall we – so much classier CUT TO. INT – BAR – NIGHT Hank warily walks in to the only lit area of an old abandoned bar as he hears glasses clinking together GILES Drink? Hank jumps back as Giles, in a flannel shirt, sleeves rolled up, smoking a cigar…lines up some shots HANK No thanks GILES Suit yourself HANK Why did you call me? GILES I figured we should have a word about the girls HANK My girls GILES If you say so Giles indicates a stool on which Hank cautiously takes a seat GILES Don’t worry – If I was going to kill you, you’d be crying on the floor in a pool of your own fluids by now Giles stares at Hank hard, Hanks nervous and sweating – Giles bursts into laughter as Hank edges uneasily GILES Relax Giles necks the whiskey shot GILES I am…quite a lot actually CUT TO. EXT – ROADSIDE – NIGHT Glory grabs Buffy again and tosses her into a parked jeep. In pain, Buffy struggles to her feet and storms towards Glory BUFFY You have no idea how much you just pissed me off – bitch GLORY I think I can guess Glory goes to punch Buffy – Buffy blocks it and head butts Glory before doing a back flip and catching Glory’s chin on her foot. Buffy sprints back to the car, Glory chasing her When she gets there she pops the hood and grabs the Scythe but Glory’s gone… She looks around frantically but nothing – just scared [people] staring back at her KENNEDY Buffy? Buffy spins to see Kennedy walking towards her holding a tire BUFFY W…Kennedy? KENNEDY The bus brown down on the other side of the border – I had to get a spare from the garage Kennedy indicates the store at the side of the road KENNEDY What happened to your face? BUFFY Do you have a phone on you? KENNEDY Who do you need to call? BUFFY I need Willow to take the other girls back to Sunnydale – you’re coming to Los Angeles with me KENNEDY I don’t understand BUFFY You will CUT TO. INT – HIGHSCHOOL – NIGHT Willow is sat at her desk again, marking papers WILLOW Stupid Principal Wood and his stupid CCTV! ROBIN I’m sat directly opposite you WILLOW So? ROBIN Wow. I guess the students really are rubbing off on you WILLOW Sorry it’s just…Tara’s back and everything I just wanted to ROBIN Look, it’s Friday in…four days you can mark the papers at the weekend just don’t make a habit of this okay WILLOW No, it’s okay I’ll do them now ROBIN Willow… WILLOW Thanks ROBIN It’s all good. I wanted to get home myself, I just figured I’d punish you for getting Dawn to lie again – lying doesn’t pay off. You know how easy it is to get around me if you just whimper a while WILLOW I know, I mean – thanks The two of the begin walking to the exit as the door slams shut WILLOW That’s… Willow turns round – all the doors down the corridor shut. ROBIN Okay… Both look around as the lights go down ROBIN Not loving this too much CUT TO. INT – BAR – NIGHT Giles is now, in a word, drunk. He sits staring at Hank laughing GILES You still think you can claim yourself as their father? HANK Legally yes GILES Morally? No wait – you don’t have that word in your vocabulary HANK I don’t have to listen to this – I’m leaving GILES See, I don’t think you are Giles grabs Hank and pins him up against the wall GILES Not until I’ve said what I came to say END OF PART THREE INT – XANDERS – NIGHT Xander comes out of the bathroom to a lonely Tara XANDER Sorry about that – Nancy can’t handle her drink and…where’s Andrew? TARA He got scared and ran to his room XANDER Oh well…hope you had a good night TARA It was n-nice XANDER Right like the plague, just with more vomit TARA Xander, it was nice meeting her she’s a lot like A… (beat) A n-nice p-person XANDER Right… TARA I think it’s time to call it a night XANDER You want me to call you a cab? TARA No it’s okay I…seeing you two together made me think a little, I have to see Willow CUT TO. INT – BAR – NIGHT GILES Now, I believe the trouble you’ve caused these past two months has been none to pleasing to either of my girls HANK Your girls? What are you some kind of perve? Giles pushes his arm against Hanks neck GILES I’ll thank you to shut up while I’m threatening you Hanks face is going red as Giles continues GILES Now there’s two ways we can play this game of yours…my way or the one where you sensibly leave town and actually get to walk again Hank is trying to mumble words as his face gets redder, Giles is pushing harder as suddenly Hank forces him away and clutches his chest GILES Mr. Summers… Hank falls against the table before hitting the ground, still clutching his chest CUT TO. EXT – ROADSIDE – NIGHT Buffy and Kennedy are marching toward the van BUFFY Where’s Faith? KENNEDY She’s got another van – they were right behind us BUFFY Call her, tell her to… Buffy swings the doors open, all eight slayers have been torn to pieces BUFFY Changing the tire? Buffy turns and gives Kennedy a cold stare, Kennedy doesn’t get it as she looks into the van in horror To Be Continued…

[> Subject: Ooh. Go Giles Author: MTsFan [ Edit | View ] Date Posted: 08:52:34 12/31/03 Wed He wouldn't have to be drunk to refer to the Summers sisters as "My girls" and I can understand the feeling you're putting into him. Drat. I thought Hank was Glory's host. It would have explained his need for Dawn. Of course, that might not be a heart attack he's having, it could be Glory trying to get out. But then, Glory was elsewhere gutting Slayers. It works the way you make Kennedy the prime suspect now. I like the way this story is staying together as new threads, eg. Tara, are added. Keep it up.

[> Subject: Re: 8x14: My Girl (1) Author: Nullafy [ Edit | View ] Date Posted: 01:55:58 01/05/04 Mon Wowa! <3 Onto the next one!

[> Subject: Agree with MTsFan go Giles, go giles(dances groovily) Author: Gemma [ Edit | View ] Date Posted: 18:16:10 01/11/04 Sun This has fast become my fav of your fics and this opening is just an example of why. Hell of a lot of people as the cast, but I know you’ll be able to do it. Good to know that Spikes not Glory though!..hmm that leaves Kennedy as the one I think, but as she’s too easy a choice I know there’ll be a twist. LOL Angel is how old and he didn’t get what the beeping meant giggles Oh no all those girls under one roof again…maybe Glory can get through a few more so there won’t be as many. LOL I’m evil for hoping that aren’t I. Beverly is more inciteful than Hank knew. I’m sure that if DB knew he was needed for this fic then he would’ve done it pro bono. Now this is either to make us think that Kennedy is Glory or to keep us guessing until a twist comes along. My goodness you’re brilliant. You go Giles!!!!!! Stnd up for your father rights. You’ve been more of a father to those girls than he ever has!. Ok can you tell I’m rooting for Giles? Oh bugger this doesn’t look good for Giles…but at least Hank will be out of the way if you look for a bright side. ARGGHH!!!!!!!! You tisted again now it looks like Kennedy is Glory again but I don’t know whether it’s her or not!. Love this