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Subject: 8x14: My Girl (1)


Author:
VKMax
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Date Posted: 17:26:38 12/30/03 Tue
In reply to: VKMax 's message, "8x14: My Girl (1)" on 17:25:32 12/30/03 Tue

INT – RJS HOUSE – NIGHT

HANK
It doesn’t work like that! He can’t just stay out ‘til all hours Bev!

BEVERLY
He’s my son Hank you don’t tell me how to mother him after the way you treated yours

HANK
What did you say?

BEVERLY
Nothing.

HANK
It didn’t sound like nothing to me – you have no clue about me and my Daughters!

RJ (O.S)
What’s going on? How come he’s back so fast?

BEVERLY
Nothing, nothing…it’s…he…

RJ
Why are you holding her arm?

HANK
RJ she said it’s nothing now leave us to talk

RJ
You can talk once we have…about Dawn

Hank stares back at her as the phone rings

CUT TO.

INT – WOLFRAM AND HART – NIGHT

FRED
We’ve got both the other slayers here
(beat)
She is?
(pause)
Tomorrow…but I thought…I’ll check

Fred wonders over to an office door and leans in (we don’t see in because we can’t afford to get Boreanaz on for two lines)

Fred nods her head and walks back to the phone

FRED
Willow…yeah, apparently Buffy called – she’s collecting them tonight and then they’re heading on. Faith’s bringing Kennedy and the others over now.

CUT TO.

EXT – MINI BUS – NIGHT

Kennedy is stood at the side of the bus holding a tire – she’s talking into the door

KENNEDY
The borders just down the street okay – I’ll be twenty minutes or so

CUT TO.

EXT – LOS ANGELES/SUNNYDALE BORDER – NIGHT

Buffy is tapping her steering wheel impatiently as she waits for traffic to move she’s whistling ‘where do we go from here’

BUFFY
Come on…god this is slower than Harmony

A large crushing sound comes from behind, anxiously, Buffy stares out of the rear view mirror

BUFFY
…Okay Buffy’s losing it
(beat)
Again

Suddenly the roof comes tearing off of her car to reveal Glory

GLORY
Hey sweetheart did you miss me?

Glory grabs Buffy by the shoulders and tosses her over the top of the barrier, crashing to the floor, Buffy’s face is bleeding

Glory leaps over and lands next to her

GLORY
Let’s stick to L.A shall we – so much classier

CUT TO.

INT – BAR – NIGHT

Hank warily walks in to the only lit area of an old abandoned bar as he hears glasses clinking together

GILES
Drink?

Hank jumps back as Giles, in a flannel shirt, sleeves rolled up, smoking a cigar…lines up some shots

HANK
No thanks

GILES
Suit yourself

HANK
Why did you call me?

GILES
I figured we should have a word about the girls

HANK
My girls

GILES
If you say so

Giles indicates a stool on which Hank cautiously takes a seat

GILES
Don’t worry – If I was going to kill you, you’d be crying on the floor in a pool of your own fluids by now

Giles stares at Hank hard, Hanks nervous and sweating – Giles bursts into laughter as Hank edges uneasily

GILES
Relax

Giles necks the whiskey shot

GILES
I am…quite a lot actually

CUT TO.

EXT – ROADSIDE – NIGHT

Glory grabs Buffy again and tosses her into a parked jeep.

In pain, Buffy struggles to her feet and storms towards Glory

BUFFY
You have no idea how much you just pissed me off – bitch

GLORY
I think I can guess

Glory goes to punch Buffy – Buffy blocks it and head butts Glory before doing a back flip and catching Glory’s chin on her foot. Buffy sprints back to the car, Glory chasing her

When she gets there she pops the hood and grabs the Scythe but Glory’s gone…

She looks around frantically but nothing – just scared [people] staring back at her

KENNEDY
Buffy?

Buffy spins to see Kennedy walking towards her holding a tire

BUFFY
W…Kennedy?

KENNEDY
The bus brown down on the other side of the border – I had to get a spare from the garage

Kennedy indicates the store at the side of the road

KENNEDY
What happened to your face?

BUFFY
Do you have a phone on you?

KENNEDY
Who do you need to call?

BUFFY
I need Willow to take the other girls back to Sunnydale – you’re coming to Los Angeles with me

KENNEDY
I don’t understand

BUFFY
You will

CUT TO.

INT – HIGHSCHOOL – NIGHT

Willow is sat at her desk again, marking papers

WILLOW
Stupid Principal Wood and his stupid CCTV!

ROBIN
I’m sat directly opposite you

WILLOW
So?

ROBIN
Wow. I guess the students really are rubbing off on you

WILLOW
Sorry it’s just…Tara’s back and everything I just wanted to

ROBIN
Look, it’s Friday in…four days you can mark the papers at the weekend just don’t make a habit of this okay

WILLOW
No, it’s okay I’ll do them now

ROBIN
Willow…

WILLOW
Thanks

ROBIN
It’s all good. I wanted to get home myself, I just figured I’d punish you for getting Dawn to lie again – lying doesn’t pay off. You know how easy it is to get around me if you just whimper a while

WILLOW
I know, I mean – thanks

The two of the begin walking to the exit as the door slams shut

WILLOW
That’s…

Willow turns round – all the doors down the corridor shut.

ROBIN
Okay…

Both look around as the lights go down

ROBIN
Not loving this too much

CUT TO.

INT – BAR – NIGHT

Giles is now, in a word, drunk.

He sits staring at Hank laughing

GILES
You still think you can claim yourself as their father?

HANK
Legally yes

GILES
Morally? No wait – you don’t have that word in your vocabulary

HANK
I don’t have to listen to this – I’m leaving

GILES
See, I don’t think you are

Giles grabs Hank and pins him up against the wall

GILES
Not until I’ve said what I came to say

END OF PART THREE

INT – XANDERS – NIGHT

Xander comes out of the bathroom to a lonely Tara

XANDER
Sorry about that – Nancy can’t handle her drink and…where’s Andrew?

TARA
He got scared and ran to his room

XANDER
Oh well…hope you had a good night

TARA
It was n-nice

XANDER
Right like the plague, just with more vomit

TARA
Xander, it was nice meeting her she’s a lot like A…
(beat)
A n-nice p-person

XANDER
Right…

TARA
I think it’s time to call it a night

XANDER
You want me to call you a cab?

TARA
No it’s okay I…seeing you two together made me think a little, I have to see Willow

CUT TO.

INT – BAR – NIGHT

GILES
Now, I believe the trouble you’ve caused these past two months has been none to pleasing to either of my girls

HANK
Your girls? What are you some kind of perve?

Giles pushes his arm against Hanks neck

GILES
I’ll thank you to shut up while I’m threatening you

Hanks face is going red as Giles continues

GILES
Now there’s two ways we can play this game of yours…my way or the one where you sensibly leave town and actually get to walk again

Hank is trying to mumble words as his face gets redder, Giles is pushing harder as suddenly Hank forces him away and clutches his chest

GILES
Mr. Summers…

Hank falls against the table before hitting the ground, still clutching his chest

CUT TO.

EXT – ROADSIDE – NIGHT

Buffy and Kennedy are marching toward the van

BUFFY
Where’s Faith?

KENNEDY
She’s got another van – they were right behind us

BUFFY
Call her, tell her to…

Buffy swings the doors open, all eight slayers have been torn to pieces

BUFFY
Changing the tire?

Buffy turns and gives Kennedy a cold stare, Kennedy doesn’t get it as she looks into the van in horror

To Be Continued…

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[> Subject: Ooh. Go Giles


Author:
MTsFan
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Date Posted: 08:52:34 12/31/03 Wed

He wouldn't have to be drunk to refer to the Summers sisters as "My girls" and I can understand the feeling you're putting into him.

Drat. I thought Hank was Glory's host. It would have explained his need for Dawn. Of course, that might not be a heart attack he's having, it could be Glory trying to get out. But then, Glory was elsewhere gutting Slayers.

It works the way you make Kennedy the prime suspect now. I like the way this story is staying together as new threads, eg. Tara, are added. Keep it up.


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