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Date Posted: 19:30:06 01/27/03 Mon
Author: Madison
Subject: My Adventures in ... What? (warning, language, etc)

It would be most helpful if someone could go over the first part of my story. I need help identifing inconsistencies, areas that are not clear, and general proofreading. Thanks heaps!!

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[> SORRY!!! having tech. difficulties. will post story ASAP -- Madison, 19:41:56 01/27/03 Mon


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